Unit2SportsandFitness高考写作单元训练二课件-高三英语北师大版

高考写作单元训练二UNIT2

SPORTSANDFITNESS一文本叙述Step1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)1.保罗是我们学校篮球队——狮子队的成员，他非常热爱篮球。Paul，wholikedbasketballverymuch，______________________________—TheLions．2.保罗的身高只有一米六！那就意味着他必须多加练习。Paulwasonly1.6metrestall，which__________________________．3.虽然我们都知道保罗有真正的技术，但是他通常是替补队员。Thoughallofusknewhehadrealskills，he________________________．wasonourschoolbasketballteammeanthehadtopractisemorewasusuallyareplacement一文本叙述Step1．要点提示(利用本单元知识补全所给英文句子)4.上周，我们对阵熊队，这个本赛季战绩完美的球队。Lastweek，we_____________TheBears，whoserecordthisseasonhadbeenperfect．5.一个球员和我撞在了一起。我的膝盖很疼。I____________aplayerandmykneehurtbadly．6.我不能再打球了。因此，教练让保罗代替我，并且告诉他不要让我们失望。Icouldn'tplayanymore，sothecoachletPaulreplacemeandtoldhimnotto___________．7.保罗投进了一个又一个的球，他的努力得到了回报——最后我们队以两分的优势赢了。Paulmadeshotaftershot，andhishardwork_________—ourteamhad________________________atlast．competedwithcrashedintoletusdownpaidoffwonbytwopoints一文本叙述Step2．衔接成文(利用恰当的过渡衔接词语连句成篇)Paul，wholikedbasketballverymuch，wasonourschoolbasketballteam—TheLions．However，Paulwasonly1.6metrestall，whichmeanthehadtopractisemore．Thoughallofusknewhehadrealskills，hewasusuallyareplacement．Lastweek，wecompetedwithTheBears，whoserecordthisseasonhadbeenperfect．Suddenly，Icrashedintoaplayerandmykneehurtbadly．Icouldn'tplayanymore，sothecoachletPaulreplacemeandtoldhimnottoletusdown．Toeveryone'ssurprise，Paulmadeshotaftershot，andhishardworkpaidoff—ourteamhadwonbytwopointsatlast．二话题微写作——场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)续写微情景Step1．第一步

单句写作1.我很清楚地知道运动的意义在于锻炼毅力、培养我们良好的习惯和提高团队精神。(developourgoodhabits;improveourteamspirit)Iknowverywellthatthemeaningofsportsliesin

________.2.但是就在我因为终点线就在眼前而松了一口气的时候,我的自行车轮胎打滑了,我从自行车上摔倒在地。(beinsight;getrelieved;falloff)Butjust

______,mybiketireskiddedandI

mybike.

practicingperseverance,developingourgoodhabitsandimprovingourteamspiritasIgotrelievedthatthefinishlinewasinsightfelloff

二话题微写作——场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)续写微情景Step1．单句写作3.那一刻我忘记了运动的意义是使我们受益,取而代之的是,我感到满心的沮丧和失望。(benefit;instead)AtthatmomentIforgotthatthepurposeofsportswas

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,Ifeltfulloffrustrationanddisappointment.4.就在我要放弃之时,我的对手从他的自行车上跳下来,将我扶起来,并对我说了一声“加油!”。(giveup;pickup)Just

,myopponentjumpeddownfromhisbike,

andsaid“Comeon!”

tobenefitusInstead

asIwasabouttogiveuppickedmeup二话题微写作——场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)续写微情景Step2．句式升级1.用notonly...butalso...将句1升级Iknowverywellthatthemeaningofsportslies

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2.用beonthepointofdoing...when...句式改写句4

myopponentjumpeddownfromhisbike,pickedmeupandsaid“Comeon!”

notonlyinpracticingperseveranceanddevelopingourgoodhabitsbutalsoinimprovingourteamspiritIwasonthepointofgivingupwhen二话题微写作——场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)续写微情景Step3．连句成篇(将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文)

Iknowverywellthatthemeaningofsportsliesnotonlyinpracticingperseveranceanddevelopingourgoodhabitsbutalsoinimprovingourteamspirit.ButjustasIgotrelievedthatthefinishlinewasinsight,mybiketireskiddedandIfelloffmybike.AtthatmomentIforgotthatthepurposeofsportswastobenefitus.Instead,Ifeltfulloffrustrationanddisappointment.Iwasonthepointofgivingupwhenmyopponentjumpeddownfromhisbike,pickedmeupandsaid“Comeon!”三续写能力--片段描述Step1．储备词汇(记牢本单元可用于描写的词汇)情感描写prefer；desire；disappointment；cheerup；satisfaction；amazed；befedupwith动作描写gather；pack；clap；bounce；bite；defend三续写能力--片段描述Step2续写练笔(完成下面的续写片段并背诵)

汤姆受够了他母亲无尽的抱怨。他似乎永远得不到母亲的满意。他的朋友杰里渴望学滑板，而他的母亲更喜欢他学体操。当汤姆建议出门旅游散心时，杰里高兴起来，拍着手跳起来。他们每个人都打包了一些行李，在一棵大树下集合。一只狗突然向他们冲过来时他们很惊讶。害怕被咬，他们用能拿到的所有东西来保护自己。过了一会，他们就跑回家去了。Tom______________theendlesscomplaintsofhismother．Itseemedthathecouldnever______________________________．HisfriendJerry______________toskateboardwhilehismother_______________________gymnastics．WhenTomsuggestedatripforrelaxation，Jerry______________________________________________________．Theyeach__________________________________________________．Theywere_________whenadogsuddenlyrushedtothem．_____________________________________________witheverythingtheycouldget．Afterawhile，theyranbackhome．

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