写作操作篇之审题目

写作操作篇之审题目【典例精析】1．假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。注意：1.词数100左右；2.结束语已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作步骤】▲审题立意·确定中心体裁求助信时态一般现在时和一般将来时人称Iandyou结构三段或四段要点1.故事梗概2.求助内容▲结构清晰·层次分明▲行云流水·斐然成章【策略演练】12．假定你是班长李华，你班来自美国的交换生Tony在学习和生活方面不太适应，向你求助。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示关心；2.帮他分析原因；

、3.提供建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________23．假定你是李华。北京2022年冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者。请你用英文写一封申请信。内容包括:1.你的优势;2.相关经历。注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam,IhavelearnedthatvolunteersforBeijing2022WinterOlympicGamesareneeded.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua写作操作篇之审题目1．DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教MissEvans对于theSteamboat改编短剧的支持。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．DearTony,Yousayyouhavedifficultyadaptingtothenewstudyandlifehere.Iknowexactlyhowyoufeel.Youmustbeveryanxious,butit’squitenormalsincethisisyourfirsttimetostudyinaforeigncountry.Justrelax.First,breakbiglearninggoalsintosmallsteps.Thengetinvolvedinschoolactivities.whereyoucanmakemorefriends.Hopefullymysuggestionswouldbehelpful.I’malwaysthepersonyoucancounton.Best,LiHua【分析】这是一篇书信应用文—建议信。要求考生根据提纲写一封建议信帮助交换生Tony适应新生活。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：三段式结构。根据提纲要求，划分为三段。要求：1.表达关心。

2.分析原因并提出建议：

1）原因（firsttimetostudyinaforeigncountry）

2）提出建议（study；schoolactivity）

3.寒暄总结。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）Havedifficultydoingsth;adapttosth;thefirsttimetodosth.;getinvolvedin;counton…第三步：连词成句1.Yousayyouhavedifficultyadaptingtothenewstudyandlifehere.2.it’squitenormalsincethisisyourfirsttimetostudyinaforeigncountry3.Thengetinvolvedinschoolactivities4.I’malwaysthepersonyoucancounton.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表因果关系：Because,As,Since,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句如：it’squitenormalsincethisisyourfirsttimetostudyinaforeigncountry这句话运用了since引导的状语从句Thengetinvolvedinschoolactivities,whereyoucanmakemorefriends.这句话运用了where引导的非限制定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如Havedifficultydoingsth;adapttosth;thefirsttimetodosth.;getinvolvedin;counton…等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。3．【参考范文】DearSir/Madam,IhavelearnedthatvolunteersforBeijing2022WinterOlympicGamesareneeded.I’mwritingtoapplyforthisposition.IbelieveIamqualifiedforthejob.IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandI’mconfidentingivingplayersguidanceandhelpasrequired.What’smore,Ihaveanextensiveknowledgeofwintersports,whichwillprovehelpfulincommunicatingwithplayers.Inaddition,Ihavebeeninvolvedinseveralinternationalexchangeprograms,andenjoyspreadingourculturetoforeigners.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】这是一