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2026届广州高三8月调研考英语试题阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheThompsonhousewasalwaysnoisybeforeschool(孩子们要读懂句子内在含义啊,其实和你的生活是一样的).Everymorning,twelveyearoldMiadidherhairatthekitchentable,herfingersmovingquickly(独立主格)asshetriedtoignoretheregular“clangclangclang"besideher.HerlittlebrotherLeo,hischeeksstillsoftwithsleep(独立主格刻画人物),washittinghisspoononhisbowllikeabell.“Stopit!"Miasaid,throwingpotatochipsathim(现在分词短语做伴随动作).Asshedid,thenecklacearoundherneckmovedalittle.Thenecklace,madeofshells(过去分词短语做后置定语),washermostlovedthingagiftfromGrandmabeforeshepassedaway(赋予特殊意义,伏笔).Miavaluedthisnecklacedearly.SherememberedhowGrandmahadhandpickedeachshellduringtheirlasttiptothebeach.“Thisroundshellmeanspatience,"GrandmahadwhisperedstorieswhileplacingitaroundMia'sneck.Rightnow,Mianeededallthepatience(再一次暗示冲突)shecouldget.Asthedayswentby,Miafoundherselfstrugglinglesstokeepherpatience.Leo'snoisyhabits,thoughstillbothersome,didn'tseemasannoyingasbefore.Thereweremomentswhenshe'dcatchhimmakingfunnyfacesordancingaroundtomusiconlyshecouldhear.Shewouldrollhereyes,butdeepdown,apartofhersmiled.Oneafternoon,whilesittingtogetheronthesofa,Leoshylyaskedaboutthenecklace.“Whydoyouloveitsomuch?"hewhispered.MiathentoldhimthestoryofGrandmaandthespecialmeaningofeachshell.Foramoment,Leolookedthoughtful,andMiahopedheunderstoodhowmuchthenecklacemeanttoher.Shewishedhewouldbemorecareful(虚拟语气),butlittledidsheknow(倒装句),thatwishwasabouttobetested(再一次给与暗示).Afteratwodaysummercamp,MiacamehomeandfoundLeolyingonherbedroomfloor,herboxturned(独立主格表示状态).“Whatareyoudoing?!"sheshouted.Leojumpedsee...Ijustwantedtosee..."Thenecklacefellfromhishand,andthestringbroke.Theshellsdroppedtothefloorlikesmallwhiteteeth,someofthembrokenintoseveralparts(独立主格).注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Mia'sheartsank.Paragraph2:Thenextmorning,Miawassurprisedtofindaboxonherdesk.

2026届广州高三8月调研考英语试题阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。her.Hermpsonhousewasalwaysnoisybeforeschool.Everymorning,twelveyearoldMiadidherhairatthekitchentable,herfingersmovingquicklyasshetriedtoignoretheregular“clangclangclang"besideher.HerlittlebrotherLeo,hischeeksstillsoftwithsleep,washittinghisspoononhisbowllikeabell.“Stopit!"Miasaid,throwingpotatochipsathim.Asshedid,thenecklace(项链)aroundherneckmovedalittle.Thenecklace,madeofshells(贝壳),washermostlovedthingagiftfromGrandmabeforeshepassedaway.Miavaluedthisnecklacedearly.SherememberedhowGrandmahadhandpickedeachshellduringtheirlasttiptothebeach.“Thisroundshellmeanspatience,"GrandmahadwhisperedstorieswhileplacingitaroundMia'sneck,Rightnow,Mianeededallthepatienceshecouldget.smiled.Onecareful.butMiafoundherselfstrugglinglesstokeepherpatience.Leo'snoisyhabits,thoughstillbothersome,didn'tseemasannoyingasbefore.Thereweremomentswhenshe'dcatchhimmakingfunnyfacesordancingaroundtomusiconlyshecouldhear.Shewouldrollhereyes,butdeepdown,apartofhersmiled.Oneafternoon,whilesittingtogetheronthesofa,Leoshylyaskedaboutthenecklace.“Whydoyouloveitsomuch?"hewhispered.MiathentoldhimthestoryofGrandmaandthespecialmeaningofeachshell.Foramoment,Leolookedthoughtful,andMiahopedheunderstoodhowmuchthenecklacemeanttoher.Shewishedhewouldbemorecareful.butlittledidsheknow,thatwishwasabouttobetested.see...atwodaysummercamp,MiacamehomeandfoundLeolyingonherbedroomfloor,herboxturned“Whatareyoudoing?!"sheshouted.Leojumped.“IIjustwantedtosee..."Thenecklacefellfromhishand,andthestringbroke.Theshellsdroppedtothefloorlikesmallwhiteteeth,someofthembrokenintoseveralparts.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Mia'sheartsank.Paragraph2:Thenextmorning,Miawassurprisedtofindaboxonherdesk.

1.文章分类与续写思路分析文章类型:

家庭兄妹情感+成长叙事类记叙文。这类读后续写通常聚焦于家庭成员之间的冲突、理解与和解,以及主人公在事件中的情感变化与个人成长。构思思路与布局:情感主线:

紧扣“耐心”与“理解”这一核心主题。续写应围绕Mia的愤怒、伤心到最终原谅弟弟的情感转变过程,以及Leo的愧疚与补救行为展开。情节发展:

第一段应详细描写Mia看到项链破碎时的震惊、愤怒和极度伤心,以及Leo的反应(害怕、愧疚、哭泣)。第二段应实现转折,描写Leo的补救行为(例如,用零花钱买新绳子,尝试修复,附上道歉信),最终以Mia的理解、原谅和情感升华(真正理解了奶奶关于“耐心”的教导)结尾。框架提炼:段落1(承接“Mia'sheartsank”):

详细的外部动作、神态描写(愣住、颤抖)→内部心理描写(愤怒、伤心、回忆奶奶)→外部冲突爆发(对Leo吼叫)→Leo的反应(害怕、道歉、哭泣)→环境渲染(寂静,与开头的吵闹对比)。morning...enextmorning...”):

发现礼物(盒子)的疑惑→打开盒子的过程(细致动作描写)→看到被修复的项链和道歉信的惊讶与感动→情感转变(理解、原谅)→与弟弟的和解(对话、拥抱)→主题升华(真正领悟“耐心”的含义)。实施要点:使用丰富的感官和细节描写(视觉:破碎的贝壳、弟弟的眼泪;听觉:贝壳落地的声音、寂静;触觉:颤抖的手拿起修复的项链)。心理描写与动作描写相结合,外化情感。对话要符合人物年龄和性格(Mia从愤怒到温柔,Leo怯懦而真诚)。续写要注意承接原文的事项:人物性格一致性:

Mia珍爱家人但易怒缺乏耐心,但有所变化,Leo年幼、吵闹但本性善良。续写中Mia的愤怒应合理,但最终不应过度惩罚Leo;Leo的行为应体现他的愧疚和弥补的诚意。核心物品:

“贝壳项链”是贯穿全文的线索,必须重点描写其破碎和修复后的状态。伏笔与呼应:

必须呼应奶奶关于“耐心”的教导(“Thisroundshellmeanspatience”),这是解决冲突的关键和主题升华的点。开头语衔接:

第一段必须立刻接上“Mia'sheartsank”这个瞬间,描写她接下来的反应。第二段必须从“发现盒子”开始。逻辑合理:

弟弟修复项链的过程可能很粗糙,符合其年龄特征,不必完美无缺,重在心意。积极导向:

高考续写通常要求结局温暖、积极,体现成长与和解。巧妙设计续写内容:象征手法:

修复后的项链可以不再是原来的完美样子,但有新的含义,象征着破裂后修复的亲情,比之前更坚固。细节打动人心:

描写Leo如何用笨拙的方式(可能用光了零花钱,手被胶水粘住)努力修复,并附上一张充满拼写错误的道歉纸条。循环呼应:

文章开头是吵闹的早晨,结尾可以是一个安静但充满温馨的早晨,形成对比,突出变化。2.故事山模式与分析故事山模式:开端(Exposition):

介绍Thompson家喧闹的早晨,Mia和Leo的性格特点,以及项链的由来和重要性。发展(RisingAction):

Mia对Leo的吵闹逐渐变得有耐心,并向他分享项链的故事,希望他能小心。Leo的好奇心被勾起。高潮(Climax):

Mia发现Leo弄断了项链,贝壳散落破碎。回落(FallingAction):

Mia的震惊与愤怒,Leo的恐惧与愧疚。(这是续写第一段的内容)结局(Resolution):

Leo尝试弥补错误,Mia选择原谅与理解,姐弟关系得到深化。(这是续写第二段的内容)衔接点、心情、动作、转折点、伏笔、冲突点、隐含线索与解决方案:分析角度内容原文反应句人物刻画Mia:珍视亲情(奶奶的礼物),对弟弟缺乏耐心但内心柔软,情绪波动较大。Leo:年幼、好奇、活泼好动,行为无心但可能造成破坏。“Miavaluedthisnecklacedearly.”/“Shewishedhewouldbemorecareful.”/“Leo,hischeeksstillsoftwithsleep,washittinghisspoononhisbowllikeabell.”情感层次从烦躁→努力保持耐心→分享故事时的期望→震惊与愤怒(高潮)“Miafoundherselfstrugglinglesstokeepherpatience.”/“deepdown,apartofhersmiled.”/“Mia'sheartsank.”关键情节点1.Leo日常吵闹。2.Mia讲述项链故事。3.Leo弄断项链。floor...klacefellfromhishand,andthestringbroke.Theshellsdroppedtothefloor...”语言特色生动形象,多用比喻和感官描写,使场景栩栩如生。“likeabell”,“cheeksstillsoftwithsleep”,“likesmallwhiteteeth”关键词分析Patience(耐心):奶奶教导的核心,也是Mia需要学习和实践的品德,是解决冲突的关键。Necklace(项链):贯穿全文的线索物品,象征爱与回忆。“Thisroundshellmeanspatience,”心理描写主要通过动作和间接引语表现内心活动。understood...understood...”,“Mia'sheartsank.”动作描写动作描写具体,推动情节发展,反映人物情绪。necklace...sspoon”,“throwingpotatochips”,“thenecklace...moved”,“jumped”,“fellfromhishand”环境描写开头通过声音营造喧闹的家庭氛围,为后续冲突做铺垫。原文反应句:

“TheThompsonhousewasalwaysnoisybeforeschool.”/“theregular‘clangclangclang'besideher.”隐含主题亲情的维系需要理解和耐心;珍贵的记忆在于情感而非物品本身。整个项链的故事和奶奶的教导。情感转折Mia对Leo吵闹的态度从厌恶到逐渐接纳,这是一个重要的前期转折。弄断项链是向负面情绪的急剧转折。“didn'tseemasannoyingasbefore.”空间转换从厨房→客厅→Mia的卧室。卧室是私人空间被闯入,加剧了冲突的严重性。“kitchentable”>“sofa”>“herbedroomfloor”时间过渡“Everymorning”>“Asthedayswentby”>“Oneafternoon”>“Afteratwodaysummercamp”“Everymorning”,“Asthedayswentby”,“Oneafternoon”,“Afteratwodaysummercamp”伏笔处:Leo用勺子敲碗的“clangclangclang”声,暗示他习惯用手制造声音和探索物品,为后文他摆弄项链埋下伏笔。Mia对Leo“bemorecareful”的期望,直接暗示了后文“wishwasabouttobetested”(愿望即将被考验)。奶奶关于“耐心”的教导,为后续Mia如何应对这场冲突提供了解决方案和主题升华的方向。冲突点:外部冲突:

姐弟之间的冲突——Mia对安静和秩序的需求与Leo好奇好动的天性之间的冲突;项链的完整性与被破坏之间的冲突。内部冲突:

Mia内心的冲突——对弟弟的愤怒与对家人的爱之间的冲突;对物品的珍视与对亲情维系之间的抉择。隐含线索:奶奶的教导(“patience”)是贯穿全文的隐含情感线和解决问题的钥匙。解决方案:解决方案并非将项链修复如初,而是通过Leo真诚的弥补行动(可能是一个笨拙但充满爱意的修复尝试)和Mia最终运用“耐心”与“理解”选择原谅,从而实现情感上的和解与成长。结局的重点应从“物”的修复转向“情”的联结。3.续写描写句与高级词汇动作描写ignore...ersmovingquicklyasshetriedtoignore...

她的手指快速地移动着,试图忽略...Tearswelledupinhereyes,blurringhervision.泪水涌入她的眼眶,模糊了她的视线。

Shekneltdown,hertremblinghandsreachingforthebrokenpieces.

她跪下来,颤抖的双手伸向那些碎片。

Leoflinchedasifstruck,hissmallbodytensingup.

利奥像被打了一样畏缩了一下,他小小的身体绷紧了。

Shescoopedupthefragmentsandcradledtheminherpalm.

她捧起碎片,将它们捧在手心。

Heshuffledhisfeet,unabletomeetherfuriousgaze.

他拖着脚走路,无法迎上她愤怒的目光。

Asingletearescapedandtracedapathdownherdustycheek.

一滴眼泪逃出眼眶,在她沾满灰尘的脸颊上留下一道痕迹。

Sheslammedthedoorshut,leavingLeoaloneinthehallway.

她砰地一声关上门,把利奥独自留在走廊里。

Thenextmorning,shegingerlyliftedthelidofthesmallbox.

第二天早上,她小心翼翼地掀开小盒子的盖子。

Hehadclumsilytiedtheshellsontoanewstring,hiseffortevidentineveryknot.

他把贝壳笨拙地系在一根新绳子上,每一个结都evident(明显)着他的努力。心理描写原文:

Mia'sheartsank.

米娅的心一沉。

Awaveofcrushingdisappointmentwashedoverher.

一阵沉重的失望感席卷了她。

Fury,hotandblinding,momentarilychasedawayallhersadness.

炽热且令人眩晕的愤怒瞬间驱散了她的所有悲伤。

Shewasdrowninginaseaofregretandanger.

她沉浸在悔恨和愤怒的海洋中。

Aglimmerofhopebegantopiercethroughherdarkmood.

一丝希望的微光开始穿透她阴郁的情绪。

Herinitialragegavewaytoaprofoundsenseofloss.

她最初的愤怒让位于一种深刻的失落感。

Hewasconsumedbyguilt,wishinghecouldturnbacktime.

他被内疚吞噬,真希望自己能时光倒流。

Curiositygotthebetterofher,andshereachedforthebox.

好奇心占了上风,她伸手去拿盒子。

Herheartclenchedatthesightofhissincereapologynote.

看到他真诚的道歉信,她的心揪紧了。

Awarmthofforgivenessspreadthroughherchest,meltingtheiceofheranger.

一股宽恕的暖流涌遍她的胸膛,融化了她愤怒的冰霜。环境描写原文:

TheThompsonhousewasalwaysnoisybeforeschool.

汤普森家在上学前总是很吵闹。

Aheavysilencedescendedupontheroom,thickandunfortable.

沉重的寂静笼罩了房间,厚重而令人不适。

Thebrokenshellslayscatteredonthefloorlikefallenstars.

破碎的贝壳像坠落的星星一样散落在地板上。

Themorningsunstreamedthroughthewindow,illuminatingthesmallboxonherdesk.

晨光透过窗户照射进来,照亮了她书桌上的小盒子。

Theonlysoundwasthefainttickingoftheclockfromthelivingroom.

唯一的声音是来自客厅时钟微弱的滴答声。

Theairinthebedroomwasstillandtense,chargedwithunspokenemotions.

卧室里的空气静止而紧张,充满了未言说的情绪。

Thecheerfulchirpingofbirdsoutsidecontrastedsharplywiththegloominside.

外面鸟儿欢快的鸣叫与屋内的阴郁形成了鲜明的对比。

Agentlebreezerustledthecurtains,bringinginthescentoffreshrain.

微风轻拂窗帘,带来了新鲜雨水的气息。(暗示情绪转变)

Theemptybowlandspoonsatonthetable,asilentreminderofthemorning'schaos.

空碗和勺子放在桌子上,无声地提醒着早晨的混乱。

Thesoftglowoftheeveninglampcastlongshadowsinthequiethouse.

夜晚台灯柔和的光线在安静的房子里投下长长的影子。常见单词高级替换词常见词高级替换词(场景分类)场景/情感色彩AngryFurious

(愤怒的),

Enraged

(暴怒的),

Livid

(狂怒的)描写极度愤怒的情绪SadHeartbroken

(心碎的),

Devastated

(崩溃的),

Despondent

(绝望的)描写深度悲伤和失望ImportantCherished

(珍爱的),

Precious

(宝贵的),

Invaluable

(无价的)描写情感上珍贵的事物LookGaze

(凝视),

Glance

(一瞥),

Peer

(仔细看)更精确地描述“看”的动作SayWhisper

(低语),

Exclaim

(惊呼),

Mumble

(咕哝)更精确地描述“说”的方式地道搭配与词法解析...hermostlovedthing...搭配解析:

mostloved

是一个常见的形容词最高级搭配,比

favorite

情感更强烈、更正式,常用于描述充满情感价值的物品。...valuedthisnecklacedearly.搭配解析:

valuesomethingdearly

是固定搭配,表示“珍视某物”,程度远深于

likesomethingverymuch。dearly

在此是副词,修饰动词

valued。...handpickedeachshell...词法解析:

handpick

是由名词

hand

和动词

pick

组成的合成动词,意为“亲手挑选”,比

choosecarefully

更形象、更简洁。...hischeeksstillsoftwithsleep.搭配解析:

softwithsleep

是非常地道的表达,用

with

引出原因,生动描绘出小孩刚睡醒时脸蛋柔软、朦胧的状态。...apartofhersmiled.词法解析:

这是一种移就

(TransferredEpithet)修辞。微笑的明明是“她”,却说是“她的一部分”,生动体现了那种内心想笑但表面上又强忍住的矛盾心理。...thatwishwasabouttobetested.搭配解析:

beaboutto

表示“即将”,testawish/patience

表示“考验愿望/耐心”,这是一个预示冲突即将发生的关键搭配。...herboxturned...词法解析:

此处的

turned

是过去分词,作宾语补足语,结构为

findsth.done,表示“发现某物被...”,简洁地说明了盒子被翻开、弄乱的状态。可积累语料与生词短语Ignore

(verb)/ɪɡˈnɔːr/词意:

忽视;不理睬近义词:

disregard,overlook,paynoattentionto反义词:

notice,acknowledge,payattentionto例句:Shetriedto

ignore

theconstantnoisefromherbrother.Hefeltsadbecausehisfriends

ignored

himattheparty.Valuedearly

(verbphrase)/ˈvæljuːˈdɪərli/词意:

非常珍视近义词:

cherish,treasure,holddear反义词:

disregard,takeforgranted例句:I

value

thefriendshipbetweenus

dearly.ThisisagiftthatIwill

valuedearly

fortherestofmylife.Handpick

(verb)/ˌhændˈpɪk/词意:

亲手挑选;精选近义词:

selectcarefully,choose,singleout反义词:

assignrandomly例句:Themanager

handpicked

thebestplayersfortheteam.Grandma

handpicked

thefinestingredientsforherspecialsoup.Bothersome

(adj)/ˈbɒðəsəm/词意:

令人烦恼的;讨厌的近义词:

annoying,irritating,troublesome反义词:

pleasant,agreeable例句:The

bothersome

flykeptbuzzingaroundmyhead.Hefoundtheconstantinterruptionsvery

bothersome.Thoughtful

(adj)/ˈθɔːtfl/词意:

沉思的;体贴的;考虑周到的近义词:

pensive,considerate,reflective反义词:

thoughtless,inconsiderate例句:Leohada

thoughtful

expressiononhisfaceafterhearingthestory.(沉思的)Itwasvery

thoughtful

ofyoutobringmesomewater.(体贴的)Beaboutto

(phrasalverb)/biəˈbaʊttu/词意:

即将;正要近义词:

beonthepointof,begoingto例句:I

wasaboutto

leavewhenthephonerang.She

isaboutto

starthernewjobnextweek.

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