高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练08（解析版）

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练08一、情绪描写专项1.Aflush/waveof+情绪名词+swept/floodedoversb.（一阵……情绪涌上某人心头）2.Sb.couldfeelone’sheartpounding/racing(wildly)inone’schest.（某人感到心在胸中砰砰直跳）3.Itsuddenlyoccurredto/hit/strucksb.that...（某人突然想到……）1.原句片段：当看到救援队出现在山洞口时，被困的男孩感到一阵强烈的宽慰。英文描写：___________________________________________________whenhesawtherescueteamappearatthecaveentrance.中文翻译：当看到救援队出现在山洞口时，一阵宽慰涌上被困男孩的心头。2.原句片段：站在全校师生面前发言，她紧张得心跳加速，嘴巴发干。英文描写：Standinginfrontofalltheteachersandstudentstospeak,__________________________________________________________________中文翻译：站在全校师生面前发言，她能感觉到心在砰砰直跳，嘴巴也发干。3.原句片段：直到听到父亲的解释，她才突然明白自己误会了哥哥。英文描写：___________________________________________shehadmisunderstoodherbrotheruntilsheheardherfather’sexplanation.中文翻译：直到听到父亲的解释，她才突然明白自己误会了哥哥。答案：1.Awaveofreliefsweptoverthetrappedboy2.shecouldfeelherheartracingandhermouthgoingdry.3.Itsuddenlyoccurredtoherthat段落一：竞赛失利后的释怀Lilyhadpracticeddayandnightforthepianocompetition,sowhenshefailedtomakeittothefinal,(1)__________________________________(一阵强烈的失望涌上心头).Shelockedherselfintheroom,staringatthepianokeysthatoncebroughtherjoy,and(2)__________________________________________________(能感觉到心在胸腔里痛苦地怦怦直跳)—allthelatenightsandtiredfingersseemedtobeinvain.(3)__________________________________(就在她快要哭出来的时候),hermothergentlyknockedonthedoorandsaid,“Everymistakeisastepclosertosuccess.”(4)__________________________________(莉莉突然意识到，比赛不是终点),butachancetofindhershortcomings.Withadeepbreath,shewipedhereyesandsatbackinfrontofthepiano,readytopracticeagain.答案：(1)aheavywaveofdisappointmentsweptoverher(2)couldfeelherheartpoundingpainfullyinherchest(3)Justasshewasabouttoburstintotears(4)ItsuddenlystruckLilythatthecompetitionwasnottheend段落二：意外重逢的惊喜Tomwaswalkingthroughtheoldstreetwherehegrewup,reminiscingabouthischildhood,whenafamiliarvoicecalledhisname.Heturnedaround,and(1)___________________________________________(一阵惊喜涌上心头)—itwashisbestfriendJack,whohadmovedtoanothercitytenyearsago.Theyhuggedtightly,and(2)__________________________________(汤姆能感觉到自己的心因兴奋而怦怦直跳),unabletobelievetheymetagaininsuchanunexpectedway.Astheysatdowninanearbycaféandtalkedaboutthepastyears,(3)____________________________________________(汤姆突然想到，真正的友谊永远不会褪色),eveniftheywereapartforalongtime.Theyexchangedphonenumbersandpromisedtokeepintouch,withsmilesontheirfacesalltheway.答案：(1)awaveofsurprisefloodedoverhim(2)Tomcouldfeelhisheartracingwithexcitement(3)itsuddenlyoccurredtoTomthattruefriendshipneverfaded二、动作描写专项1.Sb.+连贯动词短语（dashforward→kneeldown→gather...）（动作链描写）2.Sb.didsth.with+状态描述（tired/shakylegs）（伴随状态的动作）3.Sb.clenched/grasped...,(trembling/shiveringwith...)（伴随情绪的动作）1.原句片段：看到走失的女儿，母亲立刻冲上前，跪下来把她紧紧抱进怀里。英文描写：Seeingherlostdaughter,_________________________________________________________________________.中文翻译：看到走失的女儿，母亲冲上前去，跪下来，把她紧紧抱在怀里。2.原句片段：跑完马拉松全程后，他用疲惫的双腿穿过了终点线，瘫倒在地。英文描写：Afterfinishingthefullmarathon,_____________________________________________________________________.中文翻译：跑完马拉松全程后，他用疲惫的双腿穿过了终点线，瘫倒在地。3.原句片段：得知被欺骗的真相，他握紧拳头，气得浑身发抖，一句话也说不出。英文描写：Learningthetruthofbeingcheated,heclenchedhisfists,_________________________________________________.中文翻译：得知被欺骗的真相，他握紧拳头，气得发抖，一句话也说不出。答案：1.themotherdashedforward,kneltdownandgatheredhertightlyintoherarms2.hecrossedthefinishlineontiredlegsandcollapsedtotheground3.tremblingwithrageandunabletosayaword段落一：暴雨中的救援Whentheheavyraincausedtheoldwalltocollapseandtrapalittlegirl,theyoungfirefighterdidn’thesitate.(1)______________________________________________________________(他冲过泥泞的道路，用靴子踢开碎砖，伸出双臂将女孩从瓦砾中拉了出来).Heheldthetremblingchildinhisarmswithsoakedclothes,thenrantotheambulanceparkedbythesideoftheroad.(2)____________________________________________________(女孩的母亲急忙跑过来，紧紧抓住消防员的手),sobbingwithgratitudeandrepeating“thankyou”overandoveragain.Thefirefighterjustpattedhershouldergently,hisfacecoveredinsweatandmudbutwithareassuringsmile.答案：(1)Hedashedthroughthemuddyroad,kickedawaythebrokenbrickswithhisboots,andstretchedhisarmstopullthegirloutofthedebris(2)Thegirl’smotherrushedover,graspedthefirefighter’shandtightly段落二：考场里的意外Halfanhourbeforethemathexamended,LiMingsuddenlyrealizedhehadforgottentobringaruler.(1)_____________________________________________________________(他焦急地拍了拍书包，翻遍了每个口袋，甚至在桌子底下摸索)—allinvain.Justashewasabouttopanic,hisdeskmateXiaoYunoticedhistrouble.(2)___________________________________________________________(她拿出备用的尺子，冲他快速笑了笑递过去，然后转回头继续写自己的试卷).LiMingtooktherulerwithslightlyshakyfingers,noddedtoXiaoYusilently,andquicklyfocusedondrawingthegeometricfiguresheneeded.Aftertheexam,(3)________________________________________________________________________(他走到小雨面前，双手捧着尺子还给她，笑着说),“Youreallysavedme!”答案：(1)Hepattedhisschoolbaganxiously,searchedthrougheverypocket,andevenrummagedunderhisdesk(2)Shetookoutherspareruler,passedittohimwithaquicksmile,andthenturnedbacktoherpapertocontinuewriting(3)hewalkeduptoXiaoYu,heldtherulerinbothhandstoreturnit,andsaidwithabrightsmile三、场景与氛围描写专项1.Itseemedasif/Itwaslike...（营造“仿佛……”的氛围）2.环境名词+分词短语（streamingin/lingeringaround）,情绪名词+分词短语（环境烘托情绪）3.Sb.’seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears/Sb.stoodwithtearsrollingdown...（以细节衬氛围）1.原句片段：走进这间布满旧照片的老屋，就好像穿越回了二十年前的时光。英文描写：Walkingintotheoldhousefilledwitholdphotos,_____________________________.中文翻译：走进这间布满旧照片的老屋，就好像穿越回了二十年前的时光。2.原句片段：清晨的阳光洒进厨房，饭菜的香气弥漫在空中，一家人的笑声不断回荡。英文描写：______________________________________________,thearomaoffoodlingeredintheair,andthefamily’slaughterechoedconstantly.中文翻译：清晨的阳光洒进厨房，饭菜的香气弥漫在空中，一家人的笑声不断回荡。3.原句片段：听完奶奶讲的往事，她站在角落，泪水顺着脸颊滚落，视线变得模糊。英文描写：Afterhearingthepasteventstoldbyhergrandma,shestoodinthecorner______________________________,hereyesmistingover.中文翻译：听完奶奶讲的往事，她站在角落，泪水顺着脸颊滚落，视线变得模糊。答案：1.itwasliketravelingbacktothetimetwentyyearsago2.Theearlysunlightstreamedintothekitchen3.withtearsrollingdownhercheeks段落一：冬日黄昏的车站送别Thewintersundippedbelowtheroofoftheoldrailwaystation,(1)___________________________________________(微弱的金光透过蒙尘的窗户洒进来),andthecoldwindlingeredaroundtheplatform,carryingthefaintsmellofcoal.(2)___________________________________________(仿佛时间都变慢了)—everytickoftheclockabovetheticketofficeechoedclearly,mixingwiththedistantwhistleoftheapproachingtrain.Marystoodwithherhandstightlyclutchingthescarfhermotherhadknittedforher,watchingherfather’sfiguregrowblurrierashewalkedtowardthecarriage.(3)___________________________________(她的双眼蒙上了泪水)whenheturnedaroundandwaved,andthesteamfromthetrainwrappedaroundhimlikeasoft,whiteblanket,(4)____________________________________(让他的笑容既温暖又遥远).Shewavedbackuntilthetraindisappearedaroundthebend,thecoldwindnowfeelingsharperagainsthercheeks.答案：(1)itsfaintgoldenlightstreamingthroughthedustywindows(2)Itseemedasiftimehadsloweddown(3)Hereyesmistedwithtears(4)makinghissmilelookbothwarmanddistant段落二：雨后的童年小院Therainhadjuststopped,andtheafternoonsunlightfilteredthroughthegreenleavesoftheoldjujubetreeintheyard,dappledlightstreamingacrossthewetflagstones.(1)__________________________________________________(潮湿的泥土气息在屋角萦绕),mixingwiththesweetscentoftheosmanthuscakeGrandmahadjustbaked.(2)_______________________________________________(仿佛整个世界都被清洗干净了)—spiders’websstrungbetweenthebranchesglistenedwithtinyraindrops,andthelittleyellowflowersontherosebushnoddedgentlyinthesoftbreeze.XiaoMingkneltbythestonebasin,watchingthegoldfishswimlazilyintherainwaterhe’dcollectedearlier.WhenGrandmacalledhimtoeatcake,(3)________________________________________________________(他转过身，脸上挂着大大的笑容),andthewaterdropletsonhissleevesdrippedontotheflagstones,leavingsmall,roundmarksthatsparkledinthesunlight.答案：(1)Thesmellofdampsoillingeredaroundthecornerofthehouse(2)Itseemedasifthewholeworldhadbeenwashedclean(3)heturnedaroundwithabigsmile,hiseyesbrightwithjoy四、心理与状态描写专项1.Sb.Stood/didsth.,(not)knowing/unsureofwhattodonext/Sb.wasatalosswhattodo.（手足无措的状态）2.Filledwith/Overwhelmedby+情绪名词,sb.didsth.（被情绪支配的状态）3.Sb.’sfaceflushed(crimson),shifting.../wishing...（尴尬或羞愧的状态）1.原句片段：看着打碎的古董花瓶，他呆站在那里，不知道接下来该怎么向父母交代。英文描写：Staringatthebrokenantiquevase,________________________________________.中文翻译：看着打碎的古董花瓶，他呆站在那里，不知道接下来该怎么向父母交代。2.原句片段：被孩子们的暖心举动深深打动，老师的眼睛里满是泪水，笑了起来。英文描写：________________________________________________,theteacherwasmovedtotearsandsmiled.中文翻译：被孩子们的暖心举动深深打动，老师的眼睛里满是泪水，笑了起来。3.原句片段：意识到自己说错了话，他的脸涨得通红，不自在地换着站姿，想要道歉却语无伦次。英文描写：Realizinghehadsaidthewrongthing,_________________________________,heshiftedhisweightuncomfortablyandstammeredanincoherentapology.中文翻译：意识到自己说错了话，他的脸涨得通红，不自在地换着站姿，结结巴巴地说了句语无伦次的道歉。答案：1.hestoodthereinadaze,unsureofwhattotellhisparentsnext2.Overwhelmedbythechildren’swarmactions3.hisfaceflushedcrimson段落一：演讲失误后的窘迫Lunastoodfrozenatthepodium,herhandstremblingslightlyasthelastwrongwordhungintheair.Thesilenceintheauditoriumfeltdeafening,and(1)_____________________________(她完全手足无措)—hercarefullypreparedspeechhadslippedfromhermindentirely.Realizingtheaudiencewasstaringatherwithconfusedeyes,(2)______________________________(她的脸涨得通红),shiftinghergazetothefloorandwishingshecoulddisappear.Justasshewasabouttorushoffthestage,asoft