写作新题型(续写与概要写作)PPT精选文档

1、1,2017新高考英语写作的几点注意事项,2,读后续写评分原则：,1.本题总分25分，按5个档次给分。 2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分 4.评分时应从以下四个方面考虑： 1）与所给短文和段落开头语的衔接程度 2）内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况 3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性 4）上下文的连贯性 5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 6.如书写较差以至影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次,3,读后续写的几种基本形式,浙江

2、省衢州一中,4,读后续写的要点,浙江省衢州一中,5,Example,6,Paragraph1: Whats worse, my teacher called my father after the exam and told him about my cheating. _ Paragraph2: Hearing my words, my father decided to give me another chance._ _,7,意境的设计缺陷：,平淡没悬念和高潮 情感渲染不够，不能引起读者的共鸣 结尾拔的不高，限制了文章的高度 人物角色不明，语气不符合角色 以自我为中心，缺乏一些人文素养在

3、内，如：爱的传递，奉献，善良，正义，宽容等。,8,2017新高考概要写作的几点注意事项,9,概要写作指导的,10,本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要去来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。 词数少于40的和多于80的，从总分中减去2分。 评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑 . 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。,概要写作评分解读,11,1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 3）上下文的连贯性 4）对各要点表达

4、的独立性情况,12, 评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑： 对原文要点的理解和 呈现情况； 应用语法结构和词汇 的准确性； 上下文的连贯性； 对各要点表达的独立 性情况。,第五档评分标准的启示,13,写作的重难点：,要点的完全准确提取 用自己的语言有效的概括,14,概要写作疑难点：,如何进行概要写作改写句子 如何用自己的语言来概写句子,15,疑难一： 如何概写Example:,1) His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called iron-like. He was very brave in battle. 2) He was

5、 hard up for money and was being pressed by his creditor. He was in financial difficulties. 3) She bought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copes of Time and News week and some textbooks. She intended to read all of them during the winter vacation. She brought home a lot of books to rea

6、d during the vacation.,16,疑难二：如何在不改变题材原句的意义上改写要点 （example 摘自全国统一考试英语科考试说明P24 ）,17,例7（选自全国统一考试英语科考试说明P24）,Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a

7、 means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus beg

8、an a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit o

9、f dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved

10、 beyond science since World War . Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their ch

11、ildren off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist（免疫学家）, encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.,18,Transitional words:,Getting ri

12、d of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin

13、and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, wa

14、s famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifica

15、lly speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War . Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cl

16、oths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an A

17、merican immunologist（免疫学家）, encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.,19,要点1,nothing fixed; attitudes to dirt,20,In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medi

18、cal opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the

19、 poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.,P-W 之 key words,21,要点2,dirt on the skin; block out disease; a long t

20、ime; Europe; lived with dirt,People, such as Europeans, thought dirt defended their bodies against the attack of disease. People, such as Europeans, had long considered dirt on the skin helped resist illness. For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed tha

21、t dirt protected people from getting ill.（选自考试说明范文） People, such as Europeans, used to regard dirt on the skin as a barrier against disease.,22,P-W 之 key words,Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scie

22、ntifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War . Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than wh

23、ite, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?,23,要点3,cleaning away dirt; good; standards of cleanliness; moved beyond science,It was not until the 18th century that peole came to believe washing off dirt benefited health, but over time they have become too

24、 particular about cleanliness. People began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. （选自考试说明范文） Centuries later, people came to adopt a scientific view on dirt, and considered it a healthy practice to remove dirt

25、 off the skin, which later, however, leads to an obsession with cleanliness.,24,P-W 之 key words,Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary

26、Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.,25,W-S 之 要点4,play in the dirt; build up a strong immune system ; gaining some ground,Some believe kids should be encouaged to play wit

27、h dirt, which may help strenghthen their immune system. Some societies believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.（选自考试说明范文） Some people share the belief that exposing kids to dirt may boost their immune system.,26,transitional words,Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most peo

28、ple, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger

29、was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that

30、a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is g

31、ood to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War . Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine.

32、Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourag

33、es children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.,27,S-P,People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. However, people began to change thei