外研八下英语Unit 5 Presenting ideas-Reflection《单元写作》课件

探索大自然单元写作写作维度本单元的写作项目是“探索大自然”。相关内容通过以下几个方面：（1）讲述自然探索者的故事；（2）介绍探索自然的经历；（3）通过探索经历反思人与自然的关系。写作支架/模版写“探索大自然的故事”开篇引出人物具体描述人物探索大自然的故事对人物的评价黄金语料（从教材内外积累好句）开头段①Mostpeoplegetinterestedandaskquestions.Butonepersontookhisinterestallthewaytothefields.②...wasbornin...on...③Whenweseethehybridrice,wethinkofYuanLongping.④HaveyoueverheardofYuanLongping?中间段①Throughouthislife,YuanLongpingworkedhardtoresearchthehybridrice.②Tocarryouthisresearch,hespentyearsinthefields.③Thoughfacingmanychallenges,heneverstoppedhiswork.④Butheseldomthoughtaboutpersonalhonourorwealth.结尾段①Ithinkweshouldlearnfromhisspiritofhardworkandlifelongexplorationandmakeapositivecontributiontooursociety.②Weshouldlearnfromhimandstudyhard.③Althoughhepassedaway,hisspiritstilllivesinourhearts.经典例题（从经典例题学会审题）请根据以下要点提示，写一篇文章介绍中国“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平。审人称：第三人称审体裁：记叙文审时态：一般过去时要点：1.出生地：北京；出生时间：1930年9月7日。2.袁对大自然和科学展现出浓厚的兴趣。1953年西南大学毕业后，他决定探索大自然，研究杂交水稻。3.袁隆平一生都努力研究杂交水稻，并且最终取得了成功。4.袁隆平因为他的贡献而被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。5.你的评价。审要点：出生信息、兴趣与决定、努力与成就、称号。提示词：杂交水稻hybridrice要求：1.词数80左右；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.条理清楚，语句通顺，语义连贯，书写规范。精彩范文[从教材内外积累好句]YuanLongpingwasborninBeijingonSeptember7th,1930.Hetookhisinterestallthewaytothescienceandnature.AftergraduatingfromSouthwestUniversityin1953,hedecidedtoexplorenatureanddoresearchonthehybridrice.①Thecityshinesbrighterbecauseofus,...（教材P5）Throughouthislife,YuanLongpingworkedhardtoresearchhybridrice.Heworkedinthefieldsandfinallyachievedsuccess.Thoughfacingmanychallenges,Yuanneverstoppedhiswork.Yuanisalsoknownasthe“FatherofHybridRice”becauseofhiscontribution.ButYuanseldomthoughtaboutpersonalhonourorwealth.②Throughouthislife,ProfessorWangworkedhardtoresearchthe...（教材P76）③...,Wangseldomthoughtaboutpersonalhonourorwealth.（教材P77）Ithinkweshouldlearnfromhisspiritofhardworkandlifelongexplorationandmakeapositivecontributiontooursociety.【亮点词块】doresearchon研究……achievesuccess实现成功becauseof因为makeapostivecontributionto...为……做积极贡献【高分句子】Thoughfacingmanychallenges,Yuanneverstoppedhiswork.（Though引导让步状语从句）尽管面临诸多挑战，袁从没有停止他的工作。Ithinkweshouldlearnfromhisspiritofhardworkandlifelongexplorationandmakeapositivecontributiontooursociety.（省略了that的宾语从句）我认为我们应该学习他的艰苦奋斗和终生探索的精神，为我们的社会做出积极贡献。实战演练上周你们的生物老师带领你们去爬山，探索大自然，了解了不同的植物，并对一些花进行了研究……你开始热爱大自然，决定在未来当一名科学家，探索大自然的奥秘。写一篇80词左右的文章，描述你上周探索自然的经历。范文参考MyNatureExplorationNaturepresentsuswithendlesswonders.Lastweekourbiologyteachertookustoclimbthemountaintoexplorenature.Welearnedaboutdifferentplantswiththehelpofourteacher.Wealsostudiedsomeflowerscarefully.Welearnedflowersgrowandsleepwithseasonsandthatdifferentspeciesliveindifferentplaces.Natureisfullofsecrets.Weshowedgreatinterestinit.Thistripinsp