2026届新高考英语考前冲刺最后一课 新高考英语应用文专项突破

2026届新高考英语考前冲刺最后一课

新高考英语应用文专项突破

假定你是李华，你校英文报发起了"UpgradingOurSchoolCanteen"活动，面向学生征集学校食堂改造方案。请你给英文报主编Jack写一封邮件，内容包括：（1）现存问题；（2）改造方案。注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJack,____________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua高分应用文写作要求：1.书写：规范整洁。2.布局：三段式写作，共10行。3.高分句型：定语从句、非谓语、独立主格结构等。减少语法错误。突出逻辑性。三审：审题1.文体：邮件2.人称：第一人称（I）3.时态：一般现在时为主一列：列出要点1.背景要点2.现存问题3.改造方案布局：第一段：背景要点第二段：现存问题第三段：改造方案Para.1Beginning:背景+提出“分享想法”。首段背景：巧用非谓语动词1.Learningaboutthe"UpgradingOurSchoolCanteen"activity,I'mwritingtosharemyopinions/suggestions/advice.

2.I’mLiHua.Knowing/Learningthatyouarecollectingideasonupgradingourschoolcanteen,I’mwritingtosharemyopinions/suggestions/advice.3.I’mLiHua,astudentofourschool.I’mgladtocontributemysuggestionstothe"UpgradingOurSchoolCanteen"activity.1.菜品种类有限：havelimitedfoodvariety/lackfoodvariety2.等待时间过长：longqueuesatpeakhours3.环境嘈杂：thecanteen/dininghallistoonoisy/soloud4.份量少：theamountofthesize/theportionofthedishis

notenough5.味道不好：nottasty/delicious（lacktaste/flavor）6.价格高：thefoodistooexpensive（thepricesaretoohigh

/arebeyondstudents'budget）Para2:body---现存问题（2点）Para2:body---现存问题（2点）主题句+问题1+问题2●Firstly,thedininghallisoftennoisyandchaotic,makingithardforustorelax.

●Meanwhile,thefoodpricesareunreasonablyhigh,whichisaheavyburdenformoststudents.●What'smore,theportionsarenotgenerousenoughtosatisfyus,whichmakesushungrysoon.●Moreover,thefoodlacksflavorandisnottasty,andthebadtasteruinsourappetite食欲.Para2:body---现存问题（2点）●Currently,thecanteenhaslongqueuesatpeakhours,whichwastesusalotoftime.●Besides,

thecanteenlacksvarietyinthemenu,offeringalmostthesamedishesdaily,whichfailstomeetthenutritionalneedsofgrowingteenagers.1.划分安静区：setupquietzones/areas2.调整价格：adjustthepricestoastudent-friendlylevel3.增加分量：increasetheportionsizes4.改进味道：improvethetaste/flavor5.增设窗口：addextraservicewindows6.丰富菜品：addmorehealthyanddiversedishestocatertodifferenttastescaterto满足、迎合Para3：改造方案（2点）主题句+细节1+细节2Para3:body---改进方案（2点）主题句+改进方案1+改进方案2●Firstly,tocreateamorecomfortableatmosphere,Isuggestsettingupquietareasforstudentswhowanttoeatpeacefully.●Meanwhile,itisnecessarytolowerthepricesappropriatelytomakethemaffordableformoststudents.●What'smore,theservingportionsshouldbeincreasedtoensurethatstudentscangetenoughenergyfromthemeal.●Moreover,weshouldimprovethetasteofthefoodtoenrichtheflavorofthedishes.Para3:body---改进方案（2点）主题句+改进方案1+改进方案2●Currently,moreservicewindowsshouldbeopenedtospeeduptheservingprocessandsavestudents'time.●Besides,

thecanteenisadvisedtointroducevariousregionalcuisinestoprovidemoredishchoices.DearJack,❶I'mLiHua,astudentatourschool.Hearingthatourschoolcanteenisundergoingupgrades,I'mdelightedtosharemyopinions.❷Theproblemsofthecanteenareasfollows.Currently,thecanteenlacksvarietyinthemenu,offeringalmostthesamedishesdaily,whichfailstomeetthenutritionalneedsofgrowingteenagers.Moreover,thedininghallisoftentoonoisyforustoenjoymeals,andlongqueuesduringpeakhourswasteourtime.❸Toaddresstheseproblems,Isuggestintroducingmoreregionalcuisinestocatertodiversetastesandsettingupquietzonesforstudentstodineandrelaxbetweenclasses.Also,openingadditionalservicewindowscangreatlyreducewaitingtime,especiallyduringtheshortlunchbreak.Ihopethesechangeswillmakeourcanteenmorepopular.

Yourssincerely,LiHua

（模板）DearJack,I'mLiHua,astudentatourschool.Learningaboutthe"UpgradingOurSchoolCanteen"activity,I'mwritingtosharemyopinions.Currently,thecanteenhastwomainproblems:【问题1】and【问题2】,whichbringusmuchinconvenience.Tosolvethese,Isuggest【方案1】to【对应解决问题1】,and【方案2】to【对应解决问题2】.Besides,【补充方案】canalsoimproveourdiningexperience.Ihopemysuggestionswillbetakenint