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高中英语2026届高考读后续写讲解与练习系列(共五篇)系列设计说明读后续写是高考英语新题型(浙江卷2016年首创,2023年全国卷全面推行),要求考生根据给定文本(约350词)的情节、人物、语言风格,续写两段(每段首句已给),总词数约250词。其核心考查文本理解能力、情节构思能力、语言模仿能力,需兼顾“逻辑连贯性”“情感一致性”“语言风格匹配性”。本系列共五篇练习,覆盖人与自我(成长励志)、人与社会(亲情/友情)、人与自然(冒险/救助)三大高频主题,难度梯度递进(从基础情节梳理到复杂情感冲突),每篇包含原文分析→续写思路→语言积累→实战演练→参考范文,帮助学生系统掌握续写技巧。第一篇:人与自我——克服恐惧,突破自我(基础篇)原文材料(节选)Itwasthefirstdayofmyhighschoolmountainclimbingclub.Ihadalwaysbeenafraidofheights,butmybestfriend,Lily,convincedmetojoin.“It’llbefun!”shepromised.Aswereachedthebaseofthesteepcliff,myheartraced.Theinstructorhandedmeaharnessandsaid,“You’llbefineifyoutrustyourself.”Inoddednervously,butmyhandstrembledasIputiton.Whenitwasmyturntoclimb,Ifrozeatthebottomoftherockwall.“Comeon,youcandoit!”Lilyshouted.Itookadeepbreathandgrabbedthefirsthold…第一段首句:Halfwayupthewall,myfeetslippedandIswungwildly.

第二段首句:WhenIfinallyreachedthetop,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.讲解与思路1.原文关键信息提取人物:我(恐高但想突破)、Lily(朋友,鼓励者)、教练(指导者)。情节:因朋友鼓励参加登山俱乐部→面对攀岩墙恐惧→穿上安全带但手抖→轮到自己时僵在原地→Lily喊加油→我深呼吸抓住第一个岩点(续写起点)。主题:克服恐惧,突破自我(成长类)。2.续写逻辑设计第一段:抓“halfwayup…slippedandswungwildly”→恐惧升级(心跳加速/想放弃)→朋友/教练的鼓励或自我心理斗争→尝试稳定身体继续向上。第二段:抓“reachedthetop”→情绪爆发(喜悦/自豪)→回顾过程(意识到自己突破了恐惧)→未来态度转变(不再害怕高度/更勇敢)。3.语言风格匹配原文用简单句+心理描写(“myheartraced”“Ifroze”),续写需保持口语化(如“Iwantedtoquit”“Myhandsshook”)和情感词汇(如“terrified”“proud”)。实战演练(学生续写两段,每段80-100词)参考范文:

第一段:Halfwayupthewall,myfeetslippedandIswungwildly.Myheartpoundedlikeadrum,andforasecond,IthoughtI’dfall.“Don’tlookdown!”Lilyyelled.Iclosedmyeyes,grippingtheholdstightly.“You’vegotthis!”thecoachcalled.Iopenedmyeyes,tookashakybreath,andsearchedforthenexthold.Myfingersached,butIforcedmyselftomove—oneslowstepatatime.Thewindwhippedmyface,butIkeptclimbing,tellingmyself,“Justalittlehigher.”第二段:WhenIfinallyreachedthetop,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Theviewwasbreathtaking,butevenbetterwastheprideswellinginmychest.Lilyranoverandhuggedme.“Toldyouit’dbefun!”shegrinned.Thecoachpattedmyback.“See?Youtrustedyourself.”Ilookeddownattheground,oncesoterrifying,nowfarbelow.Thatday,Ilearnedfeardoesn’tdisappear—itfadeswhenyoufaceit.Fromthenon,Inolongeravoidedheights;instead,Isawthemaschallengestoconquer.第二篇:人与社会——亲情守护(情感冲突篇)原文材料(节选)Mygrandfatherhadalwaysbeenthetoughoneinourfamily.Herarelyshowedemotions,andwhenmygrandmotherpassedawaylastwinter,heshuthimselfinhisroom,refusingtotalktoanyone.Onhis80thbirthday,myparentsthrewasmallparty,invitingalltherelatives.ButGrandpasatinthecorner,staringattheoldphotoofGrandma.“Hewon’teveneatthecake,”mymomwhispered.Iwalkedoverandsatbesidehim.“Grandpa,doyouwanttotalkabouther?”Heshookhishead,butInoticedatearrollingdownhischeek…第一段首句:Igentlytookhishandandsaid,“Imisshertoo.”

第二段首句:Aftertheparty,Grandpacalledmetohisroom.讲解与思路1.原文关键信息提取人物:我、祖父(因祖母去世封闭自我)、父母(组织派对)、祖母(已故)。情节:祖父因祖母去世拒绝交流→80岁生日派对上独自看老照片→我尝试安慰他(问他是否想聊聊)→他摇头但流泪(情感松动)。主题:亲情守护(通过陪伴化解悲伤)。2.续写逻辑设计第一段:抓“Igentlytookhishand…”→祖父的反应(从抗拒到接受陪伴)→我们回忆祖母的往事(具体细节:如祖母做的点心、一起散步)→祖父情绪逐渐平复(如握紧我的手)。第二段:抓“calledmetohisroom”→祖父的主动(可能拿出祖母的信物/讲述未说出口的爱)→我们的深度交流(如祖父道歉“不该封闭自己”)→关系修复(我承诺常陪他)。3.语言风格匹配原文用细腻情感描写(“refusingtotalk”“atearrollingdown”),续写需延续温柔语气(如“hisvoicecracked”“Iheldhiswrinkledhand”)和回忆性语言(如“rememberhowGrandmausedto…”)。实战演练参考范文:

第一段:Igentlytookhishandandsaid,“Imisshertoo.”Grandpa’shandtrembledatfirst,thensqueezedminetightly.“Shemadethebestapplepie,”hemurmured,eyesdistant.Inodded.“Irememberhowshe’dletmelickthebowl.”Hechuckledsoftly,asoundIhadn’theardinmonths.Wesatthere,sharingstories—howGrandmadancedintherain,howthey’dplantedrosestogether.Hisgripsoftened,andforthefirsttimeinweeks,hesmiled.第二段:Aftertheparty,Grandpacalledmetohisroom.Heopenedanoldwoodenboxandpulledoutafadedlocket.“Yourgrandmagavethistomeonour50thanniversary,”hesaid,voicethick.“Shesaiditheldourlove.”Iexaminedthetinyphotoinside—Grandma,youngandsmiling.Grandpawipedhiseyes.“I’vebeenselfish,shuttingeveryoneout.Butyou…youremindedmeshe’dwantmetokeepliving.”Ihuggedhim.“We’llmakenewmemoriestogether,Grandpa.”第三篇:人与自然——丛林冒险与救助(情节冲突篇)原文材料(节选)TomandIhadplannedatwo-dayhikeintheAmazonrainforest.Wewereexperiencedcampers,butnothingcouldprepareusforthestormthathitonthefirstnight.Lightningsplitthesky,andtherivernearbyroserapidly.Bymorning,ourcampsitewasflooded,andourmapwaswashedaway.“We’relost,”Tommuttered.Icheckedourcompass,buttheneedlespunwildly—probablydamagedbythestorm.Suddenly,weheardalowgrowlfromthebushes…第一段首句:Wefroze,oureyesfixedonthedenseleaves.

第二段首句:Justthen,anativeboyappeared,holdingaspear.讲解与思路1.原文关键信息提取人物:Tom(同伴)、我(叙述者)、未知威胁(丛林中的咆哮声)。情节:计划两天的雨林徒步→暴风雨导致营地被淹、地图丢失→指南针失灵→迷路→听到灌木丛中的低吼声(危机出现)。主题:困境中的互助与生存智慧(人与自然冲突)。2.续写逻辑设计第一段:抓“Wefroze…”→危险靠近的细节(如灌木丛晃动、动物眼睛反光)→我们的反应(握紧工具/后退)→尝试冷静分析(如“可能是美洲豹,别动”)。第二段:抓“anativeboyappeared…”→男孩的身份(可能是当地向导/猎人)→他的行为(帮助/警告)→我们如何与他沟通(手势/简单语言)→危机解除(如男孩带路走出丛林)。3.语言风格匹配原文用紧张氛围描写(“lightningsplitthesky”“theneedlespunwildly”),续写需保持紧迫感(如“myheartthudded”“thegrowlgrewlouder”)和动作细节(如“grippedtheknife”“steppedbackslowly”)。实战演练参考范文:

第一段:Wefroze,oureyesfixedonthedenseleaves.Thegrowlturnedintoasnarl,andapairofglowingeyesemergedfromtheshadows.Mybreathcaught—Irecognizedtheyellowfurofajaguar.“Don’tmove,”IwhisperedtoTom.Thebigcatcrouched,musclestensing,justtenfeetaway.Islowlyreachedfortheflashlightinmybackpack,hopingthebeamwouldscareitoff.Tomheldupastickdefensively.Thejaguartookastepforward,thenpaused,sniffingtheair.第二段:Justthen,anativeboyappeared,holdingaspear.Hewhistledsharply,andthejaguarhissedbeforevanishingintothebushes.“Youarefoolishtowalkherealone,”hesaidinbrokenEnglish.Inodded,reliefwashingoverme.Hegesturedforustofollowandledusalonganarrowtrail.Afterhoursofwalking,wesawtheedgeoftheforestandadirtroad.“Gotothevillage,”hesaid.“Theywillhelpyou.”Weturnedtothankhim,buthehadalreadydisappearedintothegreen.第四篇:人与社会——友情考验与和解(情感成长篇)原文材料(节选)EmmaandIhadbeenbestfriendssincekindergarten.Butlastmonth,shestartedhangingoutwithanewgroupofgirlswhoteasedmeforwearing“old-fashioned”clothes.Itriedtoignoreit,butwhentheyspreadarumorthatIcheatedonatest,Isnapped.“You’rejustlikethem!”IyelledatEmma.Shelookedhurtbutdidn’tdefendme.Wehaven’tspokensince.Today,Isawhersittingaloneinthecafeteria,hereyesredasifshe’dbeencrying…第一段首句:Itookadeepbreathandwalkedovertohertable.

第二段首句:Emmalookedup,hervoicetrembling.讲解与思路1.原文关键信息提取人物:我、Emma(曾经的好友)、新朋友群体(霸凌者)。情节:Emma结识新朋友并疏远我→新朋友散布谣言→我愤怒指责Emma→两人冷战→今天看到Emma独自哭泣(情感转折点)。主题:友情中的误解与和解(信任与沟通的重要性)。2.续写逻辑设计第一段:抓“Itookadeepbreath…”→我的主动(表达关心而非指责)→Emma的反应(惊讶/防御/流泪)→我们开始坦诚交流(如“我听说了谣言,但我知道不是真的”)。第二段:抓“Emmalookedup…”→Emma的解释(如“我怕失去新朋友,没及时帮你”)→双方的反思(承认自己的错误)→和解(拥抱/承诺重新做朋友)。3.语言风格匹配原文用校园生活细节(“old-fashionedclothes”“cafeteria”),续写需保持贴近生活的对话(如“I’msorryIdidn’tstandupforyou”“Iwasscaredthey’dleaveme”)和情感词汇(如“guilt”“relief”)。实战演练参考范文:

第一段:Itookadeepbreathandwalkedovertohertable.Emmaflinchedwhenshesawme,butIsatdownanyway.“Hey,”Isaidsoftly.Shewipedhereyes,avoidingmygaze.“I…Iknowyoudidn’tstarttherumor,”Icontinued.“ButIgotmadandsaidthingsIshouldn’thave.”Emma’slipquivered.“I’msorrytoo.Ididn’tknowhowtostopthem.IthoughtifIstayedaway,itwouldn’tgetworse.”Ireachedforherhand.“We’vebeenfriendsfortenyears.Canwefigurethisout?”第二段:Emmalookedup,hervoicetrembling.“Imissedyou,”sheadmitted.“Thosegirlswerejusttryingtobecool,buttheyweren’tmyrealfriends.Ishould’vetoldthemtoleaveyoualone.”Tearswelledupinmyeyes.“Meneither.Iwasstupidtopushyouaway.”Shethrewherarmsaroundme,andIhuggedherback.“Let’sforgetthosemeangirls,”shesaid.“We’vegoteachother.”第五篇:人与自我——梦想追逐与坚持(励志篇)原文材料(节选)Lenahaddreamedofbecomingadancersinceshewasfive.Butlastyear,acaraccidentleftherwithabrokenleg.Thedoctorsaiditwouldtakemonthstoheal,andshemightneverdanceagain.Lenacriedfordays.Whenshefinallygotoutofthecast,shetriedtostand,butherlegbuckled.“It’sover,”shewhispered.Hermotherplacedaballetshoeonherbedsidetable.“Neversaynever,”shesaid.Lenastaredattheshoe,itsribbonstangled.Maybe…maybeshecouldtryagain…第一段首句:Thenextmorning,Lenatiedtheribbonsoftheballetshoearoundherankle.

第二段首句:Monthslater,Lenastoodonthestageofthelocaldancecompetition.讲解与思路1.原文关键信息提取人物:Lena(舞者梦想者)、母亲(支持者)。情节:车祸导致腿伤→医生断言可能无法跳舞→Lena绝望→母亲放芭蕾舞鞋暗示鼓励→Lena看到鞋子后重燃希望。主题:梦想的坚持与重生(逆境中的韧性)。2.续写逻辑设计第一段:抓“Thenextmorning…”→Lena的初次尝试(疼痛/摔倒/坚持)→日常训练的细节(如每天拉伸、单脚平衡)→微小的进步(如能站稳10秒)。第二段:抓“Monthslater…”→舞台上的表现(紧张/自信)→观众的反应(掌声)→Lena的感悟(梦想值得坚持)。3.语言风格匹配原文用梦想与挫折对比(“dreamedofdancing”“mightneverdanceagain”),续写需保持积极向上的语言(如“everystepwaspain,butIkeptgoing”“themusicliftedme”)。实战演练参考范文:

第一段:Thenextmorning,Lenatiedtheribbonsoftheballetshoearoundherankle.Themomentherfootslidintotheshoe,painshotthroughherleg,butsheignoredit.Shestoodslowly,grippingthebedpost.Herlegwobbled,andshenearlyfell,butshecaughtherself.“Oneminute,”shewhispered.Daybyday,shepracticed—stretchinghercalf,balancingonon

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