法律英语翻译练习与答案完整版

HUAsystemofficeroom【HUA16H-TTMS2A-HUAS8Q8-HUAH1688】HUAsystemofficeroom【HUA16H-TTMS2A-HUAS8Q8-HUAH1688】法律英语翻译练习与答案练习1：外国合营者如果有意以落后的技术和设备进行欺骗，造成损失的，应赔偿损失。Iftheforeignjointventurercausesanylossesbydeceptionthroughtheintentionaluseofbackwardtechnologyandequipment,itshallpaycompensationforthelosses.修改提示：单复数考虑不周；用语不够简洁。答案（修改要点）：causesanylosses→causesanyloss(es)造成一项或多项损失时都应当赔偿，不能仅用复数形式。paycompensationforthelosses→paycompensationtherefor(therefor=forthat/them)练习2：人民法院、人民检察院和公安机关办理刑事案件，应当分工负责，互相配合，互相制约，以保证准确有效地执行法律。原译文：Thepeople’scourts,people’sprocuratoratesandpublicsecurityorgansshall,inhandlingcriminalcases,dividetheirfunctions,eachtakingresponsibilityforitsownwork,andtheyshallco-ordinatetheireffortsandcheckeachothertoensurecorrectandeffectiveenforcementoflaw.修改提示：“分工负责”，应理解为：侧重点在“负责”，而非“分工”，即分工过程中各负其责；respective比own更为妥当、准确；原来的译文中，andtheyshall…比较啰嗦，更严重的问题是，使toensure…割断了与dividetheirfunctions的联系。答案（修改要点）：inhandlingcriminalcases,dividetheirfunctions,eachtakingresponsibilityforitsownwork,andtheyshallco-ordinatetheireffortsandcheckeachothertoensurecorrectandeffectiveenforcementoflaw.→…inhandlingcriminalcases,takeresponsibilityfortheirrespectiveworkwhiledividingfunctions,co-ordinate,andcheckeachother,toensurecorrectandeffectiveenforcementoflaw.练习3：商标注册人享有商标专用权，受法律保护。原译文：Trademarkregistrantsshallenjoytherighttoexclusiveuseoftheirtrademarksandshallbeprotectedbylaw.修改提示：商标专用权的译文“貌合神离”，立法原意是“商标专有权”；受法律保护的主语有些歧义，可加括号处理；原文shall滥用，因为并未刻意强调“必须，一定要”。答案（修改为）：Trademarkregistrantshavetheexclusivetrademarkright,(andare)protectedbylaw.练习4：被告人的犯罪情节极其严重、社会影响极其恶劣、社会危害极其严重。原译文：Theextremelyseriouscircumstancesoftheoffensecommittedbytheaccusedhavebroughtabominableinfluenceandseverehazardtothewholesociety.修改提示：bring的用法有些生硬，动宾搭配不太适当。答案（修改为）：havebroughtabominableinfluenceandseverehazardtothewholesociety.→haveexertedanabominableinfluenceandposedaseverehazardtosociety.(exert,vt.施加，产生，如exertpressureon,exertaninfluenceon;abominable,adj.可恶的，极坏的；posev.提出，形成，成为；使摆好姿势poseaproblem;poseanobstacle/athreatto…)练习5：买卖双方同意按下列条款由卖方出售，买方购进下列货物：货号;品名及规格；数量；单价；总值(数量及总值均有_____%的增减,由卖方决定)；生产国和制造厂家；包装；唛头；装运期限；装运口岸；目的口岸；保险；付款；单据；装运条件；品质与数量的异议与索赔；不可抗力；仲裁。答案：Theselleragreestosellandthebuyeragreestobuytheunder-mentionedgoodsonthetermsandconditionsstatedbelow:articlenumber;descriptionandspecification;quantity;unitprice;totalamount(with%moreorlessbothinamountandquantityallowedattheseller’soption);countryoforiginandmanufacturer;packing;shippingmarks;timeofshipment;portofloading;portofdestination;insurance;payment;document;termsofshipment;quality/quantitydiscrepancyandclaim;forcemajeure;andarbitration.(唛头：货物包装上的标记，markonthepackageofgoods;shippingmarks)练习6：SellersmayincreaseanypriceonthefirstdayofeachquarterbydeliveringormailingwrittennoticetoBuyeratleastfifteendayspriortosuchday.Buyer,however,shallhavetherighttocanceltheportiontowhichsuchincreaseinpriceappliesbydeliveringorm