读后续写初体验 高一下学期读后续写指导

读后续写初体验读01读什么，怎么读？一读文本边读边理清事件脉络（谁？事件的起因、经过、结果？）边读边抓人物情绪变化（抓形容词、动作及心理描写句）读什么，怎么读？二读所给俩句切记：绝大多数情况下，第二个句子是第一段的结尾结合所给俩句回文本下划伏笔（为后文埋下线索：1.环境描写；2.人物细节；3.关键物品；4.对话与心理）结合所给俩句和伏笔脑补或推理关键情节读文本理脉络Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.中心句决定了结局起因：12岁生日收到了父母送的手机经过+结果：课堂沉溺手机导致考试失利且需要家长签字读文本抓情绪Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.开心、兴奋、自信炫耀、忙碌、侥幸？读所给俩句Paragraph1:Aftergettinghome,IwasafraidtofacemyparentsbutIhadto.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afterwhathappened,IdecidedtochangeeverythingIusedtodo.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1:Aftergettinghome,IwasafraidtofacemyparentsbutIhadto.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afterwhathappened,IdecidedtochangeeverythingIusedtodo.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________交代了时间和地点：已经放学回到家了Paragraph1:Aftergettinghome,IwasafraidtofacemyparentsbutIhadto.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afterwhathappened,IdecidedtochangeeverythingIusedtodo.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________交代了时间和地点：已经放学回到家了Paragraph1:Aftergettinghome,IwasafraidtofacemyparentsbutIhadto.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afterwhathappened,IdecidedtochangeeverythingIusedtodo.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________交代了时间和地点：已经放学回到家了补充省略句：butIhadtofacemyparents，表明：接下来他要拿着试卷硬着头皮去找父母签字从而直面问题并解决问题Paragraph1:Aftergettinghome,IwasafraidtofacemyparentsbutIhadto.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afterwhathappened,IdecidedtochangeeverythingIusedtodo.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________交代了时间和地点：已经放学回到家了补充省略句：butIhadtofacemyparents，表明：接下来他要拿着试卷硬着头皮去找父母签字从而直面问题并解决问题Paragraph1:Aftergettinghome,IwasafraidtofacemyparentsbutIhadto.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afterwhathappened,IdecidedtochangeeverythingIusedtodo.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________交代了时间和地点：已经放学回到家了补充省略句：butIhadtofacemyparents，表明：接下来他要拿着试卷硬着头皮去找父母签字从而直面问题并解决问题第二句是第一段的结尾或为第一段的结尾提供了线索：父母对此事的教育触动了我决心痛改前非，所以第一段应该写父母是如何智慧地处理此事的？？可以回文中找伏笔第二段写我是如何改变的？回文中找伏笔找伏笔Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.伏笔1：（1）拥有手机之前我在校表现及成绩都很好（2）父母对我很信任Inourchildhood,therewerealwaysunforgettablethingshappeninginourlife,however,somewereharmfulwhilesomewerebeneficial,Ifwecouldlearnfromtheexperienceandlessons,itwouldleadtofuturesuccess.My12thbirthdaycameatlast.WhatawonderfulfeelingitwastoknowthatIturnedtwelveandthatImightpossiblygetthethingIwantedmost.Isawmymomanddadcomingtowardsmewithasmallboxwrappedup(包装)withnicepinkpaperwithflowersonit.WhenIremovedthepaperandopenedthebox,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.IhadgotacellphoneIrantogivemymomanddadthebiggesthugever,andsaid,“You’rewelcome.Weknewthiswasgoingtomakeyouhappy.Butwegiveyouthisnotonlybecauseyouhaveturnedtwelvebutalsobecauseyouaredoingwellinschool.Weexpectyoutokeepgettinggoodgrades.”IsaidconfidentlythatIwould.AssoonasIgottoschoolthenextmorning,Iwasshowingoffmyphoneandaskingeveryonefortheirnumber.ItwascoolhowIgotsomanycontacts(联系人)onthefirstday.ItfeltlikeIdidn’tevenexistinthatclassanymore.Ididn’tpaymuchattentiontotheteachersbecauseIwastoobusyonmyphone.Itextedmyfriends,surfedtheInternetforstoriesorplayedgames.Luckily,Ididn’tgetcaughtusingit.Ihadformedahabitofsecretlyenjoyingmyphoneinclass.ButIwasprettysurethattheteachersdidnoticethatIstoppedpayingattentiontothem,becauseaweeklaterwetookatestandIfailed.What’sworse,myparentshadtosignthetest.伏笔1：（1）拥有手机之前我在校表现及成绩都很好（2）父母对我很信任伏笔2：拥有手机后我在学校的表现，可以为我之后的改变提供情节写02写什么，怎么写？结合伏笔，扩充之前分析的情节依据情节，互动式描写句子，即人物之间的互动：动作、语言、情绪等的互动,具体描写如下：（以本文为例）写什么，怎么写？结合伏笔，扩充之前分析的情节依据情节，互动式描写句子，即人物之间的互动：动作、语言、情绪等的互动,具体描写如下：（以本文为例）段1：我拿着试卷找父母签字，父母的智慧式回应。故：主要是我和父母之间的互动描写段2：我的改变。主要是我和之前的行为的互动描写

Aftergettinghome,IwasafraidtofacemyparentsbutIhadto.（接下来我的行为、想法或情绪）Gatheringupmycourageandholdingthepapertightly,Icameuptomyparentswhowerechattingharmoniouslyinthelivingroom.Atthatmoment,theroomfellsilent.HandingthepapertomyPapa,Iloweredmyhead,waitingfortheirwildanger.（接下来父母的行为、想法或情绪）

Afterforawhile,myfatherbroketheicewithaseriousvoice.“Haveyougottenthereasonforyourfailure?”（接下来我的行为、想法或情绪）“Yes.It’sthephonethatruinedeverything.”Icriedwithmybodyshaking.（接下来父母的行为、想法或情绪）ThenIfoundmyselfhuggedbymymum.ShepattedonmybacksoftlybutsaidnothinguntilIcalmeddown.（解决问题）Nextwitnessedtheirsolution.Theydid