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Howtowrite
letter
of
adviceJimisplanningatriptoChina,soheneedssometravellingtipsabouttransportation.【2019北京】你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京,天津和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请给他回邮件:内容包括交通出行,必备衣物。Yourclassandyouareanxiousaboutfailingtounderstandthenewforeignteacher’soralEnglishcourse.
你班同学近来为听不懂新来的外教口语课苦恼,请你给新来的外籍教师Jim写封邮件,提出相应建议,并说明理由。YourSchoolNewspaperplanstoaddanewcolumnaboutmentalhealth.
【西城期末改编】你校英文网站将新增“MentalHealth”版块,现正征集栏目设置建议。请给负责人Jim写信,内容包括你最想设置的一个栏目及其内容;设置该栏目的理由Jennyhasaconflictwithherparentsaboutchoosingacollegemajor.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Jenny即将高中毕业,因为选择大学专业问题和父母发生矛盾,向你寻求建议。请你给他写封邮件,表示理解并提出建议和理由。Whichsituationismostdifficultforyoutogiveadvice?Information-gapexistsTohaveanicetripwithsmoothtransportationWhyisyouradviceneededforthissituation?
Whatisyouradviceletter’swritingpurpose?Newspaper:Tobereader-orientedToimprovestudents'mentalhealthFacedwithlearningproblemsToenhanceTeacher-studentrelationWritingTask:Jennyhasaconflictwithherparentsaboutchoosingacollegemajor.Sheislookingforwardtoyoursuggestions.thewritingpurposeofyouradviceletterToresolvetheparent-teenconflictTohelpJennymakea“right”majordecisionReadthefollowingpairsofsuggestions,andfigureoutwhichsuggestionisbetter,andwhy?Situation1:OveruseofCellphoneA.Therearesomeappsthatcanlockyourphoneforacertaintimesothatyouwouldbeforcedtoconcentrateonwhatyouaredoing.B.Youmaytrytocultivatethesenseofself-disciplineandalwayskeepinmindthatharmsofcellphoneoveruseandattempttodragyourselfoutoftheaddictionbythestrongwill.Practical&Problem-solvingSituation2:ColumnaboutMentalHealthYoucouldsetupacolumnwherestudentscanconveytheirdepressionsandanxietymetonthecampus.Thengivesomeexpertadvicesuchastheintegrationofbodyandmindwithnatureorhowtoimproveself-awarenesstocopewithpeerpressure.Itissuggestedtoshareinspiringstoriesofathletesweadoreinthecolumntocheerusup.Theirtremendousspiritwillencourageustostruggleagainstfrustrationandbuildupconfidenceandsucceedintheexams.Closely-relatedandTo-the-pointSituation3:OralEnglishCourseInstructionA.Itisveryhardforustofollowyourlecture,soisitpossibleyoucouldchangethechallengingreadingmaterialsaboutliteratureintomoreintriguingandeasierones?TopicliketravelingmightfitforusEnglishlearningbeginnersbetter.Itisexpectedthatyoucouldinstructussomestrategiesabouthowtomakeauthenticpronunciationlikeyou.Situation3:OralEnglishCourseInstructionB.WearesoluckytohaveyoutoimpartussomuchaboutEnglishliteraturewithwell-selectedreadingmaterials.Inordertomakeoutofyourlessons,couldyoupleaseslowdownalittlebitforustoreflectandkeepnotes?Andwehopetohavemorechancetointeractwithyoutoshareaboutourthoughtsandconfusionsintheclass.Moreover,weareeagertolearnsomepronunciationtipsandauthenticoralexpressionsfromyou.Tactfulandinteractivecarefulnottosayordoanythingthatwillannoyorupsetotherpeople
圆通得体的,有分寸的
A.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemostimportantriversofChinesecivilization.Youcanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofmyhometown.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.Situation4:TravelingRouteChoiceB.Firstly,TaiMountain’shighaltitudeandspectacularsceneryonthetopofthemountainwillsurelyimpressyou.Thesceneofsunriseswillnotdisappointyou.Themorningskyintheshadeofyellowalongwiththemildbeamsoflightwillliftyourspirit.What’smore,asthehometownofConfucius,TaiMountainissurroundedbyanatmosphereoftraditionalChineseculture.Situation4:TravelingRouteChoiceConvincinganddetailedPairWork
Pleaseconcludeprinciplesofmakinggood
suggestionsandprioritizeatleast3principles.
1.Ismyadvicekey-to-the-pointandclosely-relatedtothetheme?3.Ismyadviceconvincinganddetailed?2.Doesmyadviceworkandsolvetheproblem?4.Ismyadvicetactfulandwithaudience-awareness?Youcouldaskyourselfquestionslikethis:
Does/Ismyadvice___________intheletter?
Reada
letter
of
advice,andanswer
thefollowing2questions:Q1:Whatisthereader’sproblem?Q2:Whatsuggestionsdidtheauthorgivetothereader?Whichsuggestiondoyouthinkismostpersuasiveandimpressiveandwhy?Whatsuggestionsdidtheauthorgivetothereader?
Whichsuggestiondoyouthinkismostpersuasiveandimpressiveandwhy?DearReader,Whenitcomestoeducation,Ithinkthemostimportantthingwecaneverlearnishowtoloveandappreciateotherpeople.Allhumansarepartofalargercommunity.Thinkingaboutthis,I'mnotsurewherethedesiretobebetterthanmostpeoplefitsin.Mostofusdofallintothe"average"category.Thisisanaturaloutcomeinanylargepopulationandwhatyouneedtoknowisthatbeingaveragedoesnotdiminishyourworth.To
show
your
understanding
and
let
the
reader
feel
relieved
Weoftenglorifyexceptionalachievements,buteveryday,ordinarysuccessesarewhatmakeupthebulkofcontributionstosocietyandalsothebulkofafulfillinglife.Itfeelsincredible,nodoubt,towinagoldmedalattheOlympics,butitisthetrivial(细枝末节)oftheeverydaythatmakesthemostdifferencetowellbeing,eventopeoplewiththosegoldmedals.Amedalisicingonacake,butwecan'tliveonicing;weneedthemoresubstantialstuffunderneath.Give
specific
example
and
metaphor
to
change
the
reader’s
belief
Don'tbeinahurrytotickoffalltheusualmilestonesthatsupposedlymakeforasuccessfullife.Don'tbetemptedtomeasuresuccessjustbygradesandjobtitles.Instead,acceptwhereyouare,explorewhatinterestsyou,andtakeawaythepressurethatcomesfromcomparingyourselftoothers.Watchhowyouaretalkingtoyourselfandcongratulateyourselfwhenyouspotanunhelpfulthoughtpatternyouneedtochange.Changewilltakepractice.Bepatient.Becuriousaboutyourself.Thinkaboutwaystobecreative,bekind,getinvolvedandbelong.Weallhaveourownuniquejourneythroughlife.Comparingyourjourneytoothers'canleadtodissatisfactionandoverlookingtheuniquecontributionsyoudohavetomake.Give
actional
and
practical
suggestion
to
tell
you
what
to
do
to
solve
your
troubleWritingTask:Jennyhasaconflictwithherparentsaboutchoosingacollegemajor.Sheislookingforwardtoyoursuggestions.thewritingpurposeToresolvetheparent-teenconflictTohelpJennymakea“right”majordecisionWhatmightbethereasonsofJenny’sconflictwithherparentswhenchoosingamajor?Parents’concernsaboutthechildren’sabilitytochoosetherightmajorandtheirexpectationtothekidsChildren’sexpectationtofollowhisheartandpassionafterforminghisownbeliefandvalueWritingTask:Jennyhasaconflictwithherparentsaboutchoosingacollegemajor.Sheislookingforwardtoyoursuggestions.thewritingpurposeToresolvetheparent-teenconflictTohelpJennymakea“right”majordecisionWritingTask:
PleasewriteaparagraphtogiveseveralsuggestionstoJenny.EvaluationCriteriaContentProblem-solvingandpracticalSpecificandto-the-pointTactfulandwithaudience-awarenessLanguageConsiderateandinteractiveExpressionsandsentencepatternsLogicLogicalandcoherentPeerEvaluationEvaluationCriteriaContentProblem-solvingandpracticalSpecificandto-the-pointTactfulandwithaudience-awarenessLanguageConsiderateandinteractiveExpressionsandsentencepatternsLogicLogicalandcoherentHowtoPolishLanguagetoExpressIdeaEffectivelySimpleVersion:Trytounderstandyourparents’concernsandopinion.Understandingtheiropinionswillhelpsolvetheconflict.Usefulexpressionsandphrasesseefrom…perspective=putyourselfin…’sshoes…providemoreinsightsto…reasoningbehindtheirpositionsease/relieve/alleviatethetension…reacharesolutionfasterPolishedVersion:SupportingDetailsAddedYoucouldtakeastepbackandputyourselfinyourparents’shoes/seefromtheirperspective.Askingparentsforfullreasoningbehindtheirpositionscanprovidemoreinsightintotheissue.Itwillhelpeasethetensionandreacharesolutionfaster.HowtoPolishLanguagetoExpressIdeaEffectivelySimpleVersion:Trytocommunicatewithyourparentsface-to-faceandconsiderhoweachotherfeel.Usefulexpressionsandphrasescalmly/honestly/respectfullyjustifyyourstand/decisionswithreasoningsviewparentsasalliestoreachthecommongoalrefocusourenergyPolishedVersionwithSupportingDetailsAddedTalkwithourparentscalmlyandrespectfullywithconvincingreasoningstojustifyourdecisionandremovetheirconcern.Bewillingtolistentotheirconcernswithoutinterruptingandviewthemasalliestoreachthecommongoalof
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