2026届新高考英语冲刺复习读后续写+Show,+don't+tell

2026届新高考英语冲刺复习读后续写JanetLeadinEnjoyabeautifulsong.

一壶漂泊浪迹天涯难入喉流浪太苦了你走之后酒暖回忆思念瘦

好想你，我瘦了水向东流时间怎么偷

时间过的太快了花开就一次成熟我却错过

我错过了唯一的机会Whichoneisbetter?Howtomakeyourdescriptionvivid?Show，don'ttellVersion1:

Shefeltcold.Version2:

Shepulledhercollarup,tightenedherscarf,andturnedherfaceawayfromthebitingwind.

Tell是直接陈述结论，而Show则把读者拉到你描述的场景当中，通过故事细节的展示，让读者自己得出结论。ReadandCompareTellShowWhatisShow，Dont'tell?Showmeansgivethereadersactions,thoughts,senses,andfeelingsratherthansimpledescriptions.How？Shewalkedtothewindow.Sheslippedoutofbedandtiptoedtothewindow.她溜下床，蹑手蹑脚地走到窗户旁边。Skill1：ChoosespecificVerbs用精准动词代替笼统动词Howtoshow(1)Allofthewordsbelowcantaketheplaceofsaid,buttheyareusedunderdifferentconditions.Choosetheproperwordstofillintheblanks.TheMathTestAsthetestbegan,Mikeleanedoverto_________,"I'mstuck.”"Focus,"Tom

mutteredback.Minuteslater,Mikehadto_______,"Tellmetheanswer”"No,"Tom________firmly."Please,"Mikebeganto______,"I'llfailifyoudon’ttellme."Tomstartedto___________,"it'swrong!”Suddenly,theteacherstoodoverthem,asking"Isthereaproblem?”Miketriedto________,"Iwasjust...askingforapencil."askbegexplainreplywhispercomplainwhisperaskrepliedbegcomplainexplain

低语询问回答

乞求

抱怨

解释

想要增添“读后续写”的表达效果，特别要注意避免使用泛泛而谈的抽象词，应该多使用具体词汇。Tell

：HeiseatingLatiao.Show：Hetorethepackage,squeezedoutonestrip,andtookabigbite.Howtoshow(2)

Skill2:BreakdownactiontoformactionchainHewasdisappointedtoseethetestpaper.

看到试卷

He_______________________quickly,______thescore,and_____

thetableindisappointment.如何分解动作：扫视试卷看到成绩捶打课桌scannedthetestpaperspottedpoundedMomspankedme.指出错误妈妈打我严肃的看着我轻轻的打了我Mom_________meseriously,____________

mymistake,and_________

megentlyasalesson.staredatpointedoutspanked画面：下车动作拆解：收拾行李，起身，下车He

hisluggage,

fromthechairandthen________thecarexcitedly.pickeduprosegotoffScene:跳水救人Henryjumpedintotheriverandsaved

Robert.When

the“Help!”,Henry

theriverside,

________hisclothesand

thewaterwithouthesitation.He

Robertjustashewassinkingthelasttime.Bygreateffort,andwithmuchdangertohimself,hefinally_________Roberttotheshore.hearingdashedtotookoffjumpedintoreachedpulled/draggedWatchavideoclip

文本分析Itriedtoshakeheroff,butshejustclampedontightandyankedmealong,saying,"Comeon!"Mymomcameoutofthehouseandimmediatelygottheworld’scomplexlookonherface."Well,hello,"shesaystoJuli."Hi!"I'mstilltryingtopullfree,butthegirl'sgotmeinadeathgrip.Mymom'sgrinning,lookingatourhandsandmyredface."Andwhat'syourname,honey?""JuliannaBaker.Iliverightoverthere,"shesays,pointingwithherunoccupiedhand."Well,Iseeyou'vemetmyson,"shesays,stillgrinningaway.

FinallyIbreakfreeanddotheonlymanlythingavailablewhenyou'resevenyearsold—Idivebehindmymother.Howdoesthewriterletusfeeltheboy’sdislike?Fromwhataspects?

文本分析Itriedtoshakeheroff,butshejustclampedontightandyankedmealong,saying,"Comeon!"Mymomcameoutofthehouseandimmediatelygottheworld’scomplexlookonherface."Well,hello,"shesaystoJuli."Hi!"I'mstilltryingtopullfree,butthegirl'sgotmeinadeathgrip.Mymom'sgrinning,lookingatourhandsandmyredface."Andwhat'syourname,honey?""JuliannaBaker.Iliverightoverthere,"shesays,pointingwithherunoccupiedhand."Well,Iseeyou'vemetmyson,"shesays,stillgrinningaway.bodylanguagevoicefacialexpressionsFinallyIbreakfreeanddotheonlymanlythingavailablewhenyou'resevenyearsold—Idivebehindmymother.Skill3

Face+Body+VoiceLiuJingyangandhermotherhuggedeachotherexcitedlyafterhervictory.①Face:Liu’seyes___________________withgreatdelight.

Abroadsmile__________acrossherface.Tears__________inhermom’seyes.Show:Theywereexcited.sparkled/twinkledspreadglistened闪耀漾开展开She________towardhermom,and_____herontheshouldersgently,sharingherjoywithherexcitedly.Momproudlygaveherathumps-up.Show:Theywereexcited.②Body:sprintedpatted“Imadeit”shescreamed/yelled/exclaimedatthetopofherlungs.“I’msoproudofyou!”Momsaid,hervoicetremblingwithjoy.③Voice:Show:Theywereexcited.①Sb.+V,with复合结构②Sb.+V,独立主格结构③Sb.+V,V-ing伴随状语④

“无灵”主语句UsefulsentencepatternsCrossingthefinishline,LiuJingyangsprintedtowardhermomatonceandpulledherintoatighthug(body).“Mom,Iwon!”sheexclaimed(voice).Tearsglisteninginhereyes(face),momstrokeherbackgently(body).“I’msoproudofyou!”shesaidinachokedvoice.(voice),givingherathumps-up.(body)ShowitfacebodyvoiceShe_______________hereyebrows.Hereyes_____________withanger.Hercheeksturned________________She_________herfistsand______themwidelyintheair.Herwholebodywas_______.Shepacedbackandforthlikeacaged_____.“I’mverydisappointed.Isthishowyourepaymyefforts?”Sheyelledatthetopherlungs.Janetwasangrybecausemanystudentsdidn’tfinishhomework.furrowed/knittedred/flushburnt/explodedclenchedwavedshakingtigerfacebodyvoiceWithhereyebrowsknitted,eyesexplodingwithanger,andcheeksflushed,Janetclenchedherfistsandwavedthemwidelyintheair.“Howdareyou!Isthishowyourepaymyefforts?”sheyelledatthetopofherlungs.Janetwasangrybecausemanystudentsdidn’tfinishhomework.Suppose:Youwereboundforanothercitywhereyouwillstudy,youexchangedgoodbyewithyourmotherattherailwaystation.

Describethesceneofseparation.“Takecare,mydear!”Momsaidinachokedvoice.Shethrewherarmsaround