高三上学期期末学业诊断英语试卷

高三上学期期末学业诊断英语试卷山西省太原市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末学业诊断英语试卷

(满分25分)47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Summervacationstarting,SteveandIplannedtoplaybaseballeveryday,aimingtojointhefreshmanteam.“Ifyoumakeitintotheteam,I’llbuyyouanewbaseballgloveasapresent."Mymom’spromiseechoedinmymindasIexcitedlywaitedforSteve,staringatmyworn-outglove.

ButtodayIhadtocleanMrs.Thompson’sgaragefirst.Shewasweakenedbyoldage,somymomalwaysvolunteeredmetohelpher.Momwouldn’tletmeacceptanymoney,thinkingshedidn’thavemuch,andliterally,Ineverminded—afterall,Mrs.Thompsonhadknittedmefivesweatersandalwaysmademecakes.Mostimportantly,itwastherightthingtodo.

Stevecamerushingoutofhishouse,andIexplainedthesituation.Asexpected,heimmediatelysaid,“Alright,I’llhelp.”Weinstantlygottowork.Thegaragewasamessofboxes,butwegatheredallourenergyandsoonbroughtthecleanuptoanend.Whenarrangingthelastbox,however,Inudgedtheshelfaccidentally.BeforeIcouldreact,avasefellandcrashedtotheground,brokenintopieces.

Ifroze,myheartpounding.Thevasewasbeautifulwithdelicatedesigns,whichmusthavecostafortune.Glancingattheopengaragedoor,Isuggested,“MaybeIcanjustsweepthisup.Mrs.Thompsonwon’tevennotice."Irespondedfastandpiledthepiecesintothetrashbin.ButSteve’sexpressiondarkened.“That’snothowitworks.Youshouldtellherwhathappened.”

Itriedtojustifymyself,tellingallthechoresI’ddoneforMrs.Thompsonwithoutpay.Ievenarguedthatitwasn’tmyresponsibilitytopayforsomethingIdidn’tdestroyonpurpose.However,Stevewasn’tbuyingit,hisvoicefirm.“You’rebetterthanthat.Beresponsible."

Westoodthereinsilence,theweightofthemomenthangingbetweenus.Justthen,Mrs.Thompsonwalkedin,givingusascare.Shesmiledwarmly,unawareofthewholething.“Boys,Ibakedachocolatecake.Nowcomeinforapiece.Ireallyappreciateallyourhelp.”

注意：

续写词数应为150个左右;

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Hesitantly,weenteredtheroomandInoticedagiftboxonthetablebesidethecake.

Paragraph2:Havingsaidthat,IwaitednervouslyforMrs.Thompsontospeakup.

山西省太原市2024-2025学年高三上学期期末学业诊断英语试卷

(满分25分)47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Summervacationstarting(独立主格),SteveandIplannedtoplaybaseballeveryday,aimingtojointhefreshmanteam(现在分词做伴随动作).“Ifyoumakeitintotheteam,I’llbuyyouanewbaseballgloveasapresent."Mymom’spromiseechoedinmymindasIexcitedlywaitedforSteve(状从),staringatmyworn-outglove(现在分词做伴随动作).

ButtodayIhadtocleanMrs.Thompson’sgaragefirst.Shewasweakenedbyoldage,somymomalwaysvolunteeredmetohelpher.Momwouldn’tletmeacceptanymoney,thinking(现在分词做伴随动作)shedidn’thavemuch(宾从),andliterally,Ineverminded—afterall,Mrs.Thompsonhadknittedmefivesweatersandalwaysmademecakes.Mostimportantly,itwastherightthingtodo.

Stevecamerushingoutofhishouse(现在分词做伴随动作),andIexplainedthesituation.Asexpected(状从压缩),heimmediatelysaid,“Alright,I’llhelp.”Weinstantlygottowork.Thegaragewasamessofboxes,butwegatheredallourenergyandsoonbroughtthecleanuptoanend.Whenarrangingthelastbox(状从压缩),however,Inudgedtheshelfaccidentally.BeforeIcouldreact(状从),avasefellandcrashedtotheground(环境描写),brokenintopieces(过去分词做后置定语).

Ifroze,myheartpounding(独立主格描写心情).Thevasewasbeautifulwithdelicatedesigns,whichmusthavecostafortune(定从).Glancingattheopengaragedoor(现在分词做伴随动作),Isuggested,“MaybeIcanjustsweepthisup.Mrs.Thompsonwon’tevennotice."Irespondedfastandpiledthepiecesintothetrashbin.ButSteve’sexpressiondarkened(情绪描写).“That’snothowitworks(宾从).Youshouldtellherwhathappened(宾从).”

Itriedtojustifymyself,tellingallthechores(现在分词做伴随动作)I’ddoneforMrs.Thompsonwithoutpay(定从).Ievenarguedthatitwasn’tmyresponsibilitytopayforsomething(宾从)Ididn’tdestroyonpurpose(定从).However,Stevewasn’tbuyingit,hisvoicefirm(独立主格).“You’rebetterthanthat.Beresponsible."

Westoodthereinsilence(介短做状语状态秒细微),theweightofthemomenthangingbetweenus(独立主格非常好的状态描写).Justthen,Mrs.Thompsonwalkedin,givingusascare(现在分词做伴随动作).Shesmiledwarmly,unawareofthewholething.(adj短语做不用涂)“Boys,Ibakedachocolatecake.Nowcomeinforapiece(祈使句).Ireallyappreciateallyourhelp.”

注意：

续写词数应为150个左右;

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Hesitantly,weenteredtheroomandInoticedagiftboxonthetablebesidethecake.

Paragraph2:Havingsaidthat,IwaitednervouslyforMrs.Thompsontospeakup.

1.续写分类与思路分析

分析角度内容承接原文的事项续写注意事项

续写类型成长类（成长、责任与道德选择）原文讲述主人公在帮助邻居时犯错并面临道德选择续写应体现主人公的心理变化和成长

构思思路体现主人公的内心挣扎、朋友的影响、最终做出正确选择的成长过程强调人物情感和价值观的塑造避免生硬转折，确保情节流畅自然

布局框架1.犹豫与压力→2.朋友的鼓励→3.选择面对→4.诚实带来的结果过渡句需自然衔接，铺垫情绪冲突关键点应与原文衔接，如“责任"诚实”主题

实施方法采用心理描写、动作描写、对话推动情节发展结合环境描写增强氛围避免过度描述，保持篇幅适中

续写承接1.突出主人公的挣扎：想隐瞒但内心不安2.朋友的劝说推动选择3.勇敢承认错误4.友善的结果（如老人宽容）衔接原文的人物性格，如Steve坚持原则细腻刻画心理活动，让角色更生动

续写设计结局可设置为：1.诚实获得认可2.友谊升华3.主人公成长重点突出人物成长语境自然衔接，符合高考评分标准

2.故事山模式分析

续写故事山模式分析表

分析角度内容原文反应句

人物刻画斯蒂夫是个诚实正直的朋友，主角则面临道德抉择"Steve的表情变暗。“You’rebetterthanthat.Beresponsible.""

情感层次从侥幸心理→内疚和挣扎→坦白后的释然"Ifroze,myheartpounding.""Havingsaidthat,IwaitednervouslyforMrs.Thompsontospeakup."

关键情节点1.主角不小心打碎花瓶2.斯蒂夫坚持诚实3.主角最终决定承认错误"BeforeIcouldreact,avasefellandcrashedtotheground,brokenintopieces.""Steve’sexpressiondarkened.""Havingsaidthat,IwaitednervouslyforMrs.Thompsontospeakup."

语言特色通过短句、对话增强紧张感，心理描写细腻"Ifroze,myheartpounding.""Glancingattheopengaragedoor,Isuggested,'MaybeIcanjustsweepthisup.'"

关键词分析hesitation(犹豫),guilt(愧疚),honesty(诚实),friendship(友谊)"Itriedtojustifymyself...""Youshouldtellherwhathappened."

心理描写1.犹豫是否坦白2.害怕被责备3.内心的道德挣扎"Itriedtojustifymyself,tellingallthechoresI’ddone...""Havingsaidthat,Iwaitednervously..."

动作描写1.手足无措2.偷瞄大门3.胸口狂跳"Ifroze,myheartpounding.""Glancingattheopengaragedoor...""Westoodthereinsilence,theweightofthemomenthangingbetweenus."

环境描写车库内的杂乱与压抑映衬主角的内心矛盾"Thegaragewasamessofboxes...""Inudgedtheshelfaccidentally."

隐含主题诚实与责任，面对错误的重要性"That’snothowitworks.Youshouldtellherwhathappened."

情感转折1.轻松期待→2.内疚挣扎→3.释然与成长"MaybeIcanjustsweepthisup.""Itriedtojustifymyself...""Havingsaidthat,Iwaitednervously..."

空间转换车库→屋内（暗示心理变化）"Hesitantly,weenteredtheroomandInoticedagiftboxonthetablebesidethecake."

时间过渡通过事件顺序自然推进情节"Justthen,Mrs.Thompsonwalkedin,givingusascare."

伏笔斯蒂夫的态度预示结局，车库的杂乱象征心理冲突"Steve'sexpressiondarkened.""Thegaragewasamessofboxes..."

冲突点是否坦白错误"MaybeIcanjustsweepthisup.Mrs.Thompsonwon’tevennotice."

隐含线索Mrs.Thompson的善良为主角坦白创造条件"Boys,Ibakedachocolatecake.Nowcomeinforapiece.Ireallyappreciateallyourhelp."

解决方案主角最终选择诚实，并得到宽恕"Havingsaidthat,IwaitednervouslyforMrs.Thompsontospeakup."

本篇续写的故事山模式是典型的道德成长类，核心冲突围绕主角是否诚实展开。通过心理描写、动作描写和对话，展现了内心挣扎和最终成长。整体上，文章鼓励诚实与责任感，并通过Mrs.Thompson的宽容赋予结局温暖的色彩。

3.续写所需的情境描写语料

（1）动作描写推荐句（8个）

句子适用场景

Heclenchedhisfists,tryingtosuppresshisanxiety.表现紧张或挣扎

Hishandstrembledashereachedforthebroom.表现害怕或内疚

HestoleaglanceatSteve,hopingforreassurance.表现内心不安

HislegsfeltheavyashewalkedtowardMrs.Thompson.表现压力和犹豫

Hetookadeepbreathandsquaredhisshoulders.表现下定决心

Hisfingersfidgetedwiththehemofhisshirt.表现焦虑不安

Hegulpedandforcedhimselftospeak.表现紧张地开口

Awaveofreliefwashedoverhimwhenshesmiled.表现解脱和宽慰

（2）心理描写推荐句（8个）

句子适用场景

Abattleragedinhismindbetweenhonestyandfear.纠结是否说实话

Hisheartpoundedagainsthischestlikeadrum.表现极度紧张

Guiltgnawedathim,refusingtoletgo.表现内疚

Hisconsciencescreamedathimtodotherightthing.表现道德挣扎

Alumpformedinhisthroatashehesitated.表现紧张或害怕

Hisstomachtwistedintoatightknot.表现焦虑或压力

Asenseofdreadsettledoverhimlikeaheavyblanket.表现担忧或害怕

Hefeltasiftheairhadbeensuckedoutofhislungs.表现震惊或害怕

（3）环境描写推荐句（8个）

句子适用场景

Thegaragesmelledofdustandoldwood.形容环境氛围

Sunlightstreamedthroughthehalf-openeddoor,castinglongshadows.形容光影效果

Afaintscentoffreshlybakedchocolatecakedriftedthroughtheair.形容温暖氛围

Thesilenceintheroomwasalmostdeafening.形容尴尬气氛

Thesummerheatpresseddownlikeaninvisibleweight.形容闷热环境

Agentlebreezerustledtheleavesoutside.形容平静的环境

Thewoodenfloorcreakedunderhishesitantsteps.形容紧张氛围

Thebrokenvaselayinsharpfragments,asilentreminderofhismistake.形容破碎场景

（4）常见单词的高级替换（5组）

基础词汇高级替换词适用情境

NervousAnxious,uneasy,jittery表现紧张

ScaredTerrified,shaken,horrified表现恐惧

SadHeartbroken,dejected,downcast表现伤心

HappyOverjoyed,delighted,elated表现开心

ThinkPonder,contemplate,reflect表现思考

4.高中语法分析与可积累语料

（1）文章涉及的高中语法现象

语法点示例句解析

虚拟语气Ifyoumakeitintotheteam,I’llbuyyouanewbaseballglove.条件句，表示将来可能发生的情况（If+一般现在时,主句will+动词原形）。

过去进行时Wewerecleaningthegaragewhenthevasefell.过去进行时（was/were+v-ing）表示过去某一时刻正在发生的动作。

非谓语动词（现在分词）Smilingwarmly,Mrs.Thompsoninvitedusin.现在分词作状语，表示伴随动作。

强调句型ItwasStevewhoinsistedontellingthetruth.强调句型（Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who）。

独立主格结构Thegaragecleaned,wefinallyrelaxed.独立主格（名词/代词+分词），表示伴随情况。

倒装句NotonlydidStevehelp,buthealsoencouragedme.“Notonly...butalso”倒装句，助动词提前。

（2）可积累的语料

词汇/短语词性词义近义词反义词例句

hesitantlyadv.犹豫地reluctantly,cautiouslyconfidentlyHehesitantlysteppedforwardtoconfesshismistake.

clenchv.紧握，咬紧grip,grasprelease,loosenHeclenchedhisfistsinfrustration.

gnawatphr.折磨，使苦恼bother,hauntreassureGuiltgnawedathim,makingithardtobreathe.

pileupphr.堆积accumulate,stackscatterHequicklypiledupthebrokenpiecesinthetrashbin.

braceoneselfforphr.为…做好准备steeloneselfforneglect,ignoreHebracedhimselfforMrs.Thompson’sreaction.

5.PossibleVersions

Version1

Paragraph1:Hesitantly,weenteredtheroomandInoticedagiftboxonthetablebesidethecake.Myheartpounded(心理描写)asIexchangednervousglanceswithSteve(状从).AsmuchasIwantedtoignorethevase(状从),guiltgnawedatme(心理描写).Withadeepbreath,IapproachedMrs.Thompsonandstammered,"I...Iaccidentallybrokeyourvasewhilecleaning(状从省略)."Ibracedmyselffordisappointment(心理描写),butshemerelysmiled."Oh,thatoldthingItwasalreadycracked,"shesaid,chuckling(现在分词做伴随动作).Awaveofreliefwashedoverme(心理描写).Shethenpushedthegiftboxtowardme."Thisisforyou,"shesaidwarmly.Iopenedit,astonished(adj做状语或主语补语)—itwasabrand-newbaseballglove.Tearswelledinmyeyes(情绪描写)asIrealizedthevalueofhonesty(状从).

Paragraph2:Havingsaidthat,IwaitednervouslyforMrs.Thompsontospeakup.Shegentlypattedmyshoulder,hereyeskind(独立主格)."It’snotobjectsthatmatter,butpeople’shearts(递进句式),"shesaid.Ifeltadeepsenseofshameforhavingconsideredhidingthetruth(心理活动描写).Stevegrinned,givingmeanapprovingnod.(现在分词做伴随动作)Thatmoment,Iunderstoodthetruemeaningofintegrity.Weenjoyedthedeliciouschocolatecake,theearliertensionreplacedbywarmth(独立主格).Asweleft(状从),Isqueezedmynewglove,feelingitssmoothleather(现在分词做伴随动作).Thatsummer,Inotonlygainedaglovebutalsoalesson(并列递进)thatwouldlastalifetime(定从)—honestyalwaysbringsthebestrewards.

Version2

Paragraph1:Hesitantly,weenteredtheroomandInoticedagiftboxonthetablebesidethecake.Mypalmsweresweaty,andmythroattightened(状态、心理描写，省略句)asIponderedwhethertoconfess(宾从).Justthen,Mrs.Thompsonnoticedmydiscomfort."Issomethingwrong,dear"sheasked.Unabletoholdback(adj做主语补语或状语),Iadmitted,"Iaccidentallybrokeyourvase.(宾从)"Hereyeswidenedforamomentbeforesoftening(动作心理描写)."Oh,Ihadforgottenallaboutthatvase,"shechuckled."Itwasn’tvaluable,justanolditem."Iletoutasighofrelief(动作心理描写).Then,tomysurprise,shehandedmethegiftbox.Insidewasabrand-newbaseballglove(倒装句),exactlyliketheoneIhaddreamedof(定从).Tearsblurredmyvision(动作心理描写)—Ihaddonetherightthing.

Paragraph2:Havingsaidthat,IwaitednervouslyforMrs.Thompsontospeakup.Shetookasipofherteaandsmiled."Honestyismoreimportantthananyobject,"shesaid.IlookedatSteve,whogavemeanencouragingthumbs-up(定从).Irealizedthatmyhesitationhadbeenunnecessary(宾从)—owninguptomistakes(非谓语动词短语做主语)feltbetterthanhidingthem(感官动词主动表被动).Wesatdown,enjoyingthecake(现在分词做伴随动作),thewarmthofherwordslingeringinmyheart.(独立主格)Thatday,Ilearnedthatintegrity,likebaseball,requirespracticeandcourage(宾从，比喻).AsIleft(状从),myheartwaslighter(心理描写),andmynewglovefeltlikeawell-earnedprize.

Version3

Paragraph1:Hesitantly,weenteredtheroomandInoticedagiftboxonthetablebesidethecake.Stevegavemealookthatsaid,"Nowisthetime."(定从+宾从)Ihesitated,butdeepdown,Iknewhewasright.(宾从)Takingadeepbreath(现在分词短语做伴随动作),Isteppedforwardandadmittedbreakingthevase.Mrs.Thompsonstaredatmeforasecondbeforelaughinggently."ThatoldthingIneverreallylikeditmuchanyway!"Myjawdropped(动作心理描写).BeforeIcouldrespond(状从),shepushedthegiftboxtowardme."Forallyourhardwork,"shesaid.Iopeneditwithshakyhands—abrand-newbaseballglove.Theguiltinmychestmeltedintogratitude.(形象描写心理)

Paragraph2:Havingsaidthat,IwaitednervouslyforMrs.Thompsontospeakup.Shemerelysmiledandpattedmyhand."Mistakeshappen,buthonestylastsforever,"shesaid.Stevebeamedatme,hisprideevident(独立主格，对于次要人物的处理).Ihadworriedfornothing—honestyhadrewardedmeinwaysIneverexpected(定从).Weenjoyedthechocolatecake,theearlierfearfadingintolaughter(独立主格).AsIwalkedhomewithmynewglove(状从),Ifeltlighter.Thatsummer,Ilearnedthattherightchoices,thoughdifficult,alwaysleadtounexpectedrewards(宾从).

分析与总结

亮点语法分析

语法点例句搭配/近义表达

定语从句"ThatoldthingIneverreallylikeditmuchanyway!"which,that,whom

状语从句"BeforeIcouldrespond,shepushedthegiftboxtowardme."as,while,after

宾语从句"Shesaidthathonestyismoreimportantthananyobject."thinkthat,believethat

倒装句"Ihadworriedfornothing—honestyhadrewardedmeinwaysIneverexpected."LittledidIknow,HardlyhadIrealized

独立主格"Havingsaidthat,IwaitednervouslyforMrs.Thompsontospeakup."Thatbeingsaid,Thesituationbeingsuch

情绪描写

词汇近义词

HesitantlyReluctantly,Uncertainly

NervouslyAnxiously,Uneasily

GratefulThankful,Appreciative

动作描写

词汇近义词

SteppedforwardMovedforward,Advanced

PattedTapped,Touchedlightly

BeamedSmiledbroadly,Grinned

高级替换词

常见词替换词

HappyElated,Overjoyed

SadDowncast,Dismayed

NervousUneasy,Tense

续写积累语料

表述愧疚："Guiltgnawedatme."/"Ifeltapangofregret."

表达如释重负："Awaveofreliefwashedoverme."

强调做正确的事："Integrityrequirespracticeandcourage."

6.亮点词汇整理

（1）情绪描写

词汇/短语近义词示例

GuiltgnawedatmeGuiltconsumedme,IwasovercomewithguiltGuiltgnawedatme,makingmystomachchurn.

AlumpformedinmythroatIstruggledtoholdbacktearsAlumpformedinmythroatasIhesitated.

Relieffloodedoverme