2025届高考英语二轮复习写作专项读后续写 个人成长类之父亲不离不弃和身残志坚的孩子勇闯铁人三项（讲义）

2025届高考英语二轮复习写作专项读后续写个人成长类之父亲不离不弃和身残志坚的孩子勇闯铁人三项（讲义）读后续写：个人成长类之父亲不离不弃和身残志坚的孩子勇闯铁人三项

读后续写（湖北省武汉市2023-2024学年高三二月调研考试试卷）

FromthedayJohnnywasborn,Jeffrefusedtolethisson'sdisabilitiesholdhimback.Johnnyhascerebralpalsy(脑瘫),makingitdifficultforhimtowalk.DeterminedtoshowJohnnythathecouldpursuehisdreamofbeinganathlete,whenhewas15yearsold,JeffsignedhimupwithTeamTriumph,anorganizationthathelpskidswithdisabilitiesengageinendurancesports.

"Itgavemeanewperspectiveonlife,"Johnnysaid.Heevendreamedofwalkingmarathononeday.Fromthenon,Johnnybecameaddictedtoracing,andJeffalsowantedtobeapartofit.ThoughJeffhadbeenaminorleaguebaseballplayer,endurance(耐力)sportswerenewtohim.HemadeuphismindtoachieveJohnny'sdreamandstarteddoingthingsheneverdreamedabout.Hebeganwakingupat4a.m.SohecouldruninthesilentstreetwhilepushingJohnnyinaspecialwheelchaircalledaracingchair.Everymorning,hedrovehimselftorunincreasinglylongerdistances.Soon,heandJohnnywereentering5Kraces,thenontoIron-mantriathlons.

FinishingtheIron-mancompetitioninunder16hourswouldbeanotherdreamforJeffandJohnny.Thebigdaycame.Theracebeganwitha2.4-mileswimintheriver.JeffhelpedJohnnyintoakayak(皮艇).Withoneendofaropetiedtoabeltaroundhisbackandtheotherendtothekayak,Jeffeasedhimselfintothewater.Swimmingwhiledragginganotherpersonisquitetough.Thepaircompletedtheswimin90minutes,andthenitwasontothenextleg:a112-milebicycleride.

按下文给出的衔接句进行续写：

P1Theirspecially-madebikehasanadditionalbackseatfacingbackwardforJohnny.

P2ThentheysattheirsightsonthefinallegoftheracewithJohnnysittingintheracing.

对提示句P1,P2做逐词逐句的解读，理解其背后深意；

回溯原文，找到对应的文本，确定基本元素，时间，地点，人物，所涉及的物品，细节等信息；

试图对时间线，地点线结合P1,P2的提示句，看是否有所变化，以确定是否需要展开；

构思情节

读懂最后2段尤其是最后1段的信息，合理结合生活实际，构思文章，并完成

成长前的困扰

情境描写+消极情绪的累积→高潮

成长中的蜕变

成长的动机+过程中变化的心情

成长后的升华

成长后的收获+积极情绪(喜悦、满足和骄傲等)

积累原文素材，认真审读原文原文赏析

Findyourenthusiasm

FromthedayJohnnywasborn,Jeffrefusedtolethisson'sdisabilitiesholdhimback.Johnnyhascerebralpalsy(脑瘫),makingitdifficultforhimtowalk(非谓语动词做伴随动作，或补语).DeterminedtoshowJohnnythathecouldpursuehisdreamofbeinganathlete(非谓语动词做伴随动作，或主语John补语),whenhewas15yearsold(状从),JeffsignedhimupwithTeamTriumph,anorganizationthathelpskidswithdisabilitiesengageinendurancesports(定从).

"Itgavemeanewperspectiveonlife,"Johnnysaid.Heevendreamedofwalkingmarathononeday.Fromthenon,Johnnybecameaddictedtoracing,andJeffalsowantedtobeapartofit.ThoughJeffhadbeenaminorleaguebaseballplayer(状从),endurance(耐力)sportswerenewtohim.HemadeuphismindtoachieveJohnny'sdreamandstarteddoingthingsheneverdreamedabout(定从).Hebeganwakingupat4a.m.SohecouldruninthesilentstreetwhilepushingJohnnyinaspecialwheelchair(状从，省略形式)calledaracingchair(非谓语动词做后置定语).Everymorning,hedrovehimselftorunincreasinglylongerdistances.Soon,heandJohnnywereentering5Kraces,thenontoIron-mantriathlons.

FinishingtheIron-mancompetitioninunder16hourswouldbeanotherdreamforJeffandJohnny.Thebigdaycame.Theracebeganwitha2.4-mileswimintheriver.JeffhelpedJohnnyintoakayak(皮艇).Withoneendofaropetiedtoabeltaroundhisbackandtheotherendtothekayak(with引导的状语),Jeffeasedhimselfintothewater.Swimmingwhiledragginganotherperson(动名词短语做主语)isquitetough.Thepaircompletedtheswimin90minutes,andthenitwasontothenextleg:a112-milebicycleride.

1.续写原文分析：

这段文本讲述了父亲杰夫（Jeff）和他的儿子约翰尼（Johnny）的感人故事。约翰尼出生时就患有脑瘫，这使得他走路非常困难。尽管如此，杰夫坚决不让儿子的残疾阻碍他的梦想，决心让约翰尼追求成为运动员的梦想。杰夫为约翰尼报名参加了一个专门帮助残疾儿童参与耐力运动的组织。随着时间的推移，约翰尼爱上了赛车，而杰夫也开始投入其中，甚至为了陪伴约翰尼而进行高强度的训练。

故事中提到，他们一起参加了许多比赛，包括铁人三项（Ironman），并且他们在比赛中的努力与成就展现了父子间深厚的情感和不屈不挠的精神。

2.续写思路

在续写时，可以围绕以下几个方面展开：

1.细节描述:继续描述比赛的细节，包括骑自行车的经历，遇到的挑战以及父子间的互动。可以描绘他们的感受、周围的环境、其他参赛者的表现等。

2.情感升华:强调杰夫和约翰尼在比赛过程中的情感变化，比如面对困难时的坚持和相互支持。可以加入一些对话或内心独白，展现他们的心理状态。

3.结束语:最后可以通过他们完成比赛后的感受来总结这一段旅程。例如，约翰尼如何感受到成功的喜悦，杰夫对儿子的骄傲，或者他们对未来的憧憬。通过这种续写方式，可以充分展现杰夫与约翰尼之间深厚的父子情，以及他们在追求梦想过程中所经历的艰辛与快乐。结合细腻的情感描写与生动的场景描绘，续写将使整个故事更加感人和完整。

3.续写的节奏把控:

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；

点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；

点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；

点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。

由于首段提示句P1Theirspecially-madebikehasanadditionalbackseatfacingbackwardforJohnny.提到了他们自制的自行车去参加铁人三项中的112mile的部分，一定会遇到困难，第一段重点写Tony和Jonny互相鼓励，突破自我的比赛过程；

第二段P2ThentheysattheirsightsonthefinallegoftheracewithJohnnysittingintheracing.给出的提示信息是他们坐在自己的车上，到达了比赛的最后一程，并且有Johnny的陪伴，仍在处于比赛的过程中，故而，应该把重点的信息依然放在写比赛的最后一程方面。

重点词汇和短语日积月累才是捷径

重点词汇短语

1.句子结构

现象:复合句

-解析:原文使用了许多复合句，通过连词连接主句和从句，增加句子的复杂性和信息量。

-例子:“FromthedayJohnnywasborn,Jeffrefusedtolethisson'sdisabilitiesholdhimback."

2.非谓语动词

现象:动名词和分词

-解析:使用动名词和分词形式来表示伴随或原因关系。

-例子:“DeterminedtoshowJohnnythathecouldpursuehisdreamofbeinganathlete,Jeffsignedhimup…”

3.现在分词短语

现象:现在分词作状语

-解析:现在分词用来描述时间、原因或条件。

-例子:“...makingitdifficultforhimtowalk."这里“making”表示因果关系。

4.直接引语

现象:引号内的直接引语

-解析:直接引语用于表达角色的原话，增加生动性和真实性。

-例子:“Itgavemeanewperspectiveonlife,"Johnnysaid.

5.从属连词

现象:使用从属连词引导的时间从句

-解析:从属连词“when”用于引导时间从句，表达事件的时间关系。

-例子:“whenhewas15yearsold,Jeffsignedhimup…"

6.被动语态

现象:被动语态的使用

-解析:被动语态用于强调动作的承受者或结果。

-例子:“...anorganizationthathelpskidswithdisabilitiesengageinendurancesports.”(helps是主动形式，但整个短语强调了组织的功能)

7.定语从句

现象:定语从句

-解析:定语从句用于对名词进行修饰，提供更多细节信息。

-例子:“...anorganizationthathelpskidswithdisabilitiesengageinendurancesports."

8.并列句

现象:并列句

-解析:通过并列连词连接两个独立主句。

-例子:“Hebeganwakingupat4a.m.SohecouldruninthesilentstreetwhilepushingJohnny…”

扩展例子

1.使用复合句:

-Original:“Thoughitwasraining,theydecidedtogoforarun."

-扩展:“Althoughtheweatherwasbad,theycontinuedtheirtrainingregimen.”

2.使用现在分词短语:

-Original:“Walkingquickly,shemadeittothebusstopjustintime."

-扩展:“Runninglate,hehurriedtocatchthetrain.”

汉译英练习题

1.汉语:尽管天气恶劣，他们还是决定进行训练。

-答案:Althoughtheweatherwasbad,theydecidedtocontinuetheirtraining.

2.汉语:他一直梦想着参加马拉松比赛。

-答案:Hehasalwaysdreamedofparticipatinginamarathon.

重点单词分析

单词的替换现象是写作的加分点

1.Soakin

释义:吸收，沉浸于

近义词:Absorb,takein

同义词:Immerse,indulge

对应词组:Soakintheatmosphere,soakintheexperience

例句:

1.Afterthelonghike,Itookamomenttosoakinthebreathtakingviewsofthemountains.

2.Sheclosedhereyestosoakinthemusic,lettingthemelodieswashoverher.

3.Duringthequietevening,hesatbythefiretosoakinthewarmthandcomfort.

4.Asthesunset,theypausedtosoakinthebeautyofthevibrantcolorsinthesky.

使用方式:在续写中，可以描述角色如何沉浸在比赛的氛围中，感受周围的情感。例如，Johnny在比赛中体验欢呼声和观众的支持，表明他对这次经历的感受。可以扩展为“soakinthecheersofthecrowd"或“soakinthejoyofvictory”。

2.Exhilarate

释义:使兴奋，使振奋

近义词:Energize,invigorate

同义词:Excite,elate

对应词组:Exhilaratethecrowd,exhilaratetheatmosphere

例句:

1.Thethrillingperformanceexhilaratedtheaudience,leavingthembreathless.

2.Asuddenburstoflaughtercanexhilarateeventhedullestofmoments.

3.Thefreshmountainairexhilaratedhim,makinghimfeelalive.

4.Thenewsoftheirvictoryexhilaratedtheentireteam.

使用方式:可以用来描述比赛中观众或运动员的情绪。例如，可以写成“theexhilaratingatmosphereoftherace"或“theexhilaratedfacesofthespectators”。

3.Speed

释义:加速，快速移动

近义词:Rush,hurry

同义词:Accelerate,zip

对应词组:Speedup,speedalong

例句:

1.Theyhadtospeedthroughtheprojecttomeetthedeadline.

2.Thecarbegantospeeddownthehighwayasthedriverpressedthegaspedal.

3.Hedecidedtospeeduphistrainingregimeninpreparationfortherace.

4.Thetrainwillspeedalongthetracks,reachingitsdestinationinnotime.

使用方式:在续写中，可以用“speed"来形容运动员的节奏。例如，“speedtowardthefinishline”或“theteamspedthroughthecourse"。

4.Pedal

释义:踏，踩（踏板）

近义词:Push,crank

同义词:Cycle,treadle

对应词组:Pedalfaster,pedalaway

例句:

1.Shelearnedtopedalabikebeforeshecouldevenwalk.

2.Theathletebegantopedalharderasheapproachedthefinishline.

3.Hehadtopedaluphill,feelingthestraininhislegs.

4.Theytookturnspedalingthetandembikethroughthepark.

使用方式:可以用来描述运动员在比赛中的动作，例如“pedalwithdetermination”或“pedalasfastastheycould"。

5.Whip

释义:鞭打，快速移动

近义词:Lash,flick

同义词:Beat,stir

对应词组:Whipup,whipthrough

例句:

1.Thewindbegantowhiparoundthemasthestormapproached.

2.Sheusedawhisktowhipthecreamintosoftpeaks.

3.Thecoachwouldwhiptheteamintoshapefortheupcomingmatch.

4.Hedecidedtowhipupaquickdinnerbeforehisguestsarrived.

使用方式:可以用来形容风或速度，例如“thewindwhippedaroundthem”或“theywhippedthroughthecourse"。

6.Ringout

释义:响起，回响

近义词:Echo,resound

同义词:Sound,reverberate

对应词组:Ringoutloud,ringoutclear

例句:

1.Thebellbegantoringout,signalingthestartoftheceremony.

2.Laughterwouldringoutfromtheroom,fillingitwithjoy.

3.Hervoicerangoutclearly,capturingeveryone'sattention.

4.Themusicrangoutacrossthepark,invitingeveryonetodance.

使用方式:在续写中，可以用来描绘环境的声音，例如“thecheersrangoutastheycrossedthefinishline”。

7.Palpable

释义:明显的，可感知的

近义词:Tangible,noticeable

同义词:Perceptible,evident

对应词组:Palpabletension,palpableexcitement

例句:

1.Thetensionintheroomwaspalpableastheyawaitedtheannouncement.

2.Herexcitementwaspalpablewhenshereceivedthegoodnews.

3.Therewasapalpablesenseofreliefwhenthestormpassed.

4.Theconnectionbetweenthemwaspalpable,evidentintheireveryglance.

使用方式:可以用来描述气氛或情感，例如“thepalpableexcitementintheair"或“thepalpabletensionbeforetherace”。

8.Glancedat

释义:瞥一眼，快速看

近义词:Lookedat,peekedat

同义词:Castaglance,tookalook

对应词组:Glancedattheclock,glancedatherphone

例句:

1.Heglancedathiswatch,realizinghewaslateforthemeeting.

2.Sheglancedatthebeautifulpaintinghangingonthewall.

3.Theyexchangedglances,silentlycommunicatingtheirthoughts.

4.Hequicklyglancedatthebook,hopingtocatchaglimpseoftheending.

使用方式:在续写中，可以用来描述人物之间的互动，例如“heglancedatJohnnywithencouragement"。

9.Leanedforward

释义:向前倾身

近义词:Inclinedforward,bentforward

同义词:Propelled,advanced

对应词组:Leanedforwardinexcitement,leanedforwardtolisten

例句:

1.Sheleanedforwardtohearbetterasthespeakerbegantotalk.

2.Heleanedforwardinhischair,eagertoseetheresults.

3.Thechildleanedforward,tryingtocatchaglimpseoftheparade.

4.Theyleanedforwardinanticipationasthefireworkslitupthesky.

使用方式:描述人物的期待感，例如“theyleanedforwardintheirseatsastheracebegan”。

10.Conquerthechallenge

释义:克服挑战，征服困难

近义词:Overcomethechallenge,facethechallenge

同义词:Masterthechallenge,tacklethechallenge

对应词组:Conquerthemountain,conquerthefear

例句:

1.Withdetermination,shewasreadytoconquerthechallengeahead.

2.Hefacedeveryobstaclewiththemindsettoconquerthechallenge.

3.Theteamworkedtogethertoconquerthechallengeoftheproject.

4.Itwastimetoconquerthechallengethathadlongintimidatedhim.

使用方式:用于描述角色克服困难的决心，例如“theyweredeterminedtoconquerthechallengeoftherace"。

11.Surge

释义:涌现，急剧上升

近义词:Rush,swell

同义词:Rise,burst

对应词组:Surgeofenergy,surgeforward

例句:

1.Asurgeofexcitementfilledthecrowdastheconcertbegan.

2.Hefeltasurgeofadrenalineashecrossedthefinishline.

3.Theriversurgedaftertheheavyrain,overflowingitsbanks.

4.Sheexperiencedasurgeofconfidencebeforeherpresentation.

使用方式:描述情感或能量的涌现，例如“asurgeofadrenaline”或“surgedforwardastheracestarted"。

12.Adrenaline

-释义:肾上腺素

-近义词:Excitementhormone,epinephrine

-同义词:Rush,thrill

-对应词组:Adrenalinerush,surgeofadrenaline

-例句:

1.Theadrenalinecoursedthroughhisveinsashepreparedfortherace.

2.Shelovedtheadrenalineofextremesportsandsoughtnewchallenges.

3.Anadrenalinerushcanhelpyouperformbetterinhigh-pressuresituations.

4.Thefearoffailingtriggeredanadrenalineresponsethatpushedhimtosucceed.

-使用方式:可以用来描写激烈时刻的感受，例如“theadrenalinepumpingastheyreachedthefinishline”。

13.Infectiousenthusiasm

-释义:具有感染力的热情

-近义词:Contagiousexcitement,spiritedenergy

-同义词:Inspiringpassion,exuberantzeal

-对应词组:Infectiousenthusiasmforlearning,infectiousenthusiasmintheteam

-例句:

1.Herinfectiousenthusiasmmotivatedeveryoneinthegroup.

2.Thecoach’sinfectiousenthusiasminspiredtheteamtotrainharder.

3.Hisinfectiousenthusiasmfortheprojectmadeitasuccess.

4.Children’sinfectiousenthusiasmcanlightupanyclassroom.

-使用方式:描述团队或观众的情绪，例如“theinfectiousenthusiasmspreadamongtheracers"。

14.Unwavering

-释义:坚定不移的

-近义词:Steadfast,unflinching

-同义词:Resolute,determined

-对应词组:Unwaveringsupport,unwaveringbelief

-例句:

1.Herunwaveringcommitmenttohergoalskepthermovingforward.

2.Theyfacedadversitywithanunwaveringspirit.

3.Hisunwaveringfocusonthetaskhelpedhimachievesuccess.

4.Theteam'sunwaveringdedicationwasevidentintheirperformance.

-使用方式:可以描述角色的决心，例如“withunwaveringdetermination,theyapproachedthefinishline”。

15.Segment

-释义:部分，片段

-近义词:Section,part

-同义词:Portion,division

-对应词组:Segmentofthemarket,segmentoftherace

-例句:

1.Theydividedtheprojectintomanageablesegmentsforbetterorganization.

2.Theraceconsistedofseveralsegments,eachwithitsownchallenges.

3.Inmarketing,it'simportanttoidentifyyourtargetcustomersegment.

4.Shefocusedononesegmentoftheproblematatimetofindasolution.

-使用方式:描述比赛的不同阶段，例如“eachsegmentoftheracebroughtnewchallenges"。

16.Radiate

-释义:辐射，散发

-近义词:Emit,spread

-同义词:Exude,project

-对应词组:Radiatewarmth,radiatepositivity

-例句:

1.Thesunbegantoradiateitswarmthasitroseinthesky.

2.Hersmileseemedtoradiatehappiness,liftingeveryone’sspirits.

3.Theteam’senergyradiatedthroughoutthevenue,creatingalivelyatmosphere.

4.Hecouldfeeltheloveradiatefromhisfamilyduringthereunion.

-使用方式:可以用来描述气氛，例如“radiateconfidence”或“radiatejoyduringtherace"。

17.Accelerate

-释义:加速

-近义词:Speedup,hasten

-同义词:Quickening,expedite

-对应词组:Accelerategrowth,accelerateprogress

-例句:

1.Thedriverhadtoacceleratequicklytoavoidtheoncomingtraffic.

2.Weneedtoaccelerateoureffortsifwewanttomeetthedeadline.

3.Thecompanyplanstoaccelerateitsexpansionintonewmarkets.

4.Shetookadeepbreathandbegantoaccelerateherpaceduringtherun.

-使用方式:用来描绘运动的加速，例如“acceleratetowardthefinishline”。

18.Narrow

-释义:变窄，收缩

-近义词:Slim,tighten

-同义词:Constrict,reduce

-对应词组:Narrowdown,narrowfocus

-例句:

1.Heneededtonarrowdownhisoptionsbeforemakingadecision.

2.Thepathbegantonarrowastheyventureddeeperintotheforest.

3.Shehadtonarrowherfocustocompletethetaskontime.

4.Thedebatehelpednarrowtheissuesthatneededtobeaddressed.

-使用方式:可以描述路途或目标的集中，例如“thepathnarrowedastheyapproachedthefinishline"。

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Theirspecially-madebikehasanadditionalbackseatfacingbackwardforJohnny,allowinghimtosoakintheexhilaratingsightsastheyspedalong(状从).Jefffeltasurgeofprideashepedaledhard(状从),thewindwhippingthroughhishairandthesunshiningbrightlyabovethem(可积累语料，独立主格).Johnny'slaughterrangout,mixingwiththesoundsofthecheeringcrowdthatlinedtheroute(非谓语动词做伴随动作+定从).Witheachturn(伴随状语),JeffcouldseethedeterminationinJohnny’seyes(可积累语料，非谓语动词做伴随动作),reflectingtheirshareddream(非谓语动词做伴随动作).Astheyapproachedthelaststretch(状从),Jeff’smusclesburned(可积累语料),butthethoughtofcrossingthefinishlinetogetherpushedhimforward.Theywereateam,andnothingcouldholdthembacknow.

ThentheysettheirsightsonthefinallegoftheracewithJohnnysittingintheracingchair.Theexcitementwaspalpable,andJeffcouldfeelhisheartracinginsyncwiththerhythmofthebike(可积累语料).Thecheersfromthespectatorsgrewlouder(可积累语料),urgingthemon(非谓语动词做伴随)astheynavigatedthetwistsandturnsofthecourse.Johnnyleanedforward,hisfacebeamingwithjoy(独立主格),readytoconquerthisfinalchallenge(形容词短语做补语).Jeffglancedatthefinishlineahead,itsvibrantcolorsbeckoningthemcloser(独立主格).Withonelastburstofenergy(伴随状语),theysurgedforward,embodyingthespiritofresilienceandtriumph(非谓语动词做伴随动作).

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Theirspecially-madebikehasanadditionalbackseatfacingbackwardforJohnny,allowinghimtoenjoytheviewofthecheeringcrowdbehindthem.Astheypedaled(状从),Jefffeltawaveofadrenalinerushthroughhim(可积累语料),drivinghimtopushharder(非谓语动词做伴随).Johnny’sinfectiousenthusiasmfilledtheair(可积累语料);everyshoutofencouragementfromtheonlookersfueledtheirdetermination(可积累语料).Jeffcou