Unit2IconicAttractions话题写作之应用文写作课件高中英语人教版（2019）选择性

Unit2ICONICATTRACTIONS人教版2019选择性必修第四册Describeaniconicanimal应用文：描写标志性动物短文读话题写作文高二下

LearningobjectivesAttheendofclass,youwillbeableto：1.Learnbyreadingtodescribeiconicanimalsfromtheirappearance,habits,features,etc.2.Learntouserhetoricaldevices修辞手法;3.Writeapassagetodescribeaniconicanimal.123新课导入

语言输入活用课文目录CONTENTS4

实战演练

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技巧点拨新课导入：

引出话题01⑴Tourismisthemobilereading.旅游是移动的阅读。⑵Theworldisabook，butpeopledonottravelreadonlyonepage.世界是一本书，而不旅行的人们只读了其中的一页。⑶Visitanyplacesofinterest，aonceinterest，thenswimandtheotherisakindofscenery.任何名胜，游览一次有一次的乐趣，再游便另是一种风光。⑷Tourismisonlywiththefeetandeyes，andtraveltobringsoulanddreams.旅游仅仅是用双脚与眼睛，而旅行还要带上灵魂和梦想。⑸Thereasonwhypeoplelovetotravel，nottoarrive，butinordertoenjoyallthefunofthejourney.人之所以爱旅行，不是为了抵达目的地，而是为了享受旅途中的种种乐趣。名言潮语Australiaisthelargestislandcountryintheworld.Therearesomanyinterestingattractionsinthiscountry.GoldCoastfamilyholidaysarealwaysgreatfunwhetheryouarefromAustraliaorfromabroad.Therearebeautifulbeaches,adventureparks,natureparksandsomuchmore.Therearesomanysightstoseehere.

Itisapitytodriveinacarandyou’llmissagreatpartofit.

Australiaishometomanyanimalsandbirdsthatcanonlybeseenwhenmovingslowlyandgoingintotheareasthattheylive.Whenyouareonabicycle,youhavetheadvantageofbeingabletostopwheneveryouwanttoseeaninterestinganimalorbirdthatyouhaveneverseenbefore.Itisaquietermodeoftransportationaswell,soyoumightevenbeabletotakeapicture.Whenyouareonthebeach,youcanbreathethecleanairandviewthebeautyofthewaterandsand.

Itisatotallydifferentexperiencefromeithersimplysunbathingorpassingitinacar.TherearemanychoicesofhiringabicycletoexperiencetheGoldCoastattractions.Therearestoresthatwillfitabikeperfectlytoyoursize.Thesebikesforbothadultsandchildrenareinmanystylesandcolorstopleaseanytaste.Ifyouhaveeverwantedtotryatandembike,nowisyourchance,becausetheyhavethose,too.AbicyclehireonGoldCoastissomethingthateveryoneshouldtryatleastonce.Thisisawonderfulchanceforanyonewholikestocycleanditisalsoacheapwaytotravelwithyourfamily.美文欣赏[探索发现]1.Whynotyou’dbetterdriveacaronGoldCoast??____________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

2．What’stheauthor’sattitudetowardsabikehireonGoldCoast?______________________________________________________________________________________________.Becauseyoucan’tenjoythebeautifulsightswellHesupportsitverymuch语言输入:

跟着课文练布局02QAQuestionandanswercolumn

ExpositoryessayWhatisthetypeofthetext?Kangaroo

Appearance：Uniqueness：Relationshipwithhumans：Babies：Q1:Australiahaslotsofuniqueanimals,butwhichanimalisasymbolofthecountry?cannot

,havea

.babykangaroosweigh

.To

inmother’spouch.hitand___________look

.cutewalkbackwardspouchstaysafeandwarm2gReadthetextcarefullyandtakenotes.kickhard

KoalaAppearance：uniqueness：Relationshipwithothers：Others：cutebut

.interactionwithhumanscan

.

governmentbeganto

.eating,

&

ontreetrunksReadQ2:Koalasarecute,andweseesomanypicturesofpeopleholdingthem.ButinmanyplacesinAustralia,itisagainstthelawtoeventouchthem.Canyouclarifythat?sensitivecausethemalotofstresssleepinghangingmakelaws

againsttouchingkoalasTasmaniandevil

Appearance：Diet：Relationshipwithothers：Others：Q3:So,we'vetalkedaboutsomecuteanimals.Whataboutanimalswhicharen'tsocute?

atnight,

whenfightingoreatingcould

.aboutthesizeof

andlooklikerather

.

towardspeoplemostly

.smalldogslargeblackratsdeadanimalsnotviolent

hunt

loudcries/noise

wakethedeadDuck-billedplatypusAppearance：Uniqueness：Others：

likeaduck’s

inanestbutisa

,withaunique

.can

underthewater;use

tofindfood.Q4:Australiaalsohassomeanimalsthatmanypeoplehaveneverheardof,forexample,theduck-billedplatypus.Isthatsomekindofbird?noseandfeet

biologylayeggs

primitivemammalelectricalsensors

diveIntroduceChineseIconicAnimalsWhataspectsdoyouwanttowriteabout?Makesomenotesbydesigningyourownprofileofanimal.Moreaspectsforyou:population

behaviorandhabits

Special/uniquefeaturesculturalsignificance

symbolicmeaning

relatedpoemorstories

...Appreciatethesentenceswithrhetoricaldevices(修辞手法)

involved.D.repetition(重复)exaggeration(夸张)[ɪɡˌzædʒəˈreɪʃn]A.Simile(明喻)[ˈsɪməli]A.Simile(明喻)C.analogy

[əˈnælədʒɪ](类比,比喻)&metaphor隐喻B.hyperbole夸张[haɪˈpə:bəlɪ]ToemphasizethereasonwhykangaroosisthesymbolofAustralia.

Toemphasizetheconditiontotouchkoalas.Totellusthesizeinamorepreciseway.

Tohighlightitsfrighteningsound.Tovividlytellusthewaytheygivebirth.

A.simile明喻B.hyperboleexaggeration夸张C.analogymetaphor类比&隐喻D.repetition重复

Usingrhetoricaldevicesmakesyourcompositionvividandinteresting!使用修辞手法让你的文章生动有趣！ReadfortherhetoricaldevicesinvolvedThinking:Whyshouldweusetheminourwriting?What’sthebenefits?活用课文：

跟着课文学词汇031.Ithasbeenconfirmedthatourdonatedbookswill_________________eachstudentassoonaspossible.已确认我们捐赠的这些书将会尽快分发到每个学生手中。（distribute）(短文)2.Besidesenrichingourschoollife,thewinterpicnicalso____________________________________.除了丰富我们的学校生活，冬日野餐也把我们学生从繁重的学习中解脱出来。（freedom）(活动介绍)3.________________________________________

,Icancommunicatewithease.我能说一口流利的英语，我可以轻松地交流。（capacity）(自荐信)4._____________________________________,theyarelikelytogetdistractedbyonlinegames.因为许多学生缺乏自律，他们很可能会被网络游戏分散注意力。(dueto)(2022·全国乙卷短文)活用写作词汇bedistributedtofreedusstudentsfromtheheavyworkofstudyWithacapacitytospeak/forspeakingfluentEnglishDuetothefactthatmanystudentslackself⁃discipline5.(新高考Ⅰ)Forthat,you’lloften_____________________withsecurityandcomfort.为了那个目的，你会经常待在安全舒适的中心位置。(locate)6.(全国Ⅰ书面表达)___________________

tablemanners,Iwanttogiveyousomesuggestionsandhopethattheywillbehelpfultoyou.关于餐桌礼仪，我想给你一些建议，希望会对你有帮助。(refer)7.(江苏卷)Takingonthischallengewillbringyou________________someonewhosharesyourinterests.接受这个挑战会让你遇到和你有共同兴趣的人。(contact)8.Everyworkerwill___________________fourweeks’paidholidayayear.每个工人每年能享受4周的带薪休假。(entitle)活用写作词汇gettostayinacentrallocationIn/Withreferencetoincontactwithbeentitledto活用课文：

跟着课文学佳句03细节描写原：Locatedtothesouthoftheequator,belowmanyothercountriesontheglobe，it'softeninformallyreferredtoas“downunder”．它位于赤道以南，在地球上很多国家的下方，常被非正式地称为“downunder”。1.这个农场被绿树环绕，坐落在我们学校附近的山脚下。________________________________,thefarmislocatedatthefootofthehillnearourschool.原：Mostoftheirmusicalinstrumentsarereallyjuststicksfoundontheground,amongwhichthereisanamazinginstrumentcalledthedidgeridoo.他们绝大多数的乐器其实就是地上找到的树枝。其中就有一种令人惊叹的叫作“迪吉里杜管”的乐器。2.我们计划游览校园，在此期间你可以欣赏美景，了解我校的历史。(欢迎辞)Atourofourcampusisscheduled,____________________________________________andgettoknowthehistoryofourschool.原：ItissaidthatnownearlyhalfofallAustraliancitizenswereeitherbornoverseasorhaveparentswhowerebornoverseas.据说现在近一半的澳大利亚公民要么自己出生于海外，要么父母出生于海外。3.希望这些建议会对大熊猫的保护有一定的帮助。_________________thesesuggestionswouldbeofgreathelptotheprotectionofgiantpandas.SurroundedbygreentreesduringwhichyoucanadmirethebeautifulsceneryItishopedthat细节描写4.是时候采取有效措施来保护金丝猴了。____________________takeeffectiveactiontoprotectgoldenmonkeys.5.为了保持身体健康，这些熊猫必须经常锻炼身体。__________,thesepandasmustalwayspersistinexercising.原：It’salmosttimeformetosaygoodbyetoAustralia.差不多是我跟澳大利亚说再见的时候了。原：Tosurviveinthisvastlandontheocean,theAborigineshadtobeinclosecontactwithnature.为了在大洋中这片辽阔的土地上生存，澳大利亚土著人得和大自然保持密切的联系。It’stimetoTokeepfit03技法点拨：

如何写标志性风物①Thisisacuteanimal,whichislovedbymostkids.这是一种可爱的动物，受到大多数孩子的喜爱。②Itisauniqueanimallivinginthedeepvalley.它是生活在深谷中的一种独一无二的动物。③Withawidedistributionaroundthecountry,theyareundoubtedlythesymbolofthecountry.由于广泛分布在全国各地，它们无疑是国家的象征。④WhiletouringtheQinghai­TibetPlateau,thechancesarethatyou’llcomeacrossTibetanantelopes.在游览青藏高原时，你很有可能会遇到藏羚羊。⑤Almostallofthemlivinginhighmountainsandpreferringaquietlife,seldomdoweseethem.他们几乎都居住在高山上，喜欢安静的生活，我们很少看到它们的身影。1.夺人眼球开头句①Theanimalhasathinfacewithtwobigandbrighteyesonit.这种动物有一张瘦瘦的脸，脸上有两个大大的明亮的眼睛。②ItisnativetoAfricaanditspendsmosttimeintheforest.它产自非洲，大部分时间在森林里度过。③Itfeedsongrassandisfriendlytopeople.它是食草动物，对人类很友好。④Thelocalvillagershavebeenlivinginharmonywiththeanimal.当地村民一直和这种动物和谐相处。⑤Asiswellknowntous,elephantsarehighlysocialandintelligentanimals.众所周知，大象是高度群居和聪明的动物。⑥Duetothedestructionofnaturalhabitat,thenumberofAsianElephantshasdeclinedsharply.由于自然栖息地的破坏，亚洲象的数量急剧下降。2.亮点出彩篇中句①Let’smakejointeffortstoprotecttheendangeredanimals.让我们共同努力保护濒危动物吧。②It’shightimethatweshouldliveinharmonywiththenature.到了我们应该与自然和谐相处的时候了。③Finally,weshouldletpeopleknowtheimportanceofprotectingendangeredanimals.最后，我们应该让人们知道保护濒危动物的重要性。3.韵味无穷结尾句【动物描写】WhenitcomestoChina’siconicanimals,thefirstthingthatcomestomymindis___________(动物名称).Asoneofthemostbelovedanimalsintheworld,___________(动物名称)mainlyfeedon___________(食物),whichmakesupalmost99%oftheirdiet.Anotherhighlightoftheseadorableanimalsis___________(外貌及生活习性）.However,habitatlossandpoachinghaveput___________(动物名称)

underthreat.NotonlyisthepandaanationaltreasureofChina,butitalsoservesasapeaceambassador.Thus,it'sofpremierimportanceforustotreasureourlovelyfriends.4.写作模板【景点描写】Dear____,I’mdelightedtoknowthatyouwillcometo___________（城市名称)

nextweek.Whenitcomestoitsiconicattractions,I’dliketointroduce_____________(景点名称)

toyou.Locatedatthetipof_________(地点）,

___________

(景点名称)

isthesymbolof_________(城市).ItsheightranksfirstinAsiaandthirdintheworldamong________________.____________(景点名称)

offerstouristsfromhomeandabroadwonderfulsightseeing,deliciousmeals,shopping,recreationandsoon.Shouldyouneedmoreinformation,pleasefeelfreetocontactme.Wishyouapleasantjourney.Yourssincerely,LiHua4.写作模板05写作实践：

触类旁通

假定你是李华，某国际英文杂志的IconicAnimals栏目正面向全球中学生举行征文活动，请你写一篇介绍大熊猫的英语短文应征。1.主要习性；2.现状；3.独特/有趣之处。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。典例赏析1、审题定调

本写作要求一篇介绍大熊猫的英语短文。内容包括大熊猫的主要习性、现状以及

独特/有趣之处。此类短文一般用第三人称，时态为一般现在时，但有时要根据实际情况有所变化。2、谋篇布局

针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：

第一部分：引入话题，介绍动物的外形；

第二部分：具体描述动物的生活环境、生活习性；

第三部分：描写动物的独特或有趣之处。第一步：明确要求、布局谋篇1.当谈到……2.代表性的动物3.某人想到……4.最受欢迎的……之一5.以……为食...6.组成7.另一个亮点是……8.独特的黑白毛皮第二部：搜索话题词汇whenitcomesto...iconicanimals...

comestoone’smindoneofthemostbeloved...feedsonmakeupanotherhighlightis…distinctiveblackandwhitefur9.适应周围的环境10.狡黠的眼神11.以……而出名12.栖息地丧失13.使……面临威胁14.国宝15.和平大使16.对……至关重要第二部：搜索话题词汇adapttothesurroundingsacraftylookfromhiseyesbefamous/knownfor...habitatlossput…underthreatnationaltreasurepeaceambassadorbeofpremierimportanceto…（一）完成句子1.一提到中国代表性的动物，我首先想到的是熊猫。WhenitcomestoChina’siconicanimals,thefirstthingthat_______________ispandas.2.作为世界上最受欢迎的动物之一，大熊猫主要以竹子为食，竹子几乎占其饮食的99%。Asoneofthemostbelovedanimalsintheworld,pandasmainly_______________,whichmakesupalmost99%oftheirdiet.3.这些可爱的动物的另一个亮点是它们独特的黑白毛皮，帮助它们适应周围的环境。Anotherhighlightoftheseadorableanimalsistheirdistinctiveblackandwhitefur,which___________________________.4.由于栖息地的丧失和偷猎使大熊猫面临威胁，大熊猫现在是濒危物种。Duetothehabitatlossandpoaching_________________________,pandasarenowanengenderedspecies.第三步：巧用话题词汇句式comestomymindfeedonbamboohelpsthemadapttotheirsurroundingshaveputpandasunderthreat5.然而，由于中国政府和自然资源保护主义者的努力，熊猫的数量正在慢慢恢复。

However,thankstotheeffortsoftheChinesegovernmentandconservationists,____________________________.6.我最喜欢的两只熊猫是四川熊猫花花和秦岭熊猫七仔。七仔是以独特的棕色毛发和狡黠的眼神而出名。MyfavouritepandasareSichuanHuahuaandQinMountainsQizaiwho________________________________________________________.7.熊猫不仅是中国的国宝，而且还是和平大使。ThepandaisnotonlyanationaltreasureofChina,butitalso__________________________.8.因此，珍惜我们可爱的朋友对我们来说至关重要。Thus,_________________________treasureourlovelyfriends.第三步：巧用话题词汇句式thepandapopulationisslowlyrecoveringservesasapeaceambassadoriisknownforhisdistinc