高考读后续写技能无灵主语的运用-高二-英语-课件

高考读后续写技能—无灵主语！罗朝秀

普洱市民族中学

主体思维主观性强客体思维严格区分主、客体以“人”为中心多用主动语态多用被动语态客观性强Someonecomesto

seeyou.

You

have

a

visitor.Icannot

speak.Words

fail

me.1.有人来看你。2.我说不出话来。同学们突然想到！Agoodideaflashedthroughmymind.Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckmethat...Suddenly,anideacame

acrossmymind.It

hit

me

that...Itoccurredtomethat

…It

dawned

on/upon

me

that...（

以上动词都采用了过去式

）...

dawn

onsb.

使开始明白；使渐渐领悟；使开始理解

对比：

Suddenly,

I

came

up

with

a

good

idea.解锁翻译新思路！Iwasscared/terrifiedwhenIthoughtof

the

scene.FearfilledmyheartwhenIthoughtof

the

scene.Thesightof

the

scene

filledmewith

horror.1.我突然失去了自信心。2.(当我)想/看到这个情景，

我内心充满了恐惧。Isuddenlylostmy

confidence.Myconfidencesuddenlydeserted

me.v.背离，使失望走出主体思维看到客观世界里的...人情绪动作抽象概念情绪作主语a

sense

ofa

feelingof...的感觉arush

ofaburstofawave

ofa

surge

of一阵/股...开心joy/delight/happiness/pleasure兴奋excitement/thrill感激/钦佩gratitude/appreciation/admiration满足satisfaction/contentment震惊surprise/shock/amazement/astonishment失望depression/frustration/disappointment遗憾/愧疚/悔恨regret/guilt/remorse悲伤sadness/sorrow/grief害怕fear/terror/fright/panic恼怒/愤怒/暴怒annoyance/anger/rage/fury绝望despair/desperation/hopelessness放松/宽慰relaxation/reliefFear

came

over

him.他感到一阵恐惧。Astrangepeacecameoverherwhen

shewas

alone.她独处时感到一种特殊的安宁。Fear

slowly

creeps

up

on

her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。A

feeling

of

fear

slowly

crept

on

him.

他慢慢感到一丝恐惧。A

slight

feeling

of

suspicion

crept

over

me.

我渐渐地产生了一丝疑虑。A

wave

of

tiredness

swept

over

her.她感到浑身疲惫。A

great

sense

of

relief

flooded

over

him.他深感宽慰。Awaveof

self-consciousnesscanwashoverherwhensomeonenewenters

the

room.

当有陌生人进入房间时，她会感到不自在。来come

over悄悄、渐渐地来creepup/on/over汹涌、席卷而来wash/sweep/floodover情绪作主语Fearsurroundedhim,makinghimfeeltrappedanduneasy.恐惧环绕着他，使他感到束手无策和不安。Sadnessenvelopedher,castingashadowoverher

every

thought

and

action.

悲伤笼罩着她，给她的每一个思想和行动都投下了阴影。Asenseof

lonelinessanddespairblanketedhim,isolatinghim

from

theworld

around

him.孤独和绝望的感觉将他笼罩，使他与周围的世界隔绝。Anxiety

seized/captured/caught/took

hold

of

him.他焦虑不已。Arushof

excitementtookholdof

herwhenshe

sawher

favoriteband

performinglive,envelopingherinpurebliss.当她看到自己最爱的乐队现场表演时，一股兴奋之情占据了她的内心，

将她包裹在纯粹的幸福中。情绪作主语包围、笼罩、覆盖surround/envelop/blanket紧紧抓住，控制住seize/grip/catch/takeholdofDespairchokedhiswords.绝望使得他说不出话来。WhenIheardtheapproachof

thewritingcontest,awave

of

nervousnessoverwhelmed

me.当我听到写作比赛的临近时，一阵紧张使我不知所措。Asurgeof

fearpreventedhimfromtakinga

single

step

forward.

一股恐惧涌上心头，使他无法迈出一步。Arushof

fearpreventedherfromspeaking,ashervoice

caughtinherthroat.

一阵恐惧涌上心头，使她无法开口，声音卡在了喉咙。Failingtheexamdeprivedhimofconfidence,leavinghimina

state

of

self-doubt

and

insecurity.考试不及格让他失去了信心，使他陷入了自我怀疑和

不安的状态中。情绪作主语【使...无法做到某事】

说不出话来，使哽咽

choke压垮；难以禁受overwhelm失去...的能力prevent

sb.

from...deprive

sb.of...Hisanxietygavewaytorelief

whenhefoundoutthatthetestwaspostponed.

他的焦虑在他得知考试推迟后转为了宽慰。Hisfrustrationgavewaytosatisfactionwhenhefinally

completed

thechallenging

task.

当他终于完成了困难的任务时，他的挫败感转为了满足感。

Hersadnessgavewaytohappinesswhenshereceived

a

surprisevisit

fromherlong-lost

friend.

当她收到很久不见的朋友的惊喜访问时，悲伤转为了快乐。Hisconfidencedesertedhimwhenhewalkedon

stage.他走上台时突然失去了自信。Ithinkmycourageabandonedmefor

amoment

and

I

cried.我感觉那一刻我失去了信心然后我哭了。转化，转变

givewayto背离，抛弃abandon/desert情绪作主语脸

faceHer

face

paled

with

fright.她吓得脸都白了。smileHer

face

lit

up/brightened/glowed.她的脸上焕发出了光彩。...Jack's

face

flushed/burned

with

embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。A

bright

smile

appeared.他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。嘴

mouthHis

mouth

widened

to

a

smile.他的咧开嘴笑了。laughterOur

mouths

dropped

open

in

surprise.我们惊讶地张大了嘴。wordsMy

mouth

started

watering

when

I

smelled

the

food.

闻到食物的香味，我开始流口水了。...Laughter

lingered

around

the

room.笑声在房间里萦绕。Her

words

pierced

my

heart.她的话刺痛了我的心。His

words

sent

me

a

quiver

through

my

body.他的话让我浑身一颤。Words

fail

to

convey

my

gratitude

to

you.我对你的感激之情难以用言语表达。五官及相关名词作主语——刻画情绪His

eyes

never

left

mine.他一刻不停地盯着我。Her

eyes

brimmed

with

tears.她热泪盈眶。

[brim

v.（使）满，盛满]His

eyes

widened

with

horror.他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。His

eyes

scanned

the

room

as

he

entered.他进屋时眼睛扫视了整个房间。

His

eyes

dropped

to

his

lap

as

he

answered.他回答时垂下眼睛看着膝上。Whenshesawthestrawberries,hereyestwinkled/sparkledwith

joy

and

sweetness.

当她看到草莓时，她的眼睛闪烁着喜悦和甜蜜。Tears

slid

down/were

running

down

her

cheeks.泪水顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。

Tears

blurred

her

eyes/vision.泪水模糊了她的双眼。Whenhesawthefamiliarhandwriting,tearswelledupin

his

eyes.他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。五官及相关名词作主语——刻画情绪眼睛

eyestears...心

heart

心作主语——刻画情绪

Her

heart

is

beating

fast.她的心跳的很快。Her

heart

leaped

with

joy.她的心高兴得都要跳出来了。My

heart

began

to

thump

wildly.我的心开始狂跳起来。

[thump

v.重击，捶打]His

heart

thumped

with

fear.她的心因为害怕而砰砰直跳。Her

heart

was

pounding

with

excitement.她的心激动地砰砰直跳。

He

smiled

and

her

heart

melted.他笑了，她的心融化了。My

heart

seemed

to

miss

a

beat.我的心跳仿佛停了一下。Inside,his

heart

was

slowly

breaking.在内心，他的心在慢慢地碎裂。My

heart

aches

when

I

think

of

their

sorrow.

当我想到他们的悲痛时，我的心很痛。The

thick

fog

blanketed

the

field.浓雾笼罩着整个大地。Dusk

found

the

boy

crying

on

the

street.

黄昏时，男孩在大街上哭着。Night

approaching,darkness

ruledthe

whole

forest.夜幕降临，黑暗笼罩着整个森林。An

earthquake

came

like

a

thief

in

the

night,without

warning.地震到来，犹如夜贼，不作预告。

The

rain

prevented

tourists

from

enjoying

the

full

moon.

雨使得游客无法欣赏到满月。自然现象作主语——渲染情绪Recentyearshaveseenmoreandmoreforeignstudents

cometo

study

in

China.近年来，越来越多的外国学生到中国留学。That

chilly

afternoon

witnessed

him

trudging

in

the

snow.

那个寒冷的下午，他在雪地里跋涉。A

ten

minutes'walk

b