内江三模读后续写BringingthePondBacktoLife让池塘重获生机课件-高三英语二轮复习专项

Yoyo内江三模读后续写

Inthequietresidentialneighborhoodwherewelived,inLaval,Canada,layasmallpond,oncealovelycormerwithclearwaterandgreenbanks.Farmorethananordinarypond,itwasthewarmheartofourcommunityandanirreplaceablebondconnectingeveryresident.Itservedasajoyfulplaygroundforchildren,apeacefulrestingspotfortheelderlytochatandenjoythesoftwind,andacomfortableplaceforneighborstoexchangekindwordsafterabusyday.Itfilledourneighborhoodwithwarmthandvitality(活力),giftingourdailylifewithsimple,sweetjoy.ThisprecioussharedtreasurewitnessedourwarmmomentsandmadethecornerofLavalfeellikeamorelovingandharmonioushome.Unfortunately,oneyearago,thisbelovedlittlecormerwastotallyruinedbycarelesslittering.Peoplecasually.threwplasticbags,emptybottlesandallkindsofdailywasteintoit:plasticbagsfloatingonthewaterliketornoldcloths,glassbottleshalfstuckinthethickblackmudoftheshallowslikecast-asideteeth,andbadfoodwasteswimmingaboutlikerotten(腐烂的)wood.Itsonceclearwaterturnedintodarkblackmud,sendingoutanunpleasantsmellthatmadepeoplehurryawayindislike.Nosmalllivingthingscouldbeseenatallnow,andtheoncelovelywatersideplantsweredyingfast,withtheirtrunksgoingbadandfallingintothedirtywaterlikebrokensmallbranches.Thisoncelovelyplacewasnowdirtyandsmelly,greatlyinfluencingourcommunity.Itstayedquietandgrey,withnosignofhappylaughter.Moreandmoreneighborswerestartingtoexpresstheircomplaints.Sharingmydeepdisappointmentabouttheseterriblechangeswithmyfatheroneafternoon,hetoldmepatientlythatthepondwasapreciousgiftforourcommunity.Hiswordstouchedmedeeply,leavingmewithastrongdesiretoprotectthepond.Readthetext读原文5W+1HhowTheme续写类型主角+配角who地点where时间when故事情节what为什么要做whyIandmyfatherneighborsinresidentialneighborhoodapondcleanuupthepond审题1.体裁：

记叙文2.人称：

第一人称3.时态：

一般过去时4.主题：

人与社会

①个人行动可以带来社区改变

②环保需要每个人的参与

③从抱怨到行动是真正的转变。

读Para1+2→定情节发展02续写P1：Ibegantobrainstormwayswithmyfathertoprotectthispond.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________续写P2：Afterourone-weekgreentalks,Icalledonneighborstostartourmuch-neededcleanup.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读para1+2→Readforcoflicts具体可实行的方案Whatweretheways?How？协调原则呼应原则Whatdidtheydo?What’stheending?行动前行动中+行动后过程+结果列大纲03DesigntheplotsPara1Ibegantobrainstormwayswithmyfathertoprotectthispond.1.2.3.4.5.

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承接下一段的首句Para2Afterourone-weekgreentalks,Icalledonneighborstostartourmuch-neededcleanup.1.2.3.4.5.

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升华主旨

发宣传册？

演讲？

各个年龄段参与臭味消失、清水回来方法1+方法2+目的、情感

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结局一个小小的决心可以给社区带来巨大的变化具体的动作？

捡垃圾？

清淤泥？我和父亲坐下来，提出自己的办法我们决定进行环保演讲....制作宣传海报makestrikingposters发传单handoutleaflets种植水生植物plantwaterplants岸边种草plantgrassalongthebanks举办环保讲座holdgreentalks(必写）邻居们的反应TrytowritePara11.我和父亲坐下来，决心找到保护池塘的办法。MyfatherandIsatdown,determinedtofindwaystoprotectthepond.2.“我们先清理垃圾，”他说，“然后在岸边种草，让池塘恢复生机。”“First,weshouldcleanuptherubbish,”hesaid,“andthenplantgrassalongthebankstobringbacklife.”3.我建议制作醒目的海报，张贴在社区各处。Isuggestedmakingstrikingpostersandputtingthemacrossthecommunity.4.我们还决定举办绿色讲座，分享我们对池塘的热爱。Wealsodecidedtoholdgreentalkstoshareourloveforthepond.5.我们花了很长时间准备有说服力的发言来唤醒邻居们的意识。Wespenthourspreparingpersuasivespeechestoawakenneighbors‘awareness.Trytowrite6.站在脏兮兮的池塘边，我号召邻居们开始清理。Standingbythedirtypond,Icalledonneighborstostartthecleanup.7.各个年龄段的人都积极参与，带来了手套和自制工具。Peopleofallagestookpartactively,bringingglovesandhomemadetools.8.我们捡垃圾、清理黑泥，并在岸边种上花草。Wepickeduprubbish,cleanedthedarkmud,andplantedyounggrassalongthebanks.9渐渐地，难闻的气味消失了，清澈的水回来了。池塘边再次响起了笑声。Gradually,theunpleasantsmelldisappearedandclearwaterreturned.Laughterrangoutbythepondagain.10.就在那一刻，我意识到一个小小的决心，真的能把整个社区可以给社区带来巨大的变化。ItwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedasmallactofdeterminationcouldtrulymakeahugedifferencetothewholecommunity.Trytowrite10.那一刻，我深深明白了：绿水青山就是金山银山。这不仅仅是一句口号，更是我们社区重获温暖与活力的秘诀。Atthatmoment,Ideeplyunderstoodthatlucidwatersandlushmountainsareinvaluableassets.Thisisnotjustaslogan,butthesecrettoourcommunityregainingitswarmthandvitality.示范范文→积累拓展04AppreciatetheessayIbegantobrainstormwayswithmyfathertoprotectthispond.Wemadestrikingposterstocallonpeopletostoplitteringandattachedthemacrossthecommunity.Moreimportantly,wedecidedtoholdgreentalks,wherewewouldsincerelyshareourloveforthepondandexplainhowlitteringwasruiningit.Wespenthourspreparinggentleandpersuasivespeeches,hopingtoawakeneveryneighbor'sawarenessofprotectingourbelovedsharedtreasure.Afterourone-weekgreentalks,Icalledonneighborstostartourmuch-neededcleanup.Peopleofa