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考研英语写作

三段论：第一段一描述图画或图表

第二段——解释寓意

第三段——给出评论

第一^殳：

第一句

1、Asisshownabove,描述图画（倒装）.Therehasbeenaheated

discussionaboutapictureinthenewspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛

的关注。

描述图画注意：

第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。

第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。

第三部；寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述.

模式：在图画中央有--------（倒装），它-----------（主谓一致、现在分词、非

限定性定语从句），周国有--------（独立主格作状语）

第二句--------总结

①Thepicture,atthefistgIimpse,seemstobesimple,butonly

apenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitssuperficialmeaning.

这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含

义。

②Theauthorsrealpurposeisnotthefactitself,buttolead

ustofindwhathidesbehindtheiceburgo作者的真实目的不是图

画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。

第二段

第一句—观点的提出

(1)Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwiththe重

要主题,Innocountry,otherthanchina,ithasbeensaid,isthis

phenomenonmoreobvious.

(2)ThepicturedoesrevelcertaindisturbingsociaIphenomenon,

thatis,peopletendtooverlookthefactthat有害主题.(或The

picturedoesrevealthat有害主题isnotonlyharmful,butalso

damaging.)ThepastdecadehaswitnessedahugedeveIopmentin

economyowingtothereformandopening-uppolicycarriedout,

bringingsomeproblemsatthesametime,withtheaboveonebeing

theforemost.在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有

了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。(或Inno

countryotherthanchina,ithasbeensaidmisthisproblemmore

serous.)

万能观点：

①图画主题的重要性

Nothingcanbecomparedwith•••

•••isnotonlynecessary,butalsoindispensable•••

•••remainstobeanintegralpartin•••

②图画主题的有害性

Nothingismoreharmfulordamaging.

•••isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamagingo

•••inlargemeasuredetrimentalo

第二句------进一步讲解人们的态度(重视/不重视)

(1)ThepubIicfailstoattachdueattentionto有害主题。

(2)ThepubIicattachdueattentionto重要主题.

givepriority••优先考虑•••

attachattentionto•••对••注意

emphasizetheimportanceof•••强调•••的重要性

stressthefundamentaIroleof•••强调•••的根本作用

第三句------对主题进行展开(3-4句)

Bydoingso,十一个角度平行展开•••(也可用科学论据法或举例法)

(一)、十一个万能理由(角度)

物质回报：

①主题canprovide(offer)peopIewithnotonlydeliciousfoodbut

fashionablecIothesandsuchbenefitsascomfortabledwelIingsand

handsomeautomobiles.

②TheindustriousandinsightfulpeopIewi11neverfaiItoprofits

from(benefitfrom)doing主题.

时间角度

节约时间

①Itcanmakethemostofone'stime9chanceandtechnology.

②主题(e.goLearningmorewesternculture),occupyingsparetime

soconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimefor

boredom/wonderingandhelpsthemachieveamorebroadenhorizon.

浪费时间

AsalIknown,thedaysofyouthshouldnotbefriend/idledawayand

timeshouldbecherished,but(主题e.gostarworship)wastes

hours,lavishesdaysandevensquandersyears,whichleadsusto

saykillsanevenmurdersyoungster'sprimetime.

效率角度

①主题(e.goStarworship/AddictiontotheInternet)makespeopIe

wearyofotherimportantthings,discourageshimtolearnmore,

andfinallylosetheirinteresttolearn,andleadtolowgrades

/lowefficiency/underachievement.

②One'senergygraduallywearsoffandone'sthought,creative

thinkingandexplorationhasbeenstifledbydoing主题。

方便和快捷

①主题(eog.WideWorldWeb)providespeopIewithup—to-date,

concreteandaccurateandvividinformationo

②主题(e。goMSNandotherinstantmessengers)canshrinkthe

distancebetweencitiesandevencontinents;smooththe

communicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetween

peopIeo

安全角度

①主题cansecurehisfoodandshelter.

②主题canshieldpeopIefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrom

injury,robbery,assaultstotrafficaccidents.

身心健康

①(主题)canreIievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuch

problems,stress,isolationandsolitude.

②Bydoing(主题)peopIestayhealthy,andthereforepreventheart

diseases,hypertension,diabetesorfattiness.

③(主题)canaIsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingone?sknowIedge

andgivingusanewperspectiveoftheoutsideworld0

生活娱乐

①It'samajormeansofentertainmentthatreIievesone,spressure,

boredom,stressandburden。

表“受益”的词组：

Broadenone'smind

Enrichone,sexperience

Enhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone,swork

②ItisweIIreceivedasaninstructivemodeofentertainmentthat

providespeopIewithnotonlyabulkofinformation,butasource

ofimaginationaswelIo

(3)Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyour

energy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansof

entertainmenttoyouseeminglytedious,routineandmonotonous

life.

有助成长和成功(自己和他人)

①PeopIecanobtainfinancialaids,materialsupport,mentaI

comfort,orspiritualbackfromyoursupport.

②Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou.Throughyourspeeches,

instructionsorassistance,theycanbroadentheirminds,

increasetheirincome。

(§)Throughyourencouragement,theycultivatethespiritof

competition,participationandcooperationandfinallyfind

theirownwaystofulfilltheirpursuitofhappiness。

④Thoughyourassistance,notonlycantheyaccumuIateweaIth,but

wiIIalsoestabIishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andeven

attainsociaIstatus.

⑤PeopIewhotreatotherswithlove,sincerity,sympathy,

enthusiasm,hospitalityorgenerosityaIwayswinrespectfrom

others。

(6)Itdose/doesn'tnecessarilycultivatetaIent,confidence,

self-worth,self-reIianceanddignity0

文化价值观

①11cannotheIppeopIetreattheworldwithbenevoIence,confidence

andtolerance。

②ItcansometimesintensifyconfIictsandtensionsbetween

nationsoItputHarmoniouehumanrelationshipindangeroIt

cannotpromotemutuaIunderstanding.Itcanbreachthefriendly

ties,andwidenthegapbetweenpeopIe.

环境保护

①Itmeansthatcentralauthoritycansetasidemorefundsto

eIiminateairpo11ution,noisepollution,reducesoiIerosion

ordesertification,preventthethinnessofozonelayers,reduce

industrialsewage,andrescuethedwindlingtropicaljungles.

②ItgovernmentshouldraisethepubIicawarenessofenvironmental

preservation,therebypromotingsustainabledeveIopmentand

creatingamoreIivabIeenvironment0

社会宏观角度

①Itcanminimizeinflation,economicstagnation,economic

recession,unempIoymentrate.ItcanmaintainsociaIorderand

reducecrimerateo

②Itmeansthatrevolutionizethescientificlevelofacountry,

meansofcocommunicationandquaIityofIife。

(3)ItmeansthattheauthoritiescanaIIocatemorefundstothe

constructionandquaIityofinfrastructurerangingfrom

kindergartens,hospitals,medicaIcenter,museums,schooI

Iibraries,trainstohighwaysandexpressways.

④ItmeansthatpeopIecanhaveequalopportunitytoco11ege

education,employments,self—realizationandpursuitof

materialweaIth。

(二)、科学论据法

AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofScience(CAS),•••

AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofSociaIScience

(CASS),•••

ChinaDailyinterviewedforpeopIefromfourprofessions-asurgeon,a

whiIecollarworker,acarpenterandafarmer。Thesurveydiscoversthat

alIofthemareoftheideathat主题重要或有害.

(三)、举例子

①OurhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexampIesof•••,

withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost。我们人类历史上与这个话题相

关的例子有很多，下面这个是最有说服力的。

②AmongaIIthetouchingfactsreIatingto•••thatIhavehoard,noticed,

andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneis•••在我所听到的、看到的、

经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中，最有说服力的是•••

第四句(结尾句——虚拟语气和利弊句)

虚拟语气：

(1)积极的主题

如果没有•••，我们可能根本做不了•••

Weretherenosth,neverwouldwedosth.

(2)消极的主题

如果情况继续下去，我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。

Werethesituationtocontinueasitis,wewouldpaythehighprice.

e。goWerethetendencytocontinueasitis,ourfuturegeneratio