高考英语读后续写套用语总结

高考英语读后续写套用语总结续写思维套路——因为于某个问题或者事件，角色产生的感受+反应一、情绪：凤头消极情绪

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独立主格Nightapproaching,thedarkness

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）.Nightapproaching,aburst/waveofscarefloodedoverhim/sweptoverhim.eg:独立主格：Aburst/wave/floodof+情绪名词(anger/panic/sorrow=grief/embarrassment/disappointment/guilt/excitement/joy/terror=fear=scare=horror)+非谓语动词（seizing/consuming/overwhelming/floodingover=sweepingover）him,hewasunabletomoveaninch,frozen/rootedoverthere.Ahandfulofsweets；atouchofgreentea一抹清茶；acoupleofhours；arayofhope一线希望/sunlight一束阳光2.强调句Itwasthenthatherealized/sensedthathewastotallylost宾语从句,aburstofpanicoverwhelminghim独立主格.3.形容词做状语Unabletocontain/holdbackhisannoyance,hestormedoutofhisroom,slammingthedoorheavilybehindhiminanger/angrily.Tiredandhungry,hewasunabletostepanyfurther/farther,aburstofterrorfloodingoverhim独立主格.4.Onhearing（一...就...）thenews/Atthenewsthat(同位语从句)hefailedtowinaprize,hefeltheartbroken,unabletocontainhistears/sorrow=grief/disappointment.Hisheartseemedtobetornintopieces心都要碎了Themoment=instant（一...就...）heheardthenewsthathispuppywaskilledinthecaraccident,hisheartseemedtobetorn,unabletocontainhisgrief.5.非谓语做原因状语Seeingsth/Hearingsth/Sensing/Perceivingsth/Smellingsth/Thinkingof....,sbdidsthanddidsth,（with）asurgeof...wellingupinmyheart独立主格.看见某事/听见某事/感觉某事儿/闻到某事/想到某事，某人带着..的情绪做某事，做某事6.特殊句式Confused/puzzledas尽管hewas,hefollowedhisbrother’swords,openinghiscoathesitantly.hesitateAngryashewas,hedidn’tlosehistemper.二、 细节：进一步解释描写面对问题事件的纠结（伤心，后悔，害怕，愤怒，不知所措，紧张等等）1.Shestoodtheresilently,tearsstreaming/rollingdownhercheeks/face.Hestoodtheresilent,histearsswirling/ˈswɜːrlɪŋ//wellingupinhiseyes他的眼泪在眼眶里打转.Thisarticlebroughtbacksadmemoriesforme/remindedmeofthesadmemories.Eyesbegantowater.这篇文章使我想起了伤心的往事。眼睛开始流泪2.Hemurmured嘟囔小声说inalowvoice,withhiswateryeyes,“Whatiftheyteaseme?”=laughat3.无灵主语Aninnervoicetoldmethatweweresupposedtoadoptthepitiful可怜的homelessboy/dog.4.Hethoughttohimself,“IfonlyIhadn’tquarreled虚拟语气withmywife.”IfonlyIhadfollowed/takenhervaluabletips.5.Trembling/shakingwithfear/excitement因害怕/兴奋而颤抖Stampedhisfeetwithanger愤怒地跺着脚Explodewithanger勃然大怒/laughter哄堂大笑Burstintotears=burstoutcryingBurstintolaughter=burstoutlaughingHearingthefunnyjoke,weexplodedwithlaughter.捧腹大笑：笑得非常厉害，无法控制自己的笑声6.Dropped/lowered低下；hunghang耷拉hishead/eyes；raisedhishead/eyes；Nodded/shakeshook/hishead；restedhisheadon=againsthershoulder支撑依托依靠安放Herestedhischininhishands双手托着下巴andstaredatthevastskydottedwithnumerousstars.Hisheadburiedinhishands,双手抱头hewasindespair,unsureofwhattodonext/atalosswhattodonext.Placinghishandtogetherandrestingthemnearhisheadwhileclosinghiseyesmeanssleeping7.Hepacedacrosstheroomconstantlyasifsittingonpinsandneedles.如坐针毡坐立不安pacedbackandforth来回踱步Beforeexams,Ialwayshavebutterfliesinmystomach.考试前，我总是紧张不安。Hestoodthererestless焦躁不安，坐立不安Itrembledatthethoughtofhavingtomakeaspeech.我一想到得发表演讲心理就紧张到发抖。8.Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.他羞得两颊发红。Thebloodrushedtomyfacewithembarrassment我因尴尬而满脸通红9.Islammedonthebrakeshard,myheartleapingtomythroat.10.背脊一凉：Agushofshivercreptupmyspine.11.大脑一片空白：Mymindwentblank.12.我思绪万千：Variousthoughtscrowdedintomymind.13.ThememoriesofXXXcameflooding,likethenumerousscenesinanunforgettablefilm. XXX的记忆如潮水般涌来，就像一部难忘的电影中的无数场景。14.Scenesofhiscriticismandrejectionkeptflashingintomymind他批评和拒绝的场景不断在我脑海中闪现,makingsleepnearlyimpossibleasItossedandturned翻来覆去eachnight每晚辗转反侧.三、转折：个人的努力或借助外界1.Gatheringmycourage/strength,Icouldn’twaittosaysorrytoher,=apologizetoher.makeanapologytosb2XX在她脑海中闪现XXflash(ed)intohermind激发某人做某事的坚强意志 fuelsb'sstrongwilltodosth 战胜她面前的挑战 conquerthechallengesbeforeher努力做某事 endeavourtodosth 调整呼吸 adjustone'sbreath鼓起了全部勇气 pluckedupallhercourage4.在这学年剩下的时间里，我全身心地投入到学习中Idevoted/dedicatedmyselfcompletelytomystudyfortherestoftheschoolyear.5母亲拥抱着我，低声安慰我Mymotherhuggedmefirmly/tightly,whisperinginmyeartocomfortme.他走到她面前，帮她擦去脸上的泪水6父亲拍着我的肩膀，鼓励我永远不要放弃自己的梦想Pattingmeontheshoulder,myfatherencouragedmenevertogiveupmydreams四、 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰1.Iwasfilled/consumed/overwhelmedwithgratitudeformyparents.充满了2.Wearingasweetsmileonhisface,hesteppedovertome.面带笑容3.Abrightsmileappearedon/spreadacrosshisface.他脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。4.Herfacelitup/brightened/glowedwhenIhandedherthepresent.无比喜悦Onarrivinghome,hebreathedasighofrelief.=hefeltrelieved.如释重负松了一口气5.Onspottingthedog，heseemedtoseearayofhope，attemptingtomovetowardsitinstantly.Onthespot=scene6.Herheartbegantobeatwildly/fastthemoment/instantsheheardthenews.7.Theearliergloom早先的阴霾wasreplacedby/gavewaytothewarmthofsharedstoriesandlaughter.五、失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题1.Unluckily=unfortunately,ButinvainButwithoutsuccessButnouseHelayinbed,wonderingwhattodonext?/unsureofwhattodo/atalosswhattodo.2.Shelowered/droppedherhead,wonderinghowtohide/maskherinnerembarrassment/nervousness/guilt.不知道如何掩饰内心的尴尬。3.Hebithislips,notknowingwheretoresthishands.他咬着嘴唇，不知道把手放在哪里。BitebitbittenShedroppedherheadandstared/peered/gazedatherfeet,hopingnobodywouldnoticehowembarrassedshewasandhavingnocouragetolookintoherteacher’seyes.4.cameintosight/viewThemoment/instant/minuteIarrivedhome,abrand-newcarcameintosight.withhiseyesfocused/fixedonthescreenWithhiseyesgluedto完全被吸引了thegames,hefailedtonoticemeenterhisstudy.六、新法：突然有了一个想法（说明这个想法）1.Itoccurredto=cameto/hit/struckmethathehadsuchabigfamilytosupport/providefor.Agoodideaoccurred=cameto/hit/struckmethatIwouldhelp/aidmumwiththehouseworkAnideaflashedacross/intohismindthat.......他脑子里闪过一个念头。Agoodideaformedinhismind.他脑中有了一个主意。AgoodideahitmethatIwoulddoactsofkindnessinthenursinghome疗养院2.Hisprofound耐人寻味深刻speech/wordswasinspiringandIwasdeeplymoved/touched.他的发言鼓舞人心，让我很受触动Herencouragementflashedintomymind/crowdedinmymindWithhisencouragementechoing萦绕/crowdinginmymind,Ikeptinagoodstateofmindandperformedprettywellinthespeech.3.Atthatmoment,hecouldhardlyhide/maskhisinnerguilt/embarrassment.Afterhesitatingforawhile,hespontaneously自发地，不由自主地；自然地rose/arosefromhisseatslowlyandslippedoutoftheroomsecretly,feelinghisfaceburning.内疚4.Hehurriedtothesupermarket,onlytofinditwasclosedHehurriedtothebookingoffice,onlytobetoldtheticketshadbeensoldout.5.Seeingtheirtaskfinishedgavethemasense/feelingofsatisfaction.看到任务完成了，他们感到很满意。Shecouldn'tconceal/hide/masktheexcitementandrushedhometotellhermotherthegoodnews.她掩饰不住兴奋，急忙回家告诉母亲这个好消息Theymadethedealwithanexchangeofsmiles.他们达成协议，相视一笑。Hewokeupthatmorningwithafeelingofexcitement.他一起床就感到很兴奋。Everytimewementioned/referredtothefunnyincidentsofthejourney，apleasantsmilewouldspreadover/acrossMom'sface.每次提到旅途中的趣事，妈妈的脸上就会浮现出愉快的笑容七、 结局：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折以及升华主题1.Shortly=soon=Beforelong,,afterwards后来afterthatandthenSureenough果然Beforelongtheyspottedanappropriate/properbranchforawalkingstick/cane.2.Hecametorealizethatitwasdifficulttopleaseeverybody.众口难调。3.掌声雷动：Aburstofthunderousapplauseeruptedfromstandingaudience.4.梦想的翅膀渐渐展开：Thewingofmydreamgraduallyunfolded.5.sthservedasareminderofhope 某事成为了希望的提醒6.TheJohnsonfamily'sapplepiewouldnowbeapartofWillowCreek'sHarvestFestivallegacy,atestament[ˈtestəmənt]证明;证据totheirdedicationandthespiritofthecommunity.6.UntilthendidIrealizethatBrainwasmyguardianangeltoo,guardingmewithhistoleranceandforgiveness.续写微技能:无灵主语+排比+举例 衔接方法1·社区见证了一系列暖心的变化。社区居民积极响应，为义卖捐赠物品。社区见证了更多的志愿者加入到义卖的准备和现场工作中。1.Thecommunitywitnessedaseriesofheartwarmingchanges.Thecommunitywitnessedresidentsrespondingactivelyanddonatingitemsforthecharitysale.Thecommunitywitnessedmorevolunteersjoininginthepreparationandon-siteworkofthecharitysale.2.Outside,thewindrustledthetrees,asifwhispering,“Magiclivesinthenameswegivewithlove”窗外树影婆娑，仿佛风在呢喃："魔法就藏在我们以爱赐予的名字里。".续写微技能:环境描写+对比 衔接方法2 阳光照耀着社区的每一个角落。微风轻轻地吹着，绿树摇曳着。当时，整个社区都沉浸在温暖与和谐之中，邻里之间的互动和交流增多了。.Thesunlightshoneonevery