高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练12（解析版）

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练12一、环境烘托类（渲染氛围）1.高分句式：Themoment+时间触发点,环境细节（感官描写）2.高分句式：With+环境名词+doing/done,主语+动作（伴随场景）•描写练习1：夕阳刚掠过山顶，山间的风就裹着松针的清香涌来，把少年额角的汗都吹得凉了。•英文翻译1：_________________________________________,thewindinthemountainssurgedoverwiththefragranceofpineneedles,coolingthesweatontheboy’sforehead.•描写练习2：月光洒在积着薄雪的路面上，女孩把围巾又紧了紧，加快脚步向亮着灯的小屋走去。•英文翻译2：__________________________________________________,thegirltightenedherscarfagainandquickenedherstepstowardsthecabinwithalitlight.答案：ThemomentthesunsetbrushedpastthemountaintopWiththemoonlightspillingontheroadcoveredwiththinsnow段落一Tomhadbeenhikinginthemountainsfortwohourstopickwildberriesforhissickgrandma.HisT-shirtwassoakedwithsweat,andhislegsfeltheavyasheclimbedthelastslope.(1)________________________________________________(夕阳刚掠过山顶),thewindinthemountainssurgedoverwiththefragranceofpineneedles,coolingthesweatontheboy’sforehead.(2)__________________________________(他深吸一口气),feelingthetirednessfadealittle,andquickenedhispace—heknewgrandmawouldbewaitingforhimathome.答案：ThemomentthesunsetbrushedpastthemountaintopHetookadeepbreath段落二Afterfinishinghereveningclassatthevillageschool,Lucywalkedaloneonthewayhome.Theskywasdark,andtheroadwasquietexceptforthecrunchofsnowunderhershoes.(1)__________________________________(月光洒在积着薄雪的路面上),thegirltightenedherscarfagainandquickenedherstepstowardsthecabinwithalitlight.Shesmiled(2)__________________________________(想到妈妈会准备好的热粥)hermomwouldhaveprepared—tonight’scoldseemedeasiertobear.答案：Withthemoonlightspillingontheroadcoveredwiththinsnowwhenshethoughtofthewarmporridge二、动作衔接类（推进场景）1.高分句式：Hardlyhad主语+done...when+连贯动作（倒装强调）2.高分句式：主语+reachedouttodo...onlytofindthat+意外结果（动作转折）•描写练习1：男孩刚把落水的小狗抱上岸，就看见不远处的妇人边喊边朝这边跑来。•英文翻译1：____________________________________________________________hesawawomannotfarawayrunningoverwhileshouting.•描写练习2：奶奶伸手去拿窗台上的花盆，却发现花盆底下压着一张泛黄的旧照片。•英文翻译2：Grandma__________________________________onthewindowsill,onlytofindthattherewasayellowedoldphotopressedunderthepot.答案：Hardlyhadtheboypulledthedrowningpuppyontotheshorewhenreachedouttopicktheflowerpot段落一Itwasarainyafternoon,andthelittleboywaswalkingalongtheriverbankwithhisumbrella.Suddenly,heheardafaintwhimperfromthewater—therewasasmallpuppystrugglinginthecurrent.Heimmediatelythrewdownhisumbrella,kneltbytheriver,and(1)__________________________________(伸出胳膊去拉小狗).(2)_______________________________________________________(男孩刚把落水的小狗抱上岸)hesawawomannotfarawayrunningoverwhileshouting.Thewomanwasthepuppy’sowner;she’dbeenlookingforiteverywhereafteritranoutintherain,and(3)______________________________________________(她不停地感谢男孩救了她心爱的宠物).答案：stretchedouthisarmstopullthepuppyHardlyhadtheboypulledthedrowningpuppyontotheshorewhenshekeptthankingtheboyforsavingherbelovedpet段落二Grandmalovedgrowingflowers,andeverymorningshewould(1)__________________________________(给窗台上的盆栽浇水).Today,afterwateringthelilacsandjasmine,shenoticedthesunflowerpotwasalittletilted.Shewantedtostraightenittomakesureitgotenoughsunlight.Grandma(2)__________________________________(伸手去拿窗台上的花盆)onthewindowsillonlytofindthattherewasayellowedoldphotopressedunderthepot.ItwasaphotoofherandGrandpawhentheywereyoung,(3)__________________________________(院子里拍的)wheretheyfirstplantedsunflowers—Grandmasmiledsoftlyasshebrushedthedustoffthephoto.答案：waterthepottedplantsonthewindowsillreachedouttopicktheflowerpottakenintheyard三、心理变化类（刻画情绪）1.高分句式：主语+feltasurgeof+情绪名词+washoversb.as+触发事件（情绪爆发）2.高分句式：Itsuddenlyhitsb.that+心理认知,makingsb.+情绪/动作（顿悟时刻）•描写练习1：当看到信封上熟悉的字迹时，女孩突然感到一阵思念涌上心头，眼眶瞬间红了。•英文翻译1：_____________________________________________asshesawthefamiliarhandwritingontheenvelope,andhereyesturnedredinaninstant.•描写练习2：他突然意识到刚才便利店阿姨多找的零钱还在口袋里，这让他立刻转身往回跑。•英文翻译2：_________________________________theextrachangetheconveniencestoreaunthadgivenwasstillinhispocket,makinghimturnaroundandrunbackimmediately.答案：ThegirlfeltasurgeoflongingwashoverherItsuddenlyhithimthat段落一Emmahadbeenstudyingabroadforhalfayear,andshe(1)__________________________________(对家人的思念远超想象).Oneafternoon,shefoundabrownenvelopeinherdormmailbox—hermomalwayssentlettersthisway.Asshetoreitopengently,thefirstthingshesawwasthehandwritingontheletterinside.(2)__________________________________(女孩突然感到一阵思念涌上心头)asshesawthefamiliarhandwritingontheenvelope,andhereyesturnedredinaninstant.Sherantothewindow,(3)__________________________________(紧紧攥着信),andbegantoimaginehermomsittingatthedesk,carefullywritingdowneverylittlethingabouthomejustforher.答案：missedherfamilymorethanshe’deverimaginedThegirlfeltasurgeoflongingwashoverherholdingthelettertightly段落二Tom(1)__________________________________(急着去做兼职)afterschool.Hestoppedataconveniencestoretobuyabottleofwater,paidwitha20-dollarbill,andgrabbedthechangetheaunthandedhimbeforerushingout.Hewalkedforfiveminutes,hismindalreadyontheworktasksahead,when(2)__________________________________(突然有个念头让他停住了脚步).(3)__________________________________(他突然意识到)theextrachangetheconveniencestoreaunthadgivenwasstillinhispocket,makinghimturnaroundandrunbackimmediately.Herememberedtheaunt’stiredbutkindsmile,andheknewhecouldn’tkeepthemoneythatdidn’tbelongtohim.答案：wasinahurrytogettohispart-timejobsomethingsuddenlymadehimpauseItsuddenlyhithimthat四、意外转折类（制造冲突）1.高分句式：Justas+主角计划,sth.unexpected+打断动作（计划落空）2.高分句式：主语+hadjustmanagedtodo...when+突发状况（努力后意外）•描写练习1：就在他要把修好的自行车推给妹妹时，一阵狂风把车筐里的气球吹得漫天都是。•英文翻译1：________________________________________,astrongwindblewtheballoonsinthebasketalloverthesky.•描写练习2：她刚好不容易把陷进泥里的箱子拽出来，就发现箱子的拉链开了，里面的书撒了一地。•英文翻译2：_________________________________________________whenshefoundthezipperoftheboxwasopenandthebooksinsidespilledallovertheground.答案：JustashewasabouttopushtherepairedbiketohissisterShehadjustmanagedtopulltheboxstuckinthemudout段落一TomspenthiswholeSaturdayafternoonfixinghislittlesister’soldbike.Hetightenedtheloosescrews,pumpedairintotheflattires,andevenattachedanewbaskettothefront—heknewhissisterhadbeenaskingforonetoholdherfavoriteballoons.(1)__________________________________(一切准备就绪后),hecarriedtheballoonsfromhisroomandcarefullyplacedtheminthebasket,thencalledhissisterover.(2)__________________________________(就在他要把修好的自行车推给妹妹时),astrongwindblewtheballoonsinthebasketalloverthesky.(3)______________________________(妹妹轻轻惊呼了一声),butTomquicklysmiledandsaid,“Don’tworry—let’schasethemtogether.It’llbemorefunthanjustgettingthebike!”答案：WheneverythingwasreadyJustashewasabouttopushtherepairedbiketohissisterHissisterletoutasmallgasp段落二Lisavolunteeredtohelpherteachermovebooksto