外研八下英语Unit 6 Presenting ideas-Reflection《单元写作》课件

写“改变大自然”的故事或事例单元写作写作维度本单元的写作项目是“改变大自然”，要求讲述一个人类改变大自然的故事或实例。一般涉及这几个方面：1.大自然被破坏的后果及人们改造自然的事例；2.环保行动与措施；3.人与自然关系的反思及呼吁。写作支架/模版写“改变大自然”的故事或事例开篇引出故事或事例描述其中的人物是如何改变大自然的故事或事例带给人们的影响黄金语料（从教材内外积累好句）开头段①IgotyourletterabouthavingtroubleunderstandingtheChineseidiomYuGongMovesaMountain.Letmetellittoyou.②Longlongago,therelived...③Letmesharethestorywithyou.④Haveyoueverheardofthestory...?中间段①Theytookactionto...②Althoughthetaskwasverydifficult,hedidn’tgiveitup.③Hisperseverance（毅力）anddetermination（决心）movedthegods.④Thanksto...,heachievedhisdream.结尾段①Thestorytellsusthatwecanchangenature.②Weshouldnevergiveup.③WecanlearnYuGong’sspiritofperseveranceandthebeliefthatwithdetermination,eventhemostdifficulttaskscanbefinishedfromthisexample.经典例题（从经典例题中学会审题）[山东日照中考改编]假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack正在学习中文，对理解成语“愚公移山(YuGongMovesaMountain)”有困难，来信向你请教。请用英语写一封回信，内容包括：1.讲述成语故事；2.故事带给人们的影响。审时态：一般现在时与一般过去时审人称：第一人称与第三人称审体裁：应用文审要点：讲述成语故事；故事带给人们的影响注意：1.词数：90左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4.提示词：perseverance毅力；不屈不挠的精神determination决心。DearJack,IgotyourletterabouthavingtroubleunderstandingtheChineseidiomYuGongMovesaMountain.Letmetellittoyou.______________________________________________________Don’thesitatetoaskifyouhaveanyquestions.Yours,LiHua精彩范文[从教材内外积累好句]DearJack,IgotyourletterabouthavingtroubleunderstandingtheChineseidiomYuGongMovesaMountain.Letmetellittoyou.Longlongago,therelivedaveryoldmannamedYuGong.Hedecidedtomovetwolargemountainsthatblockedthewaytohishome.Althoughthetaskwasverydifficult,hedidn’tgiveitup.①Althoughmoderntechnologyissolving...（教材P93）Heandhischildrentookactiontoremovethemountainsalldayandallnight.Hisperseveranceanddeterminationmovedthegods.Theysentdivinebeingstohelphim.Thankstothedivinebeings,YuGongachievedhisdream.②Thankstothekarezsystem,...（教材P93）Thestorytellsusthathumanbeingscanchangenature.IbelievewecanlearnYuGong’sspiritofperseveranceandthebeliefthatwithdetermination,eventhemostdifficulttaskscanbefinishedfromthisexample.Don’thesitatetoaskifyouhaveanyquestions.Yours,LiHua③Ibelievewecanlearn...fromthisexample.（教材P96）【亮点词块】giveup放弃takeaction采取行动achieveone’sdream实现某人的梦想learn...from...从······学到······【高分句子】Longlongago,therelivedaveryoldmannamedYuGong.（倒装句）很久以前住着一位名叫愚公的老人。Althoughthetaskwasverydifficult,hedidn’tgiveitup.（Although引导让步状语从句）尽管任务很难，但他没有放弃。实战演练假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom对中国普通人创造的奇迹很感兴趣。请你根据以下材料，给Tom写一封信，介绍晋西北老人代喜增的事迹，并谈谈你从他身上学到了什么。在辽阔的晋西北，一位名叫代喜增的老人，用15年时间，把自然的恶劣与生活的艰辛转化为动力，勇敢投身植树造林事业。无数日夜的坚持后，他成功改造这片土地，绿化八条沟、建立七条防风林带，种植三千七百亩林网，让原本沙尘暴肆虐的黄土变为生机盎然的绿洲。他以85岁的人生，创造了生态奇迹。要求：1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。DearTom,I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheinspiringstoryofanoldmannamedDaiXizeng._______________________________________________________Bestregards,LiHua范文参考DearTom,I’mwritingtosharewithyoutheinspiringstoryofanoldmannamedDaiXizeng.InthenorthwestofShanxi,therelivesanoldmannamedDaiXizeng.Fifteenyearsago,helivedinapoorarea.Desertswereseeneverywhere.Theclimatewasverydryandplantscouldn’tgrowhere.Itwasdifficultforpeopletolivehere.Helongedtochangenaturehere.Everydayhewasbusyplantingtrees.Althoughmanytreesdied,hedidn’tgiveup.Hecalledonotherpeopletotakeactiontoplanttrees.ThankstoDaiXizeng,thedesertshavechangedintopiecesofgreenland.Theclimateisn’tdryanylonger.Theoldmancreatedawonderattheageof85.Nowpeoplethereliveahappylife.Fromhim,Ilearntthespiritofperseveranc