应用文写作复习之活动报道类课件高考英语一轮复习

AReport高考应用文写作之活动报道

（真题赏析）（审题与文章结构）（典型错误）（常用语料）一.报道真题赏析题型特点：新闻、活动报道的特点是以事实为依据，把所发生的事情记述下来，为期刊投稿。

假定你是李华，是你校英文报的记者。上周六你校学生会主办了一场英语经典作品朗诵比赛。请你以“AnEnglishRecitationCompetition”为题写一篇英文报道，内容包括：1.参赛选手；2.比赛过程；3.活动意义。注意:1.写作词数应为100左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。1.（2024年新高考英语冲刺复习）AnEnglishRecitationCompetition

ToencourageusstudentstoappreciateEnglishculture,lastSaturday,anEnglishClassicRecitation

Competitionwasheldbyourschoolatthelecturehall.Representativesofeachclasstookanactivepartinthecompetition.ParticipantswererequiredtoreciteanEnglishclassicwithin5minutes.Manyclassicworkswererecited,amongwhichpoemswerethemostpopularchoice.Afterfiercecompetitionthefirst8winnerswerechosenandgivenprizes.Thecompetition

washighlyspokenofbecausenotonlydiditenrichourschoollife,butalsoofferedawonderfulopportunityforustohaveabetterunderstandingofEnglishclassics.1.（2022年浙江·校联考一模）假定你是李华，上周六你校举办了一场歌咏比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.参加人员；2.比赛情况；3.活动评价。ASingingCompetition________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

ASingingCompetitionLastSaturday,ourschoolorganizedasingingcompetition.Itwasasunnydaywhichwassuitableforanoutdooractivity.Allthestudentsandteachersinourschooltookpartinit,whichlastedfor3hours.Toourexcitement,therewere40participantscompetingwitheachother,including6teachers.Itwasourheadmasterwhopresentedtheawardstothewinners.Throughthiscompetition,notonlydidwegainthecouragebutalsowelearnedhowtotakechancesandgainconfidence.Weallthinkitmeaningfulandnecessarytoholdsuchanactivity.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就上周六学校举办的歌咏比赛，为学校写一篇英文报道。第一步：词汇积累举办：organize→hold/launch

参加：takepartin→participatein愉快：excitement→amazement

比赛：competition→match第二步：句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：LastSaturday,ourschoolorganizedasingingcompetition.拓展句：LastSaturday,ourschoolorganizedasingingcompetition,whichwasgreatlyinteresting.第三步：高分句式【高分句型1】

Allthestudentsandteachersinourschooltookpartinit,whichlastedfor3hours运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Itwasourheadmasterwhopresentedtheawardstothewinners.（运用了强调句结构）2.（2023年江苏统考一模）假定你是李华，上周你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动反响。ATraditionalChineseCultureWeek________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

ATraditionalChineseCultureWeekAtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschooltoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.Duringthecampaign,westudentswereencouragedtoparticipateinnumerousculturalactivities,includingsingingChinesefolksongs,attendingChinesecalligraphyclassesandintroducingtraditionalChinesefestivals.Everyoneofuschoseonetoourtasteandweenjoyedourselvesverymuch.Thecampaignwasasuccessandhasgainedinpopularityamongusstudents,whichwillencourageustofurtherspreadChinesecultureinfuture.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为上周你校举办的中国传统文化周活动写一篇报道，内容包括：活动目的；活动内容；活动反响。第一步：词汇积累增加：enhance→boost

参加：participatein→takepartin许多：numerous→massesof

获得：gained→obtained第二步：句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：AtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschooltoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.拓展句：AtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschool,whosepurposewastoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.第三步：高分句式[高分句型1]Duringthecampaign,westudentswereencouragedtoparticipateinnumerousculturalactivities,includingsingingChinesefolksongs,attendingChinesecalligraphyclassesandintroducingtraditionalChinesefestivals.(运用了非谓语动词作宾语)[高分句型2]Thecampaignwasasuccessandhasgainedinpopularityamongusstudents,whichwillencourageustofurtherspreadChinesecultureinfuture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)3.（2022年山东潍坊·统考高三期末）假定你是李华，你校近期举行了秋冬季体育运动会。请为你校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.介绍运动会的情况；2.你的感受。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asscheduled,ourannualsportmeetingwasheldlasttoday.Wewenttothecampustowatchthefinalofthe4

x100-meterrelay.SoextraordinarywastheexperiencethatIwouldneverforget.Ihadneverimaginedthattheatmosphereatasportseventcouldbesointense.Therunnersstrainedtorunasfastastheycould,whiletryingnottodroptheirbatonsatthechange.IwasalsocaughtupintheexcitementandcheeredsohardthatIthoughtmylungswouldburst!Itwassowonderfultobepartofthissportingmoment.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校近期举行了秋冬季体育运动会。请为你校英文报写一篇报道。第一步：词汇积累举办、主办：hold→host

按计划：asscheduled→asplanned

不可思议的：extraordinary→amazing

努力：strain→strive第二步：句式拓展简单句变复杂句原句：Asscheduled,ourannualsportmeetingwasheldlasttoday.

拓展句：Asscheduled,ourannualsportmeetingwasheldlasttoday,whichturnedouttobeahugesuccess.第三步：高分句式【高分句型1】SoextraordinarywastheexperiencethatIwouldneverforget.(运用了so+adj.+that引导的结果状语从句和部分倒装)【高分句型2】Ihadneverimaginedthattheatmosphereatasportseventcouldbesointense.(that引导的宾语从句)4.（2022年全国·模拟）假定你是李华，你所在的学校上周末成功举办了一场有关阅读英文诗歌的活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道介绍此项活动，内容包括：活动目的2.活动内容；3.活动的意义。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Todevelopstudents’interestinlearningEnglish,anactivityaboutreadingEnglishpoemswassuccessfullyheldinthelecturehallofourschoollastweek.Duringtheactivity,studentswereinvitedtosharetheideasoftheEnglishpoemstheyhadreadandwhattheyhadgotfromreadingthem.Someofthestudentsevenrecitedbeautifulsentences,whichleftadeepimpressiononothers.Aftertheactivity,morestudentshadastrongdesiretoreadEnglishpoems.Allinall,itwasameaningfulandimpressiveactivity.【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生用英文写一篇报道介绍上周末学校举办的一场有关阅读英文诗歌的活动。第一步：词汇积累邀请：invite→ask

观点：idea→opinion

获得：get→gain

总之：allinall→inaword2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Allinall,itwasameaningfulandimpressiveactivity.拓展句：Allinall,itwasameaningfulandimpressiveactivity,whichmadeuslearnalotofknowledge.第三步：高分句式[高分句型1]Duringtheactivity,studentswereinvitedtosharetheideasoftheEnglishpoemstheyhadreadandwhattheyhadgotfromreadingthem.(省略了that的定语从句，以及what引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Someofthestudentsevenrecitedbeautifulsentences,whichleftadeepimpressiononothers.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)5.（2023年新疆·统考一模）假定你是李华，你们学校上周末举办了校园艺术节活动，请你为学校广播台写一篇报道。内容包括：1.时间、地点;活动安排;3.活动意义。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ourschoollaunchedanartshowentitled“TheMostBeautifulCampusArt”lastweekend,towhichwestudentsandallteachingstaffgaveanactiveresponseaswellasabigapplause.Theartworkssubmittedassumedinvariousformsofphotos,paintings,handcraftsandcalligraphyworks.Allofthemnotonlypresentedthebeautyofintelligenceanddiligencebutalsoreflectedstudents’aestheticconsciousness.Theheadmasterthoughthighlyoftheworks,admittingthatitwasasymbolofnewyouth’senergeticstyle.Theartshowhasfar-reachinginfluence,throughwhichstudentscanlearnmoreaboutChineseculture.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校广播台写一篇报道，内容包括校园艺术节活动的时间、地点，活动的安排以及意义。第一步：词汇积累举行：launch→hold除此之外，还……：aswellas→apartfrom呈现，展示：present→show意识：consciousness→awareness第二步：句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Theartworkssubmittedassumedinvariousformsofphotos,paintings,handcraftsandcalligraphyworks.拓展句：Theartworkswhichweresubmittedassumedinvariousformsofphotos,paintings,handcraftsandcalligraphyworks.第三步：高分句式【高分句型1】Ourschoollaunchedanartshowentitled“TheMostBeautifulCampusArt”lastweekend,towhichwestudentsandallteachingstaffgaveanactiveresponseaswellasabigapplause.（运用了过去分词短语作定语和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Theheadmasterthoughthighlyoftheworks,admittingthatitwasasymbolofnewyouth’senergeticstyle.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）二.审题与文章结构

假如你是李华，上周你班举办了英文歌曲演唱大赛。请你为校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.时间、地点；2.比赛情况；3.活动反响。注意：1．写作词数应为100左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。三.典型错误体裁错误，写成了书信的格式。不明白报道是什么，以为自己真的是记者去做报道。开头多写成了Helloeveryone，I’mLihua.第一段结尾写成，Letmeintroduceittoyou；结尾写成Thanksforlistening!/Lookingforwardtoyourreply./Howaboutyou?/Yours,Lihua.等；要点详略判断错误，第一段大篇幅写活动目的；第二段活动情况写的不详细；第三段活动反响或活动意义的拓展少且不够深入；语法错误，如ln/At/On(the)lastweek;

时态错误,没用过去时；时间地点类表达多语病。句型简单，少高级句型；未描写具体比赛情况，而去描写其他无关活动

7.写歌曲名错误地用了书名号8.单词拼写错误严重；冠词错误使用9.段首不空格，字数不够字迹潦草，看不清楚，10.文中出现真实学校名，班级名，甚至老师名；

AnEnglishSongSingingCompetition

活动目的ToarouseourinterestinEnglish,时间、地点ourclassheldanEnglishsongsingingcompetitioninourclassroomlastweek.参与者Allstudentstookanactivepartinthecompetitioningroups.

活动过程/情况Thecompetitionstartedat7p.m.andlastedtwohours.StudentsfromeachgroupwererequiredtosingtheirfavoriteEnglishsongwithin5minutes.Theirwonderfulperformancesmadeallofusthrilled.Afterheatedcompetition,thefirst3winnerswerechosenandgivenprizes.

活动评价/意义Theactivitywashighlyspokenofbecausenotonlydiditenrichourschoollife,butitalsodevelopedourofloveforEnglish,evokingourloveforEnglishculture.四.报道特点及写作步骤题型特点：新闻、活动报道的特点是以事实为依据，把所发生的事情记述下来。写作思路与步骤：第一步：事件发生的目的，时间、地点、主办方和参与者。第二步：事件的整个过程第三步：对事件的评价或者自身的感悟。1.Aimedat活动目的,a/an活动名称organizedby主办方,whichwas/isthemedby/on活动主题willbe/was/isbeingheldat/in活动地点、活动时间。

仿写：为了鼓励学生们走近大自然，我们学校在9月20日组织了一次以自然为主题的登黄山活动。1.Aimedatencouragingthestudentstogetclosetonature,amountain-climbingactivityorganizedbyourschool,whichwasthemedonnaturewasheldinMount.Huangshanonseptember20th.

2.Withtheaimofgettingclosetonature,amountain-climbingactivitythemednaturewasorganizedbyourschoolonseptember20thinMount.Huangshan,attractingmanypeople’swide-spreadattention.【Para1句式】目的、时间、地点、事件、主办方、参加者活动目的: （左栏）callon号召/appealto呼吁morestudentsto......encouragestudentsto... spreadtheawareness意识/cultureof... raise提高/arouse激起thestudentsawarenessof.cultivate培养/nuture培养thestudentshabitof...broadenstudentshorizon/view/vision视野

enablestudentstohaveabetter/deeper

understandingof...

promote促进mutualunderstanding/exchangeofexperiencethecharm魅力ofenrichthestudentsschool/campuslifeignite点燃/kindle点燃/fuel燃烧/stimulate刺激studentsenthusiasm热情/passion热情/interestin...

活动目的: （右栏）strengthen/improve/boost/promote促进/enhance studentsabilityof...ignite点燃/spark激起/trigger引发students’enthusiasm/passionforraisestudents'awarenessof foster促进theconcept概念,观念ofappealto呼吁everyonetodofoster促进/promote促进/enhance加强thesenseofresponsibility

allowstudentstohaveamorecomprehensive全面的

understandingof/gaindeepinsights洞察力into

【Para2句式】2.Asscheduled,thehighly-anticipatedactivity/campaignstartedwithalecturegivenbyanexpert,makingushaveabetterunderstandingof...3.Asscheduled,thehighly-anticipated