锤炼句子提高英语写作能力的基本之路

1、,提高英语写作能力,锤炼句子,关键先生1 先构思好文章框架,把握文章脉络结构,关键先生2 多用高级词汇,注意 选词，造句，组段,关键先生3 多使用“点睛句”,吸引读者眼球 抓住读者眼球,关键先生4 为句子润色,想方设法 使句子变得生动有活力,1、 改变句子的开头方式,句子不要一味都用主语开头，接着是 谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。 可以把状语置于句首， 或用分词作状语等。 试比较：,The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.,My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycl

2、e the other day.,Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.,2.The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.,2、在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两 个句式。,在一篇文章中,要灵活运用诸如 强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、 倒装句、省略句等。,It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely.,A.强调句,The dog has saved my Little sister bra

3、vely.,What we had to do was to stand there，trying to catch the offender.,B.主从复合句,We had to stand there to catch the offender.,The driver escaped without stopping，leaving the old man lying on the road.,C.分词短语，由with或without引导的短语,The driver escaped and didnt stop，he left the old man lying on the road.,

4、Not until 11：30 did I go to bed .,D.倒装句,I went to bed at 11：30.,While crossing the street， you should be careful.,E.省略句,While you are crossing the street，you should be careful.,He stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.,F.通过分句和合句 ，增强句子的连贯性和表现力,1.He stop us an hour ago .He made us

5、 catch the next offfender.,After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.,We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.,Early in themorning, we met .,试改变下列句子,使之变化多样,生动有力,We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning .,Weak as I am , I wil

6、l make the effort .,Although I am weak, I will make the effort.,Singing and laughing, They went back to school.,They sang and laughed as they went back to school.,He left without saying goodbye.,e left and didnt say good-bye.,Open , and you.,病句:Open the door, you can see a bed on your left.,If you o

7、pen , you.,Hearing the news, I was shocked.,病句:Hear the news, I was shocked.,I was shocked at the news.,学生习作评讲,视听的时候,只听其音量,不要试图听明白其内容.,About on-line friends,More and more people make on-line friends on the internet. Different people have different,Opinions. Some people agree to make on-line friends.

8、 It make us can make more friends. They can express their ideas to others. Moreover, it helps them to study foreign language. But some people,Dont think is good to make on-line friends. Because they think it is waste of time and it effects our study. Maybe some people to be cheated. We cant know any

9、 on-line friends clearly, so not any of them is good.,I think make some on-line friends is good for us. But we shouldnt spend too much time on it. Study is more important than it.,More and more people make on-line friends on the internet. Nowadays, More and more people make on-line friends on the in

10、ternet. Different people have different,However, ,Some people agree to make on-line friends.,Some people think it Ok / all right to make on-line friends.,It make us can make more friends.,It makes it possible for us to make more friends. / It enables us to make more friends.,Moreover, it helps them

11、to study foreign language.,Moreover, it helps them study foreign languages.,dont think is good to make on-line friends,dont think it good to make on-line friends./ But some people dont agree/ dont think so.,We cant know any on-line friends clearly,We are unable to know any on-line friends well.,so n

12、ot any of them is good.,So be careful! A mans meat may be another mans poison!,I think make some on-line friends is good for us.,I think making some on-line friends is good for us.,Study is more important than it.,As a student, study is the most important thing. Rember, study always comes first.,完成句

13、子,1. She bought a big sofa,_ (serve)(它也可以当床用).,which could also be served as a bed.,2.It takes about two hours to get to their office building,_ (allow) (考虑到路上可能遇到交通耽搁).,allowing for possible traffic delays.,3.Though it looked like rain this morning,_ (turn out)(结果却是晴天).,It has turned out to be a fi

14、ne day.,4.The audiences _ (get)(变得慌乱起来) about the fire in the theatre.,got into a panic.,5 He_ (witness)(作证说看见) the man enter the shop.,witnessed to have seen.,6.He drove his car slowly _(avoid)(以免撞着行人或被撞).,to avoid hitting passengers or being hit.,7. _(give)(多给我们一点时间), we could do much better.,given more time,8._ (difference)(无所谓) whether he comes or not.,It makes no difference.,9.Do you have any difficulty in reading _ (document)(所有法律