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激情第一!我是最棒的！我的课堂我的舞台我的课堂我的舞台1.英语写作训练EnglishWritingPractice2013.10.162.TasksDemands&Languageaim:

howtowriteanessay;howtowriteawholesentence.(句子构建)2.Abilityaim:

Groupcooperationandexploringthemysteryofwriting.(合作探究，学会总结)3.自主学习（Self-work）任务：

ReadtheSelf-workpaperandcompletethesetasks.Agoodessayismadeupof______parts.Agoodparagraphshouldcontain:__________________________________________________________________________

材料一&二：Whichisthetopicsentence?

材料三：Whichlinkingwordscanyoufind?threeatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences;linkingwords;variedsentencepatterns.4.Agoodessayisusuallymadeupof：1.Topicparagraph(主题段)SupportingParagraph/Point12.SupportingParagraph/Point2(扩展段)SupportingParagraph/Point33.Concludingparagraph(结论段)5.Body(supportingideas)ConclusionIntroduction(topic)6.Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.supportingsentencetopicsentenceTopicsentence(主题句)Supportingsentences(扩展句)7.材料一：Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall……topicsentence8.Whereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.材料二：justlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

Ourschoolistopicsentence9.材料三IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,Englishalsoplaysanimportant

roleintoday’sbusinessworld.Lastly,……10.时间先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat…让步关系：although,evenif/though,though,inspiteofthefactthat…正确使用有关连接词(linkingwords)11.递进关系：条件关系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…表列举：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords,asfollows表总结：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstatedabove,allinall正确使用有关连接词(linkingwords)what’smore,inaddition,furthermore;foronething…foranotherthing…12.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.

What

akindboyheis!

How

disappointedhewas!感叹句强调句e.g.

It

wasthisyoungboythat

helpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.13.e.g.

Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.There

comesthepolicecar.

Hardly

hadtheygottothestationwhen

theymettheyoungman.e.g.

Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet

withahandbaginherhand.倒装句省略句with结构14.e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.

Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.定语从句e.g.That’swhat

Ishoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoever

needshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句15.

e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

Themoment

wereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.

Solongas

weworkharderatourlessons,

we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句16.1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）_____

surpriseshimis____

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak____________Iam,I’llmaketheeffort.__________notuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper____

he_______whathadhappened.

I______________________thephysicsexam__________yourhelp.

Line1-1林前钰自主学习高效展示Whatthatas/thoughItwasthatknewwouldn’thavepassedwithout17.5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）

8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（祈使句+and…）__________bymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab._________and__________,theywentbacktoschool.______________________,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhard_____you’llmakerapidprogress.Line2-1张珂FollowedSinginglaughingNomatterwhathesays,and18.9．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Nosooner________________

backfromBeijing

than

hewassentabroad.Theplan_______________________afailure.__________hespoke,___________________hefelt.Line8-1王鑫Comment：Line6-2刘琦hadhecomethinkhighlyofisofhighlythoughtturnedouttobeThemorethemoreexcitedvi.19.Summary(自主学习总结):Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopic

paragraph,somesupporting

paragraphsandaconcluding

paragraph.Agoodparagraph

isonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraph

isonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraph

isonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.20.

Assessment(评价)ofAGoodEssayStructure(结构)Istheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Content(内容)Areallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?

Language(语言)Doesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns?自主学习评价21.Goodafternoon,everyone!

Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.

Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife.___1___.___2___,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial.___3____,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool.___4___,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife.___5___,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.___6___,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!Thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollows

B.FirstlyC.Lastbutnot

leastD.What’smore

E.AsfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEF22.进一步总结：写作训练的思路写一完整的句子:句子的完整句子的连贯句子的简洁句子的多样化主题句,扩展句,结论句设计一个段落:23.CooperationPractice(合作探究练习)24.合作探究一Exercise一

1.判断正误；

(Paper3)2.翻译简单句；

3.翻译并列句；

4.判断从句；

5.改正句子。25.高效展示一探究一1L6-1口头展示探究一2L4-2书面展示探究一3L3-2书面展示探究一4L5-2口头展示探究一5L7-3口头展示Comment1：L3-1秦；Comment2：L2-3臧26.写一个完整的句子1.这几句是正确的句子吗?如果你认为有误,该怎么改?1.Themeetingwilluntil3:00.2.Workhard,youwillsucceed.3.Ihaveabrother,whoisadoctor.lastand^^4.Thereareonly4studentsattendclass.^whoattendingLine6-1倪雪27.重点特别强调3.翻译下面的并列句4)____________

______HanHuisingwell,____________shedanceswell.

5)Imeantto____________youyesterday,butyouwerenotinyouroffice.或I____________totellyouyesterday,butyouwerenotinyouroffice.Notonlydoesbutalsohavetoldhadmeant28.1)Whenweshallhaveoursportsmeetingisstillaquestion.2)ThelettersaysthattheyareleavingonFriday.3)That’swhattheyshoulddo.4)WeexpressedthehopethattheywouldcomeandvisitChinaagain.5)ThisistheverydictionarythatIamlookingfor.6)Astimewenton,Einstein’stheoryprovedtobecorrect.

主语从句宾语从句表语从句同位语从句定语从句状语从句4.判断下面句子含有那种从句L5-2任云洋29.1)Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass,one-thirdofthemarefromnearbycountries.

1.Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass,______one-thirdofthemarefromnearbycountries.2.Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass,one-thirdof______arefromnearbycountries.5.改正下面句子，使之成为正确的一句话andwhomL7-3禚焕发30.2)Itwasraininghard,theycouldnotworkinthefield.

1.Itwasraininghard,______theycouldnotworkinthefield.2.Itwasraining______hard______theycouldnotworkinthefield.3.Theycouldnotworkinthefield_________itwasraininghard.4.

_______itwasraininghard,theycouldnotworkinthefield.sosothatbecauseAs31.3)Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom,hecarriedabagofbookswithhim.1.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom______hecarriedabagofbookswithhim.2.Theprofessor,_______carriedabagofbooks,walkedintotheclassroom,3.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom,___________abagofbookswithhim.（-ing）5.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroom_____abagofbooks.（prep）andwhocarryingwith32.合作探究二（小组快速讨论，做出决定。）Exercise二、句子连贯；Exercise三、句子简洁；Exercise四、设计段落。33.高效展示二探究二G1口头展示探究三G2口头展示探究四1G3口头展示探究四2G4口头展示34.二、句子的连贯Faulty:Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.

1).Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsoby

whathedoes.2).Amanisjudgednotonlybyhiswordsbutalsobyhisdeeds.

前后的一致、对等、平衡Group135.Attention

连贯性的要求是：句子前后之间要有照应，有衔接，思想的表达应该有序、清楚．句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造成歧义或矛盾．36.三、句子的简洁1.Doyouknowthegirlwhoisdressedinred?2.Theprofessorwalkedintotheclassroomandhecarriedabagofbookswithhim.3.Themanwhoisstandingbythewindowisourteacher.4.Wedidn’tknowhertelephonenumber,sowecouldn’tgetintouchwith