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专题08书面表达:人与自我—劳动实践
目录
01考情剖析•命题前瞻...........................................................................1
02思维导图•网络构建...........................................................................2
03考点通关・靶向突破...........................................................................3
★考点一必备词句.........................................................................3
★考点二体裁框架.........................................................................4
考点三通用模板.........................................................................5
(一)图表类........................................................................5
(二)邀请类........................................................................6
(三)征文类.......................................................................7
(四)建议类.....................................................
04优题精选•练能提分..........................................................................13
-01-
考情剖析•命题前瞻
考点课标要求复习目标
图表类:描述劳动相关调查
①能围绕“劳动实践''主题完成书面①掌握劳动实践主题的核心词汇、
结果+提出建议
表达,做到内容完整、逻辑清晰;句型和时态运用;
邀请类:介绍劳动活动内容、
②能正确运用一般现在时、一段过②能根据不同写作体裁(邮件、书
意义、安排,发出邀请
去时、一般将来时等基础时态;③信、征文)搭建写作框架;
征文类:讲述劳动经历、分
能便用简单的连接词、从句丰富表③能紧扣写作要点,做到内容完
享劳动收获、表达对劳动的
达,体现语言运用能力;④渗透劳整、逻辑连贯、表达准确;
看法
动意以、责任担当等核心素养,实④能在写作中融入劳动素养,贴合
建议类:为劳动相关活动提
现语言学习与价值引领的结合命题立意
供创意并说明理由
1.体裁融合化:单i体裁减少,可能出现“图表分析+建议”“经历讲
命题预测
述+观点表达''等融合式写作要求,考查综合语言运用能力。
2.情境真实化:写作情境更贴近学生生活,如校园劳动日、社区志
愿服务、家庭劳动打卡等,强调写作的实用性和真实性。
3.素养导向化:更注重考宜劳动意识、团队合作、责任担当等核心
素养,要求写作不仅有语言表达,更有情感和价值体现。
4.表达多样化:对句式丰富度要求提高,鼓励使用并列句、状语从
句、定语从句等,同时要求合理便用连接词,提升行文逻辑。
锦囊1:审清要求
圈画体裁、人称、时态、写作要点,避免遗漏核心信息(如国表类需“描
述+建议”,邀请类需“内容+意义+安排。
锦囊2:搭建框架
艰据体裁定结构,如邮件/书信:开头问候+主旨+细节+结尾期待;征文:
开头点题+主体(经历/看法)+结尾总结收获;图表类:描述结果+提出
建议。
锦囊3:活用词句
解题锦囊
活用劳动主题核心词汇和高分句型,避免重复表达,基础薄弱者保证简
单句准确,能力较强者适当使用复合句。
锦囊4:补全细节
在要点基础上增加简单细节(如时间、地点、具体动作),让内容更充
实,同时注意上下文逻辑连贯。
锦囊5:检查修正
写完后检查时态、主谓一致、拼写、标点,确保表达准确,字数符合要
求。
-02-
/houseworkschore(家务)、labour
写作基础%-劳动、tidyupxcleanup、plant、meaningfu
'(有意义的)、glorious(光荣的)
写作体裁〈电子邮件:问候+主旨+细节+结尾期待
书信:称呼+问候+建议/邀请+结尾祝福
图表分析:讲述经历+分享收获+表达看法
图表类:调查结果描述一劳动建议提出
邀请类:活动内容-活动意义-时间安排
经历类:劳动事件-具体过程一收获感悟
建议类:活动创意一创意理由-美好祝愿
/句式:notonly..butalso...x状语从句、定语从句
高分技巧结构:总分总,要点清晰,逻辑连贯
素养:融入劳动意识、责任担当、团队合作
-03-
考点通关•靶向突破
考点一必备词句
精讲•知识夯基人
一、核心词汇
1.家务chorcs/houscwork
2.劳动labor/work
3.志愿者volunteer
4有意义的meaningful
5.光荣的glorious
6.其他高频词:lidyup(整理)、cleanup(清理)、plant(种植)、repair(修理)、sweep(打扫)、cook
meals(做饭)、sortgarbage(垃圾分类)、teamwork(团队合作)、responsibility(责任)
二、高分句型
1.对比句:…while…
(Accordingtotheresults,15%ofthemusuallydohousework,while80%sometimeshelpwithchores.)
2.目的状语:To....Isuggest...
(Toimprovethis,Isuggestmyclassmatesspendsomelimedoingsimplechoreseveryday.)
3.并列结构:notonly...butalso...
(Houseworkisnotonlyhelpfulforkeepingourhomescleanbutalsobeneficialforteachingusresponsibility.)
4.原因状语:As/Because...,...
(Aswcarcgoingtograduate,ourclassmatesplantoplantatreeforourschool.)
5.定语从句:which...
(Studentscancleantheclassroom,whichcanmakeourschoolmorebeautiful.)
考点二体裁框架
精讲*知识夯基人
体裁核心框架适用考法
电子邮件/书信开头:问候+主旨(邀请/回复/介绍)劳动活动邀请、为劳
动活动提建议、介绍
主体:分点讲细节(内容/意义/安排/建议)
社会实践
结尾:期待回复/祝愿
图表类材料作文开头:引出调查(Ididasurveyon...)同学劳动情况调查分
析
主体:描述结果(Accordingtotheresults...)
结尾:提出建议(Isuggest...)
劳动主题征文开头:点题(Laborisimporlant/glorious...)劳动最光荣、劳动点
亮生活主题投稿
主体:讲述经历/列举劳动+收获(At
home/school,1...;Ihavelearned...)
结尾:总结感悟(Labormakesme.../Itis
meaningfulto...)
考点三通用模板
精讲•知识夯基人
(一)图表类:描述劳动相关调查结果+提出建议
核心结构
调查引入一描述数据(占比/差异)-总结现象一提出建议一点明劳动意义
通用模板
Ididasurveyon(调查主题,如classmatesdoinghousework)among(调查范围,如40
studentsinmyclass).Accordingtotheresults,(占比1)ofthem(彳亍为1,如usuallydohousework),
while(占比2)(行为2,如sometimeshelpwithchores).Sadly,(占比3)(行为3,
如seldomdoanyhouseworkatall).Thisshowsthat(总、结现象,如moststudentsdon'ttakeanactivepart
inhouseholdtasks).
Toimprovethis,Isuggestmyclassmates(建议I,如spendsometimeeverydaydoingsimplechores),
like(具体例子,如tidyinguptheirroomsorwashingdishes).Wccanalso(建议2,如share
houseworkwithfamilymembers).(劳动意义,如Houseworkisnotonlyhelpfulforkeepingourhomes
cleanbutalsobeneficialforteachingusasenseofresponsibility).Let'strytodomoreto(升华,如helpour
fairilics).
范文
Ididasurveyonclassmatesdoinghouseworkamong50studentsinmyclass.Accordingtotheresults,30%of
themusuallydohouseworkafterschool,while45%sometimeshelpwithchoresonweekends.Sadly,25%seldom
doanyhouseworkatall.Thisshowsthatmoststudentslacktheawarenessoftakingpartinhouseholdtasksand
relytoomuchontheirparents.
Toimprovethis,Isuggestmyclassmatesspend20lo30minuteseverydaydoingsimplechores,liketidying
up(heirownrooms,foldingclothesorwashingtheirownbowls.Wecanalsosharehouseworkwithfamily
membersaccordingtoourabilities,suchashelpingparentssweepthefloorortakeoutthetrash.Houseworkisnot
onlyhelpfulforkeepingourhomescleanandtidybutalsobeneficialforteachingusasenseofresponsibilityand
independence.Lefstrytodomoretolightenourparents7burdenandbecomemoreresponsiblepeople.
(二)邀请类:介绍劳动活动内容、意义、安排,发出邀请
核心结构
问候开场一表明邀请目的一介绍活动(内容+意义)一说明时间地点安排一期待回复
通用模板(邮件/书信体)
Dear(对方姓名),
Howiseverythinggoing?I'mwritingtoinviteyouto(参力口的活动,如joinourmeaningfullabor
activityfortheschoolbeforegraduation).
Weplanto(活动内容,如plantamemorialtree/tidyuptheschoollibrary)together.Theactivityis
meaningfulbecause(活动意义,如itcanmakeourschoolmorebeautiful/it'saspecialwaytoleaveour
thankstotheschool).Wewillholdtheactivityon(时间,如nextSundaymorning)at(地点,如the
schoolgate/theschoollibrarjO-First,wewill(步骤1,如meetatthegateandwalktotheplayground),then
wewill(步骤2,如digaholeandplantthetree),andfinallywewill(步骤3,如waterthetreeand
takephotostogether).Ibelievewewillhaveagreattime.
Hopetohearfromyousoon.
Yours,
范文
DearAmy,
Howiseverythinggoing?I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinourmeaningfullaboractivityfbrourschooPs50th
anniversary.
Wcplantotidyuptheschool'soldcampusgardenandplantsonicnewflowersandtreestogether.Theactivity
ismeaningfulbecauseitcanmakeourschoolmorebeautifi.ilandlively,andit'salsoaspecialwayIoexpressour
loveandgratitudetoourschool.WewillholdtheactivityonnextSaturdaymorningat9o'clockattheschool
gardengate.First,wewillmeetatthegateandlistentotheteacher'sintroductionabouttheactivityrules.Thenwe
willbedividedintogroupstocleanupiheweeds,digholesandplantsaplings.Finally,wewillwaler(hesaplings
(ogetherandhangsmallnamecardsonthem.Ibelievewewillhaveagreattimeandleaveapreciousmemory.
Hopetohearfromyousoon.
Yours,
LiMing
(三)征文类:讲述劳动经历、分享劳动收获、表达对劳动的看法
1:通用基础版(谈日常劳动+对劳动的看法+收获)
核心结构
点明劳动主题一介绍日常劳动(家庭+学校/社区)一分亨劳动收获一升华劳动意义
模板
标题(如LaborBrightensLife/LaborIsGlorious)
Laborisaveryimportantandgloriouspartofourlife.Itcanhelpus(劳动的作用,如impioveourlife
skillsanddevelopgoodqualities).
Athome,Ioftendosomechores,suchas(家务例子,如cleaningthefloor,washingdishesandtidying
myroom).Atschool,Itakepartin(学校劳动,如cleaningtheclassroom,plantingtreesorhelpingteachers
organizebooks).Ialsojoin(社区劳动,如garbagesoilingactivities)inmycommunityinmyfreetime.
Bydoingalltheselabortasks,Ihavelearnedalot.Inotonly(收获1,如mastersomebasiclifeskills
andkeepmybodystrong)butalso(收获2,如understandtheimportanceofresponsibilityandteamwork).
Wliat'smore,Iknowthat(感悟,如laborcanturnsmallefionsintobigachievemenis/laboristhesource
ofhappiness).Laboristiringbutreallymeaningfulforus.
范文
LaborBrightensLife
Laborisaveryimportantandgloriouspartofourlife.Itcanhelpusimproveourlifeskills,developgood
qualitiesandexperiencethejoyofhardwork.
Alhome,Ioftendosomechores,suchascleaningtheflooreverymorning,washingdishesaftermealsand
tidyingmyroomeveryweekend.Atschool,Itakepartincleaningtheclassroomwithmyclassmatesevery
afternoon,plantingtreesintheschcolyardeveryspringandhelpingteachersorganizebooksinthelibrary.Ialso
joingarbagesortingactivitiesinmycommunityinmyfreetime,helpingneighborsunderstandhowtosortdifferent
kindsofgarbagecorrectly.
Bydoingalltheselabortasks,Ihavelearnedalot.Inotonlymastersomebasiclifeskillsandkeepmybody
strongbutalsounderstandtheimportanceofresponsibilityandteamwork.WhenIfinishcleaningtheclassroom
withmyclassmates,Ifeelproudofourjointefforts.Whafsmore,Iknowthatlaborcanturnsmalleffortsintobig
achievementsanditisthesourceofhappiness.Laboristiringbutreallymeaningfulforus.Itmakesourlifebetter
andbrighter.
2:经历版(讲一次难忘劳动+收获+感悟)
核心结构
引出难忘经历一详细讲述劳动过程一分享收获与感悟
模板
标题(如AnUnforgettableLaborExperience)
Last(时间,如summer/weekend),Itookpartin(劳动经历,如aclean-upactivityinthepark
asavolunteer/agardeningactivityatschool).Itwasmymostunforgettablelaborexperienceanditmademelearn
alot.
We(前期安排,如weredividedintoseveralgroups).Iwasinchargeof(自己的任务,如
pickinguptrashinthebushesandsortingitintodifferentbags).Myclassmates(其他人的任务,如made
posterstocallonpeopletoprotecttheenvironment).Weworkedhardtogetherandafterafewhours,(劳动
成果,如theparkbecamemuchcleanerandtidier).ThoughIwastired,Ifeltveryhappy.
Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedthat(收获I,如laborcanmakeusaresponsibleperson).Italso
teachesmethat(收获2,如teamworkisveryimportantforfinishingataskwell).Thismeaningful
experienceletsmeknowthat(感悟,如wecanmakeadifferencetotheworldwithourownefforts).
范文
AnUnforgettableLaborExperience
Lastsummervacation,Itookpartinaclean-upactivityinthecommunityasavolunteer.Itwasmymost
unforgettablelaborexperienceanditmademelearnalotaboutlaborandresponsibility.
Beforetheactivity,weweredividedintoseveralgroupsbythecommunityworker.Iwasinchargeofpicking
uptrashinthebushesandsortingitintorecyclableandnon-recyclablebags.Myclassmateswereresponsiblefor
cleaningthepublicseatsandmakingposterstocallonpeopletoprotecttheenvironment.Atfirst,Ifeltalittletired
becausethebusheswerefullofsmalltrashanditwasveryhotoutside.ButwhenIsawthedirtytrashbeingpicked
upandtheenvironmentbecomingcleaner,Ikeptgoing.Afterafewhoursofhardwork,thewholecommunity
lookedmuchcleanerandtidier.Manyneighborspassedbyandpraisedus,whichmademefeelveryhappyand
proud.
From(hisexperience,Ihavelearnedthatlaborcanmakeusaresponsibleperson.Italsoteachesmethat
teamworkisveryimportantforfinishinga(askwell—withouttheeflbrtsofeverygroupmember,wecouldn,thave
madesuchabigdifference.Thismeaningfulexperienceletsmeknowthatwecanmaketheworldabetterplace
withourownsmalleffortsandthatlaboristhemostbeautifulactioninlife.
(四)建议类:为劳动相关活动提供创意并说明理由
核心结构
回应对方需求一分点提建议+说明理由一总结希望建议有用
通用模板(书信/邮件体)
Dear(对方姓名),
I'mexcitedtohearthatyou'reorganizing(活动名称,如SchoolServiceDay/laboractivitiesforyour
class).I'dliketosharesomecreativeideaswithyou.
First,Isuggestyouorganize(建议1,如clean-upactivitiesintheschool).Ifsagoodchoicebecause
(理由I,如itcanmaketheschoolcleanerandmorebeautiful,andallstudentscanjoinineasily).Second,
youcanarrangeforstudentsto(建议2,如repairbrokendesksandchairsintheclassroom).Thisactivity
willbringfuntostudentsand(理由2,如itcanletthemlearnbasicrepairskillsanddevelopasenseofcare
fbrschoolthings).What,smore,it'sagreatideatoletstudents(建议3,如watertheflowersandtreesin
theschoolgarden).Theywillfeelastrongsenseofresponsibilitybecause(理由3,如theycanseethe
beautybroughtbytheirownlabor).
Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.
Yours,
范文
DearTom,
I'mexcitedtohearthatyoirreorganizingSchoolServiceDayfbryourclass.I'dliketosharesomecreative
ideaswithyoutomaketheactivitymoreinterestingandmeaningful.
First,Isuggestyouorganizea"ClassroomRenovation,,activity.It'sagoodchoicebecauseitcanmakeyour
classroommorecomfortableandbeautifulforstudy,andallstudentscanjoinineasily.Everyonecantakeon
differenttasks,suchaspaintingthewalls,arrangingthebookshelvesandcleaningthewindows.Second,youcan
arrangeforstudentstomakehand-madegiftsfbr(hecleanersinourschool.Thisactivitywillbringfuntostudents
anditcanletthemlearntorespectthelaborofothersandexpresstheirgratitude.What'smore,it'sagreatideato
letstudentssetupa“GreenComer“intheschoolyard.Theycanplantsomepottedplantsandtaketurnstaking
careofthem.Theywillfeelastrongsenseofresponsibilitybecausetheycanseetheplantsgrowwiththeirown
care,anditalsohelpseveryonedevelopalovefornature.
Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.
Yours,
ZhangWei
中考*考法聚焦上
.............aMk
考法一:图表分析类
(2025・北京•中考真题)假设你是李华,你们班的英语课正在开展研究性学习,你选择研究同学们做
家务的情况,为此你对班里40名同学进行了问卷调查,下图是部分统计结果。请用英语写一篇短文,简要
说明图表内容,并对班级同学参与家务劳动提出建议。
内容提示:
•Whatcanyoulearnfromtheresults?
•Offersomeadvicetoyourclassmatesondoinghousework.
Ididasurveyonmyclassmatesdoinghousework.
考法二:活动邀请类
(2023•北京・中考真题)假设你是李华。你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事,如种植纪念
树、去校图书馆整理图书等。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,告
诉他活动内容、意义及安排。
提示词语:invite,plant,meaningful,beautiful,libraiy
提示问题:Whatactivitydoyouplantodo?
Whydoyouwanttoorganizethisactivity?
Whenandwherewillyouhavethisactivity?
DearPeter.
Howiseverythinggoing?
Hopetohearfromyousoon.
Yours,
LiHua
考法三:劳动经历征文类
(2025•北京房山•一模)你校英语公众号正在开展“劳动点亮生活”为主题的征稿活动。假如你是李华,
请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在家或是学校参加过哪些劳动以及你的收获。
提示词语:housework,tidy,clean,meaningful
提示问题:Whatchoresorschoollabor(劳动)activitiesdidyoudo?
Whathaveyoulearnedfromthoseexperiences?
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