公开课--写作提高训练

1、英语书面表达提高训练,英语老师发试卷时，发现有一份忘记写名字的试卷，成绩是A，请帮助老师分析一下，这份试卷是班上那位同学的? 以 whose paper is this?为题写一篇短文。 参考词汇： cant; must; might; tidy ; top student; good handwriting; be good at ; do well in;,书面表达,列题纲 (outline),1.读要求 (demands),2.抓中心( grasp the main idea),3.排结构(beginning-body-ending),一、审题,英语老师发试卷时，发现有一份忘记写名字的试

2、卷，成绩是A，请帮助老师分析一下，这份试卷是班上那位同学的? 以 whose paper is this?为题写一篇短文。 参考词汇： cant; must; might; tidy ; top student; good handwriting; be good at ; do well in;,书面表达,中心,Four Steps in Writing,二、写作,1.words(字),2.sentences(扩展成句),3.paragraphs(组句谋篇),4.Improving the passage(合理润饰 ),1.words(字）,参考词汇： cant; must; might;

3、top student; good handwriting; be good at ; do well in; tidy ;,情态动词,名词短语,谓语部分,形容词,主 - 谓 - 宾 (状语）,2.sentences(扩展成句),Eg: 1. It cant belong to Jack. 2. Tom is good at writing skill.,3.paragraphs(组句谋篇),The paper must be Tonys. Because she does well in English.,4.Improving the passage(合理润饰 ),From the goo

4、d handwriting we know that this paper without a name cant be the students whose handwriting is not good. It must belong to the only three students handwriting is as good as that on this paper. Bill, Jessise and Lucy. The paper cant be Bills because he isnt good at English. It might be Jessies, for s

5、he is one of the top students in our class and she does well in English. But she has found her paper in her desk. So it must be Lucys. She likes English and she often gets an “A” in the exam. And she hasnt got her paper yet. So the paper must belong to Lucy.,单句改错：,1.We are need a healthy eating habi

6、t.,2.Because it bad for your health.,3.Three meals is very important.,4.You eats some noodles.,5. We must have a breakfast every day .,6. good luck to you.,(Str:主+谓+宾),is,are,G,(Str：主+系+表),(Sv：主谓一致),(Sv：主谓一致),(A：冠词),(Cap：大写),三、检查找错,Cap 大写字母 capital letter Sp 拼写 spelling SV 主谓一致 subject-verb agreemen

7、t Str 句子结构sentence structure VT 动词时态 verb tense P 标点 punctuation A 冠词 article WW 错词 wrong word Num 数 (=单数 / 复数) number (= singular / plural) 缺成分,常见错误类型：,英语写作中常出现的问题,一、句子不准确，中文式英语较多,原因： 没有做到“入乡随俗” 没有采用英语思维,解决方法： 培养自己的英语思维， 多背一些简单句型,Eg: I very like English.,原因：句法知识功底不深，尤其是句子的基本结构,解决方法： 灵活地用完整的简单句 将句意表

8、达清楚,二、 句子结构不完整、句式雷同多,Eg: I like English and Chinese. I dont like math. I like my English teacher.,改为: I like English and Chinese. Math is boring. My English teacher is friendly with us.,三、语法错误多,表现在：时态上；修饰词错位等方面,解决方法：用对语法知识,Eg:Where is my trousers?,are,Eg:Did you found the answer to the question?,四、用

9、词不准确,选用词语的常见错误：拼写错误；用词不当；词义（类）混淆；遗词漏词等。,选词原则：用有把握的词。,Eg: It took us two hours to walk across the forest.,through,注意：认真读题、审题； 分析材料含义； 深思熟虑后在动笔,五、 遗漏情景内容、详略不当,注：过渡词能使句与句之间过渡顺畅、上下连贯、逻辑关系严谨,常用过渡词：,六、句子衔接性差、缺少过渡词,First, second, finally, first of all, so, but, however, because, until, when, since, before ,（1）遗漏标题或标题写错位 （2）正文格式，尤其是应用文格式错误 （3）单词字母的大小写及标点符号,七、常识性错误,表现：,审题，抓点 造句，成文 改错，誉写,How to write the expression?,写作技巧小结： 认真审题，抓住要点。 确定体裁，注意格式。 草拟提纲，理清思路。 语言规范，把握时态。 多用简句，慎用长句。 巧用连词，行文连贯。 拼写正确，书写规范。 全面检查，万无一失。,卷面潦草一定要扣分!,书写规范 卷面