十句话搞定读后续写7课件高三英语二轮复习专项

十句话搞定读后续写7

十句五定法第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Whenmydaughtersreachedthethirdandfourthgrades,Isometimesallowedthemtowalktoandfromschoolaloneiftheweatherpermitted.Onewarmspringday,alittledogfollowedthemhomeafterschool.Ithadshortlegsandlovelylongears.ItwasthecutestdogIhadeverseenandthegirlsbeggedmetokeepit.Thedogwasabouttwelveweeksold.Ithadnocollar(项圈)oridentifyingmarksofanysort.Ididn'tknowwhattodo.IthoughtaboutpostinganadvertisementbutIreallydidn'twantto.Itwouldbreakthekids'heartsifsomeoneshouldshowup.Besides,itsownershouldhavewatcheditmoreclosely.

Bytheendoftheweekthedogwaspartofourfamily.Itwasveryintelligentandgoodwiththegirls.Thefollowingweeksomethingtoldmetocheckthelostandfoundsectioninthelocalpaper.OneparticularadvertisementjumpedoutatmeandmyheartbeatwithfearforwhatIread.Someonewasbeggingforthereturnofalostdogintheneighborhoodofourgradeschool.Theysoundedextremelyeager.MyhandshookandIcouldn'tbringmyselftopickupthepaper.Instead,IpretendedIhadn'tseentheadvertisement.Iquicklyputthepaperawayinthedrawerandcontinuedwithmydusting.Ineversaidawordaboutittothekidsormyhusband.Bynowwehadnamedthedog.ItlookedlikeaMolly,sothatwaswhatwecalledit.Itfollowedthegirlseverywheretheywent.Whentheywentoutside,itwasonestepbehindthem.Whentheydidthehousework,itwastheretolendahand.

Therewasonlyoneproblemwiththisseeminglyperfectpicture:myconscience(良心)wasbotheringme.IknewinmyheartIhadtocallthatnumberinthepaperandseeifourMollywasthedogtheyweredesperatelyseeking.ItwasthemostdifficultthingIhadeverdone.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。

Withmixedfeelings,Ifinallypickedupthephone.

IaskedthewomantocomeinandshequicklybentoverandhuggedMollytightly.

[前文大意]

这篇短文讲述了一位母亲在女儿们放学带回一只走失的小狗后，因不忍心看到孩子们伤心，没有主动寻找失主，而是将小狗留下并取名为Molly。然而，她在报纸上看到一则急切的寻狗启事后，内心备受良知煎熬。尽管她一度将报纸藏起、假装没看见，但最终良心占了上风，她决定拨通那个电话，去确认家中的Molly是否正是别人苦苦寻找的狗。人物母亲、两个女儿、小狗Molly，失主（未出场）

情节女儿带回小狗

母亲隐瞒失主广告

良心不安

决定打电话

核心冲突

隐瞒vs归还

情感基调

喜悦+害怕+愧疚+不舍+释然母亲面临的两难选择是什么？环节内容起因两个女儿放学时，一只小狗跟着她们回家了。发展1母亲发现报纸上有寻狗启示，心里很害怕。发展2母亲选择假装没看见，并把报纸藏起来。转折母亲的良心开始折磨她。承接母亲终于拿起电话。[续写思路]1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“怀着复杂的心情，我最终拿起了电话。”可知，第一段可描写母亲拨通电话后与失主的对话过程，确认小狗正是对方丢失的，并约定见面归还。②由第二段首句内容“我请那位女士进来，她迅速弯下腰，紧紧地抱住了Molly。”可知，第二段可描写失主认领小狗时的感人场景，以及母亲和孩子虽然不舍但选择诚实归还的心理变化2．续写线索：拨通电话——确认身份——约定见面——失主上门认领——孩子不舍——温暖结局——感悟升华十句五定法paragraph11衔接para1提示句（接着para1首句往下写）2345衔接para2提示句（根据para2首句倒推写）paragraph26衔接para2提示句（接着para2首句往下写）789

结尾（正能量）10

升华主题写剩余五句补齐细节情绪动作心理语言环境描写Para1.Para2.定

句1:衔接提示句--心理/动作链定句6:衔接提示句--心理/动作链句2:句7:句3:句8：句4:定句9:紧贴原文，交代结局定句5:过渡到P2首句定句10:点睛两段十句五定法的思路其中第一段中的句1与句5，第二段中的句1，句4和句5共五句话基本是固定的，其他的句子安排根据具体情况可作轻微调整。para1：Withmixedfeelings,Ifinallypickedupthephone.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________para2:IaskedthewomantocomeinandshequicklybentoverandhuggedMollytightly.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________电话里说什么？失主的反应？根据第二段提示句可知失主上门来了。失主进家后发生了什么？结局怎样？第一句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________承接段首句“拿起了电话”，电话接通，失主反应。描述小狗，失主确认。Awoman

answeredafterthefirstring,hervoicetremblingwithhope.十句五定法：Idescribedthedogindetail,andsheimmediatelycriedout,“That’smybaby!”第三句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第四句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________失主原谅并上门。To

mysurprise,sheforgavemegentlyandsaidshewasjustgratefultoknowMollywassafe.Withinthirtyminutes,shewasknockingatourdoor.母亲内疚道歉。Iapologizedfornothavingcontactedherearlier,explainingthatmydaughtersloveditvermuch.第五句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第六句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________承接第二段段首句“拥抱小狗”，小狗的反应。The

littledogstartedwaggingitstailandbarkingexcitedly,lickingherfaceasifalong-lostfriend.失主表达感谢。The

womantoldmethatshecouldn’tsleepwellwithoutMollyandexpressedhersinceregratitudetousfortakinggoodcareofMollythesedays.Sheofferedtogivemesomecashasareward,第七句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第八句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________母亲婉拒。孩子表达不舍。Igently

refused,sayingwedidn’tdoitformoney.Justthen,mydaughterssteppedforward,oneofthemwhispering,“Canwestillvisithersometimes?”第九句话：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第十句话：_______________________________