英语书面表达之图表作文

1、如何进行图表式作文写作,条形或柱状图(bar chart) 曲线图(graph) 饼形图(pie chart) 图表作文 要求考生将图表中的数据、图形转换成文字，并就图表中所反映的情况作出分析或发表议论。,1.读取信息。 仔细读图，掌握图表上提供的信息,2.处理信息。对信息进行分析与,对比，考虑文章的布局。,3.文章结构。,Part 1：General idea (conclusion/tendency) (图表反映的问,题或总体趋势),Part 2：Facts (to support the idea) (具体数据或事实) slight, slightly; quick, quickly;

2、steady, steadily; sharp ( 急 剧 的 ), sharply ( 急 剧 地 ); dramatically ( 显 著 地 ); remarkably (显著地),6.趋势：upward trend (上涨趋势), downward trend (下跌趋势) 7.不变：stay, remain (依然是),8.其他：account for 30% of the total (占总量的 30%), at the same rate (以相同的速率), average (平均的), annual (每年的), figure/number (数字), amount (数量)

3、, percentage (百分比),常用句式结构: Topic sentences .,I have recently made a survey among. A research has been made recently among. Im writing to tell you about my research about. Different people have different ideas about.,Body sentences,Somebodys favorite is.while others. What somebody likes to do most is

4、. Both .and .would like to . As for., the number .equal. The second largest group would like to . The second choice for somebody is to .,归纳总结或发表评论(有时第三步可省略)常用词汇有: to sum up , finally ,in conclusion ,at last , in summary , on the whole , in short , all in all , in a word , in the end , in other words

5、 , therefore , as a result , generally speaking , As I have shown ., As has been stated ,得出结论,Conclusion sentences,As I have shown. As has been stated In my opinion. I think.,三要： 1.要找出对比最为明显的突破点。 2.要找出对比较明显的要点。 3.要找出双方非常相似的要点 。 三忌： 1.忌流水帐式依次描述。 2.忌反复使用同一句型。 3.忌反复出现纷繁复杂的数据。,柱状图式作文写作要注意：,下面是某高中对该校200名

6、学生（男女各半）的择业观做出调查后绘制的图表，根据该图所反映的情况用英语写一则报道。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.参考词汇：鲜明的对比striking contrast,书面表达审题 体裁：说明文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称,下面是某高中对该校200名学生（男女各半）的择业观做出调查后绘制的图表，根据该图所反映的情况用英语写一则报道。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.参考词汇：鲜明的对比striking contrast,I have recently made a survey about middle school students choice of their future

7、jobs. They have different ideas about it. The most striking contrast is in teaching. 30% of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5% of the boys want to do this job. 20% of the boys want to do business and another 20% want to become lawyers while girls take up 15% in these fields . What

8、 boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists .Besides teaching , the second choice for girls is to be scientists and managers .The number is not small. Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.,A possible version,假设你于 4 月 2

9、3 日的“世界读书日”(World Reading Day) 在你所在的学校进行了一项阅读习惯调查，以下是其中的一项 调查结果。请用英语写一篇短文，说明相关内容及结果等。,A买书阅读,B网上下载或在线阅读,C从朋友处或图书馆借阅,D学校阅览室阅读,1.调查内容及时间； 2.调查结果；,3.问题：阅览室的使用率(use rate)不高； 4.建议：(1)延长阅览室的开放时间； (2)书店送书到校，方便学生购买。,On World Reading Day, we carried out a survey about the reading habits of high school student

10、s. According to the survey,45.75% of the students read books they buy and 8.5% of them download e-books or read online.35.75% of the students borrow books from friends or the library and 11% of them read in the school reading-room. From the survey we can see that the use rate of the school rea-ding-

11、room is not high enough. We suggest that its opening hours be extended and meanwhile bookstores be invited into the school to make it convenient for students to buy books.,日前，针对学生的零用钱（pocket money）的消费方向，你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行了问卷调查得出数据如下表。现请你用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，反映这一情况，并呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。 注意：1书信中不必一一列举具体数字，只要 抓住

12、主要问题和数据说明问题即可。 2字数：100字左右。开头已给出,不计 人总词数。,Dear editor, Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money _.,Dear editor, Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money. In this survey, both junior students

13、and senior students spend most their money on books, sacks and playing games, still some money goes to clothes, banks, sports, and so on. The survey shows that about 44 of seniors prefer books to sacks （37%）and playing games （31%）.On the other hand, only 32 of juniors will spend their pocket money b

14、uying books, while over a half buy sacks and 44 spend on playing games. Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money in clothes or put it in banks. I think too many sacks will not only make us put on weight but also do harm to our health. In addition, if we play games without limit, well

15、lose much precious time, which results in low grades. Furthermore, the money is hard-earned. I hope we students value our money as well as our time.,假如你叫Jim Lee，你最近对你班60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的调查。现将调查结果(如下表所示)用英语给某报社的编辑写一封信报告此事，以引起舆论关注。 注意：报告应包括图表所示全部内容 叙述结果时要避免重复使用百分比。 叙述过程中要适当添加评语。词数100左右。,学生习作点评 Dear edi

16、tor, My name is Jim lee. I am a middle school student. Now, I did a research about the purpose of my classmates go on the line. There are 30% of boys and 20% girls read news on the computer. Have 20% boys and 15% girls send e-mails on-line. There are more girls (about 35%) than boys (about 5%) have

17、a chat. About 10% boys and 10% girls used computers study. More boys than girls play games . Yours Jim,Common mistakes,1. Most of the boys in order to play games while most girls in order to have a chat. 2. About 10% boys and 10% girls used computer study.,汉语式英语,？,1. 20% of boys get on the Internet

18、to send e-mails while 15% of girls get on the Internet to send e -mails . 2.The number of boys who like to play games is larger than the number of girls .,重复累赘,句式单一, 平铺直叙,A. 30% boys and 20% girls go on-line in order to read news. 20% boys and girls go on-line to send e-mails. 5%boys and 35% girls want to chat with ot