高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练01（解析版）

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练01一、心理描写类•积极情绪：Emotioncoursedthroughone’sveinslike+喻体,makingeveryfiberofone’sbeingtinglewith...•消极情绪：Emotiongrippedone’shearttightly,squeezingitlike+喻体,andonecouldbarely...•复杂情绪：One’smindwasa+喻体,withtwoopposingthoughtswagingafiercewar,leavingone...1.原句：Anticipation__________________________________________________awildcurrent,_________________________________________________________excitement.翻译：期待如狂野的电流般在我的血管中奔涌，让我全身的每一根纤维都因兴奋而颤抖。2.原句：Fear__________________________________,____________________________avice,__________________________breatheasthedangerloomedcloser.翻译：恐惧紧紧揪住我的心脏，像钳子一样挤压着，随着危险步步逼近，我几乎无法呼吸。3.原句：________________________battlefield,_______________________________________,____________________________________________tornandindecisive.翻译：我的内心犹如一个战场，两种对立的想法激烈交锋，让我痛苦挣扎、犹豫不决。答案：coursedthroughmyveinslike;makingeveryfiberofmybeingtinglewithgrippedmyhearttightly;squeezingitlike;andIcouldbarelyMymindwasa;withtwoopposingthoughtswagingafiercewar;leavingme段落一（积极情绪→复杂情绪）Istoodbackstage,myhandsclutchingtheguitarstrapuntilmyknucklesturnedwhite.Theaudience’schatterfadedasthehostcalledmyname,and(1)_________________________________________________________________________________________________________(期待如狂野的电流般在我的血管中奔涌，让我全身的每一根纤维都因兴奋而颤抖)I’dpracticedthissongahundredtimes,yetasIsteppedintothespotlight,(2)___________________________________________________________________________________________________(内心却像一个战场，两种对立的想法激烈交锋，让我痛苦挣扎、犹豫不决)—shouldIsticktotheoriginalversionoraddthenewriffI’dcreatedlastnight?Whenthefirstnoteofthepianoaccompanimentfilledthehall,Iclosedmyeyes,letthemusicguideme,andchosetotrustmygut.答案：(1)anticipationcoursedthroughmyveinslikeawildcurrent,makingeveryfiberofmybeingtinglewithexcitement.(2)mymindwasabattlefield,withtwoopposingthoughtswagingafiercewar,leavingmetornandindecisive段落二（消极情绪→复杂情绪→积极情绪转折）Istaredatthebrokencameraonthefloor,thephotosofmygrandma’sbirthdaypartystillinside.(1)____________________________________________________________________________________________________(恐惧就紧紧揪住我的心脏，像钳子一样挤压着，我几乎无法呼吸)asIthoughtabouthowupsetshe’dbe—thoseweretheonlyphotoswe’dtakentogetherthatday.(2)__________________________________________________________________________________________(我的内心像一个战场，两种对立的想法激烈交锋，让我痛苦挣扎、犹豫不决)—shouldItellherthetruthandriskmakinghersad,orlieandpretendI’dlostthecamera?JustasIwasabouttohidethebrokendevice,mygrandmawalkedin,sawmyredeyes,andhuggedme.“Photosfade,butourmemoriesdon’t,”shesaidsoftly.Herwordsmeltedmyfear,andIfinallyletoutthebreathI’dbeenholding.答案：(1)Feargrippedmyhearttightly,squeezingitlikeavice,andIcouldbarelybreathe(2)Mymindwasabattlefield,withtwoopposingthoughtswagingafiercewar,leavingmetornandindecisive二、动作描写类•紧急动作：Withoutamoment’shesitation,sb.+v-ed+伴随状语（clutching/grasping...）•意外结果：Sb.+v-ed+（方式状语）+onlyto+v•细腻动作：Sb.+v-ed+（程度/状态）,with+身体部位+v-ing...1.原句：___________________________________,Tomdashedoutoftheclassroom,clutchinghisumbrellatightlyasthethunderroared.翻译：汤姆毫不犹豫地冲出教室，雷雨大作时紧紧攥着雨伞。2.原句：Shetiptoedintotheroom,hopingnottowakehermother,__________________thebedempty.翻译：她踮着脚尖走进房间，希望不吵醒妈妈，却发现床上空无一人。3.原句：Shetiptoedacrosstheroom,tryingnottomakeasound,_________________________asgentlyasafeatheralighting.翻译：她踮着脚尖穿过房间，尽量不发出一点声音，双脚像飘落的羽毛般轻柔移动。答案：Withoutamoment’shesitationonlytofindherfeetmoving段落一（紧急动作+意外结果）Thebellfortheendofclasshadn’tfinishedringingwhendarkcloudsrolledin,andthickraindropsstartedpouringdown.(1)__________________________________(毫不犹豫地),Tomdashedoutoftheclassroom,clutchinghisumbrellatightlyasthethunderroared.Heheldtheumbrellahighoverhishead,rushingtowardtheschoolgatetomeethislittlesister—she’dforgottenhersthatmorning.Hescannedthecrowdanxiously,callinghername,(2)____________________________________(却发现她站在墙边的树下)bythewall,herschoolbagheldoverherheadtoblocktherain.Reliefwashedoverhimasheranover,openingtheumbrellatoshieldthembothfromthedownpour.答案：(1)Withoutamoment’shesitation(2)onlytofindherstandingunderatree段落二（细腻动作+意外结果+紧急动作）Itwaspastmidnight,andLilywantedtoleaveacupofwarmmilkonhermom’sdesk—momhadbeenworkinglateeverynightthisweek.Shetiptoedacrosstheroom,tryingnottomakeasound,(1)______________________________________(双脚轻柔移动)afeatheralighting.Sheheldthemugcarefully,itswarmthseepingthroughherpalms,andapproachedthedeskquietly,(2)_______________________________________________(却不小心碰倒了笔筒)—pensandpencilsscatteredacrossthefloorwithasoftclatter.Withoutamoment’shesitation,shekneltdownquickly,pickingupthestationeryonebyone,(3)_____________________________________________(生怕吵醒妈妈，心怦怦直跳).Justasshefinishedputtingthemback,asoft“Thankyou,sweetie”camefromthebed—momhadbeenawakethewholetime,watchingherwithasmile.答案：herfeetmovingasgentlyasonlytoknockoverapenholderbyaccidentherheartracinginfearofwakingmom三、环境烘托类•拟人化环境：自然现象+v-ed+（方式状语）+asif+拟人从句•场景氛围：With+环境名词+v-ing+（细节）,sb.+v-ed...•感官环境：具体事物+感官动词（crunched/lashed...）,（补充说明）1.原句：Thewindwhistledthroughthetrees,________________________________________.翻译：风穿过树林呼啸作响，仿佛在为落叶哭泣。2.原句：_______________________________________intheduskandthecricketschirpinginthegrass,shesatthere,lostinmemories.翻译：黄昏中萤火虫飞舞，草丛里蟋蟀鸣叫，她坐在那里，沉浸在回忆中。3.原句：Ahowlinggaleandtorrentialrain___________________________.翻译：狂风暴雨猛烈地拍打着窗户。答案：asifweepingforthefallenleavesWiththefirefliesdancinglashedthewindows段落一（拟人化环境+场景氛围+感官环境）Thewindwhistledthroughthetrees,(1)____________________________________________(仿佛在为路边堆积的落叶哭泣)thatpiledupalongthepath.(2)_______________________________________(萤火虫飞舞)intheduskandthecricketschirpinginthegrass,shesatthere,lostinmemories—ofsummereveningswhenshe’dchasefireflieswithhergrandpa,theirlaughtermixingwiththecricketsongs.Asuddengustblew,carryingtheearthyscentofwetsoil,andshepulledhershawltighteraroundhershoulders.Justthen,(3)______________________________________________(一根小树枝“咔嚓”断裂)underfootnearby,makingherjumpslightly—thoughshesoonsmiled,knowingitwasonlyasquirrelscurryingbacktoitsnest.Theduskdeepened,andthewind’s“weeping”grewsofter,(4)_______________________________________(仿佛在让她多沉浸一会儿回忆)alittlelonger.答案：(1)asifweepingforthefallenleaves(2)Withthefirefliesdancing(3)asmallbranchsnapped(4)asiflettingherlingerinthememories段落二（感官环境+拟人化环境+场景氛围）Ahowlinggaleandtorrentialrain(1)_______________________________(猛烈地拍打着窗户),theirforcesostrongthattheglassrattledwitheveryblow.Thewinddashedagainstthedoorframe,(2)_____________________________________________________(仿佛想闯进屋里)toescapethestormoutside.(3)_______________________________(壁炉里的火苗噼啪作响)andsendingoccasionalsparksontothehearth,Dadsatbythewindow,wipingthefoggedglasstochecktheroad.Momstoodinthekitchen,stirringapotofhotsoup—thericharomaofcarrotsandbeefdriftingintothelivingroom,fightingoffthecoldfromtherain.“Thestormshouldpassbymidnight,”Dadsaid,turningtoMom,“We’llhavehotsoupandtellstoriesuntilthen.”Therain(4)_______________________________(继续拍打着窗户),butinsidethehouse,thesputteringfireandwarmsoupmadethehowlinggalefeellikeadistant,unthreateningsound.答案：(1)lashedthewindows(2)asiftryingtobreakintothehouse(3)Withthefireplacesputtering(4)continuedtolashthewindows四、情感互动类•神态+对话：Tears+非谓语+inone’seyes,sb.+v-ed+“...”+while+v-ing...•动作+对话：“...”+sb.+v-ed,（伴随动作/神态）+“...”•情绪+动作：Overwhelmedwith+emotion,sb.+v-ed+（动作细节）1.原句：___________________________________,shewhispered,“I’msorry”whilegentlypattinghisshoulder.翻译：她眼中满含泪水，一边轻轻拍着他的肩膀，一边低语道：“对不起”。2.原句：“We’llmakeit,”hesaid,________________________,“justholdon.”翻译：“我们会成功的，”他说着，拳头紧攥，透着坚定，“坚持住。”3.原句：____________________________crimson,andhecouldfeeltheheatrisingfromhisneck.Heshiftedhisweightuncomfortablyfromonefoottotheother,wishinghecoulddisappearintothinair.翻译：他的脸涨得通红，能感觉到脖子上热气升腾。他不自在地把重心从一只脚换到另一只脚，真希望自己能消失不见。答案：TearsbrimminginhereyeshisfistclenchedindeterminationHisfaceflushed段落一（愧疚与原谅）Lilastaredatthebrokenmusicboxinherhands—theonehersisterhadkeptsincechildhood.She’dknockeditoverwhilerushingtoschoolthatmorning,andnowthedelicatemelodywouldn’tplay.(1)_______________________________________________(眼中满含泪水),shewhispered,“I’msorry”whilegentlypattinghersister’sshoulder,(2)___________________________________________________(声音里满是懊悔，微微发颤).Hersisterlookedatthemusicbox,thenatLila’stearfulface,andletoutasoftsigh.“We’llmakeit,”shesaid,(3)_________________________________________________(拳头紧攥，透着坚定),“justholdon.Dadknowshowtofixthesethings—wecanaskhimtonight.”(4)_______________________________________(如释重负的情绪涌上心头),Lilahuggedhersistertightly,feelingtheweightofguiltliftoffherchest.Thesunlightfilteredthroughthewindow,castingawarmglowonthetwogirls,turningthemomentofworryintooneofquietcomfort.答案：(1)Tearsbrimminginhereyes(2)hervoicetremblingwi