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十句话搞定读后续写

十句五定法第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Wesometimestakeourlovedones'concernforgrantedandshowourworstmoodtothefamily.Duringmygrowth,anexperienceinseniorhighschoolstoodoutinmymemory.Asataxidriver,mydaddrovethroughchaoticstreetswithheavytraffic.Sometimeshehadtodealwithrudepassengersandstrugglewiththinincome.Despitethese,henevercomplained.Dadwasdevotedtoourfamilyandcaredmuchaboutus.ThesunflowerkeychainIhadgivenhimasaFather'sDaygiftinfifthgradehadlonglostitsshine.Yethehaditattachedtohisleatherbelteverywherehewent.Everydayhesimplyheadedoutearlyinhisworn-outuniformwithtwopatches(补丁)andreturnedlatewithatiredbutwarmsmile.Whenwejokedabouthis"fashionablepatches",he'dlaughandsay,"Thesearemymedalsofhonour!"

AsIenteredseniorhighschool,myworldbecameoverwhelming.Mathsproblemsdancedinmyhead.Mygradesdidn'timprovebutevendeclined.Schoolpressuresskyrocketed.Evensmallthingswouldsetmeoff.Dad'sdaily"How'sschooltoday?"feltlikeanotherweightonmyback.Iwasmeantohisinquiries,eventhoughIknewhemeantwell.Onedayafterafrustratingexam,Ireturnedhome,mybackpackstrap(肩带)cuttingintomyshoulder.Dadwascalculatingthetaxibillsthen."Hey,"hesaid,withasmileonhisface,"howis..""STOPIT!"Thewordsexplodedoutofme."You'realwaysinmybusiness!Can'tyoujust...leavemeALONE?"Hefroze.Thepenhewasholdingrolledoffthetable.Hisfacefell,asifI'dthrowncoldwateronhim.Thenhestoodupslowlyandwalkedtohisroom.Thedoorshutsoftly-notaslam(砰地关上)，justaquietclick-thatsomehowhurtmeworse.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。

Iwasshockedmyselfandmyeyesfellonthekeychain,mymindracing.

Iknockedatthedooranditopened.

故事人物

情节发展

核心冲突

情感变化

“我”（高中生），爸爸（出租车司机）我的学业压力vs爸爸的日常关心

（关心变成了负担）

烦躁

爆发

震惊

后悔

自责

鼓起勇气道歉

释然、感恩环节内容起因发展1

一次考试失利后，我对爸爸大吼，“

。”爸爸愣住，默默走回房间。发展2我看到旧钥匙扣，想起爸爸

。转折我开始感到

。承接我终于

。烦躁Stopit多年的付出和关爱自责和后悔走到爸爸房间敲门道歉我进入高中后学业压力大，对爸爸的日常关心感到_________

[续写思路]1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我自己也惊呆了，目光落在那串钥匙扣上，思绪万千。”可知，第一段可描写______________________________

____________________________________________________________

②由第二段首句内容“我敲了敲门，门开了。”可知，第二段可描写________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．续写线索：看到钥匙扣——回忆父亲的付出——内心自责——下决心道歉——敲门——父亲开门——道歉原谅——结局与升华

我看到钥匙扣后，想起父亲多年来的辛苦付出和对自己无言的爱，内心充满自责和后悔，最终鼓起勇气走向父亲的房间。

父亲开门后的情景，我真诚道歉，父亲宽容地拥抱我，两人

和好如初，我从中领悟到要珍惜家人的关爱。第一句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________承接段首句“思绪万千”，钥匙扣提醒我父亲多年的辛劳付出。他从不抱怨，我却对他大喊大叫。That

tiny,fadedsunflowerremindedmeofmydad’syearsofhardworkandsilentsacrifices.十句五定法：He

nevercomplainedabouthistiringworkorhispatcheduinfrom.AndwhatdidIdotohim?Ishoutedtohim!Myoutburstreplayedinmyhead,sharpandugly.第三句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第四句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________意识到爸爸只是关心我。Irealizedthathisquestionswerejusthiswaytostayconnectedtomylife.愧疚涌上心头,忘不了他受伤的眼神。Guiltwashedoverme.Icouldstillseethehurtinhiseyes.第五句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第六句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________承接第二段段首句“敲门”，我决定去道歉。SoIwalkedtohisroom,steppedbeforethedoor,andtookadeepbreath.爸爸温柔地看着我。Dadsatontheedgeofhisbed,eyeswearybutsoftwhenhesawmeholdingthesunflowerkeychain.第七句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第八句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我哽咽道歉。爸爸只是想知道我好不好。Ihandedittohim,voicechoking,“I’msorry,dad.Ishouldn’thavesnappedatyou.”He

tookthekeychaingently.“Ijustwantedtoknowyou’reok,”hemurmured.第九句话：________________________________________________________________