高考英语书面表达热点话题：感动中国2022苏炳添和中国航天人

高考英语书面表达热点话题：感动中国2022苏炳添和中国航天人1．（2021·辽宁丹东·高一期末）前不久，你校学生一同观看了我国神州十二号飞船发射直播，大家很受鼓舞。为使学生了解更多的航天知识，你校决定举行一次关于航天科学（SpaceScience）的讲座，假设你是国际学校的学生会主席李华，请用英语写一则书面通知，内容包括：1.讲座的时间、地点；2.讲座的目的及内容；3.希望同学们踊跃参加。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Notice________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudents'Union2．（2021·四川省成都市新都一中高二期末）假定你是某中学学生李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国运动员苏炳添在东京奥运会上的表现印象深刻，特来信与你分享对他的钦佩之情，并询问谁是你最钦佩的运动员。请你根据以下要点给Tom写封回信：1.赞同Tom的看法；2.介绍自己钦佩的运动员；3.钦佩的理由。参考词汇：东京奥运会TokyoOlympics注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearTom,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．（2021·甘肃·兰州市第二十七中学高三阶段练习）假如你是高三学生李华。你的英国网友Jack看到中国运动员苏炳添在东京奥运会百米赛跑半决赛（semi-final）中刷新了亚洲记录，非常敬佩，想了解苏炳添的有关情况。请根据以下提示用英语给他回一封电子邮件。主要内容：1.为苏炳添的成绩感到自豪；2.简介有关情况，肯定他的付出和努力；3.谈谈自己的感受。注意：1.词数100-120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总字数。DearJack,_________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．（2022·江西·沂水县第一中学高三阶段练习）三位中国宇航员被成功送入太空，请你就此事写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.讲述感受；2.表达决心；3.发出倡议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词：航天器spacecraft5．（2021·江苏徐州·高三期中）神州十三号顺利升空，王亚平成为我国第一个太空行走的女性航天员；她十几年如一日刻苦训练，从不言弃，终于实现了自己的航天梦。你校正组织向她学习的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍她的优秀品质，并谈谈作为青年人如何向她学习。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MySpaceHero________________________________________________________6．（2022·江苏·姜堰中学高二期末）假定你是李华，受学校英文报的约稿，写一篇关于我国2021年6月17日神州十二号航天员（聂海胜、刘伯明和汤洪波）进入太空并在太空执行为期3个月的飞行任务的英文报道。内容包括：1.新闻概要；2.太空生活和工作；3.意义。注意：1.词数应为80左右2.可适当增加情节使行文连贯。Shenzhou-12Chinalaunchedfirstcrewtonewspacestation________________________________________________________参考答案：1．NoticeInordertoletstudentslearnmoreaboutSpaceScience,alectureaboutitwillbeheldintheschoolhallat2o'clockthisFridayafternoonandwilllasttwohours.Thelecturemainlyinvolves2parts,thefirstofwhichisabriefintroductionofourrecentlaunch.Thesecondpartwillbegivenbythesameexpertsandwillbeaboutthescientificbenefitsofspaceflight.Itwillbegiveninsuchawaythatyouwillunderstandit.Youwilllearnalotfromthelectureandhaveabetterunderstandingofspace.Everyonewhoisinterestedinthelectureiswelcome.TheStudents'Union【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一则书面通知，介绍学校关于航天科学的讲座情况。【详解】1.词汇积累演讲：speech→lecture了解：knowabout→learnabout最近的：latest→recent感兴趣：takeaninterestin=beinterestedin2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Itwillbegiveninsuchawaythatyouwillunderstandit.Youwilllearnalotfromthelectureandhaveabetterunderstandingofspace.拓展句：Sinceitwillbegiveninsuchawaythatyouwillunderstandit,youwilllearnalotfromthelectureandhaveabetterunderstandingofspace.【点睛】[高分句型1]InordertoletstudentslearnmoreaboutSpaceScience,alectureaboutitwillbeheldintheschoolhallat2o'clockthisFridayafternoonandwilllasttwohours.(运用了不定式作目的状语)[高分句型2]Thelecturemainlyinvolves2parts,thefirstofwhichisabriefintroductionofourrecentlaunch.(运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)2．DearTom,Howareyou?FromyourletterIgettoknowSuBingtiancharmsyou.Yes,Icouldn'tagreemorewithyouthatheisanexcellentathleteworthadmiring.Andindeed,hisperformanceinTokyoOlympicsisextraordinary.Asamatteroffact,besidesSuBingtian,therearemanyotheroutstandingathletesinChinatoo,amongwhomIadmireQuanHongchanmost.Shewasbornintoapoorfamily.However,withhertalentandmoreimportantly,herpersistentefforts,shechangesherlife.Herstoryreallyinspiresmetopursuemyowndreambravely.SuBingtianandQuanHongchansetagoodexampleforus.Webothshouldholdontoourdream,right?Bestwishes!Yours,【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Tom写封回信，介绍你最钦佩的运动员。【详解】1.词汇积累事实上：asamatteroffact→infact优秀的：outstanding→excellent欣赏：admire→appreciate鼓励：inspire→encourage2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Andindeed,hisperformanceinTokyoOlympicsisextraordinary.拓展句：Andindeed,hisperformanceinTokyoOlympicsisextraordinary,whichisimpressive.【点睛】[高分句型1]Asamatteroffact,besidesSuBingtian,therearemanyotheroutstandingathletesinChinatoo,amongwhomIadmireQuanHongchanmost.(运用了介词+whom引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Yes,Icouldn'tagreemorewithyouthatheisanexcellentathleteworthadmiring.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)3．DearJack,KnowingthatyouadmireSuBingtianverymuchbecausehebroketheAsianrecordinthesemi-finalofthe100meterraceintheTokyoOlympicGames,I’mproudofhisachievementaswell.SuBingtian,the32-year-oldman,isaChineserunner.HewasborninZhongshanCity,GuangdongProvinceonAugust20th,1989.HetookpartintheregularmatchinNovember,2004forthefirsttime.Afterthat,hewonmanyfirstprizesinallkindsofmatches.Becauseofhisdedicationandefforts,in2021,SuBingtiandidwhatnoChineserunnerhaddonebefore,ashesprintedtosecureaplaceinthe100mmen’sfinalattheOlympicGamesinTokyo.Hedeservesthismedal,andhereallyisaflyingmanofChina,ofAsia.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给敬佩苏炳添的英国网友Jack回一封电子邮件，向他介绍在东京奥运会百米赛跑半决赛中刷新了亚洲记录的中国运动员苏炳添。【详解】1.词汇积累对……自豪：takepridein=beproudof参加：participatein=takepartin比赛：competition→match因为：dueto/owingto=becauseof2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：SuBingtian,the32-year-oldman,isaChineserunner.HewasborninZhongshanCity,GuangdongProvinceonAugust20th,1989.拓展句：SuBingtian,the32-year-oldman,isaChineserunner,whowasborninZhongshanCity,GuangdongProvinceonAugust20th,1989.【点睛】[高分句型1]KnowingthatyouadmireSuBingtianverymuchbecausehebroketheAsianrecordinthesemi-finalofthe100meterraceintheTokyoOlympicGames,I’mproudofhisachievementaswell.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型2]Becauseofhisdedicationandefforts,in2021,SuBingtiandidwhatnoChineserunnerhaddonebefore,ashesprintedtosecureaplaceinthe100mmen’sfinalattheOlympicGamesinTokyo.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)4．Dearclassmates,WhilewatchingthehistoricmomentwhenthethreeChineseastronautsweresentupintospace,IfeltsoexcitedthatIcouldn'tholdbackmytears.ThisgreatachievementhasshowednotonlyouradvancedtechnologybutalsothegreatpowerofChina.Atthesametime,itmademerealizeourresponsibility.AndIhavemadeupmymindtohaveagoodcommandofknowledge.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakegreatcontributionstoourcountry!Dearclassmates,let'sstudyharderforamorepowerfulChina!Thanksforyourlistening.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。三位中国宇航员被成功送入太空，请你就此事写一篇发言稿。【详解】1.词汇积累激动的：thrilled→excited抑制：control→holdback决定：decide→makeupone’smind强大的：strong→powerful2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Atthesametime,itmademerealizeourresponsibility.AndIhavemadeupmymindtohaveagoodcommandofknowledge.拓展句：Atthesametime,notonlydiditmakemerealizeourresponsibility,butalsoIhavemadeupmymindtohaveagoodcommandofknowledge.【点睛】[高分句型1]WhilewatchingthehistoricmomentwhenthethreeChineseastronautsweresentupintospace,IfeltsoexcitedthatIcouldn'tholdbackmytears.(运用了when引导时间状语从句和结果状语从句)[高分句型2]Onlyinthiswaycanwemakegreatcontributionstoourcountry!(运用了部分倒装)5.YapingWang,thefirstfemaleastronautwhoperformedspacewalkbyShenzhouXIII,deservesourhighestrespectforherpersistenceinthedecade-longarduoustraining.Neverdidshesayneverandultimatelyshelivedherspacedream.HowcanweyoungpeoplelearnfromYaping,especiallyherperseverance,resilienceanddiligence?Firstly,whenfailinginexams,weneedtoreflectonourweakpointsanddocountlessexerciseratherthandrownourselvesinsorrowordisappointment.Regardingdifficultieswemeetinourdailylife,bouncingbackfromlowspiritsandquicklyregainingourcomposureasYapingWangdiddefinitelycount.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生根据女航天员王亚平的事迹，写一篇征文，谈谈如何向她学习优秀品质。【详解】1.词汇积累终于：ultimately→finally考虑：reflecton→thinkover艰苦的：arduous→hard恢复：bounceback→recover2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：HowcanweyoungpeoplelearnfromYaping,especiallyherperseverance,resilienceanddiligence?拓展句：HowcanweyoungpeoplelearnfromYaping,whenitcomestoherperseverance,resilienceanddiligence?【点睛】【高分句型1】YapingWang,thefirstfemaleastronautwhoperformedspacewalkbyShenzhouXIII,deservesourhighestrespectforherpersistenceinthedecade-longarduoustraining.（运用了who引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】Neverdidshesayneverandultimatelyshelivedherspacedream.（运用了倒装句式）6．Shenzhou-12ChinalaunchedfirstcrewtonewspacestationChinalaunchedthreeastronautsintoorbitbyShenzhou-12tobeginoccupationofthecountry’snewspacestation,whichlasted3monthsfromJune,17thof2021.Thelifeupinspacewastotallydifferentfromthatontheearth,whichposedalotofchallengestotheastronauts.Theyperformedsomedailyroutinesaswellasscientificresearchesandexperimentsinthecircumsta