赛教高三英语书面表达常见错误及改进.ppt

1、高三英语“过程作文课”-句子,书面表达常见错误及改进,Vivian,近十年高考书面表达趋势：,1、内容的控制性 高考英语书面表达题是有控制性的写作（Guided Writing），而不是自由写作（Free Writing）。,高考风向标,2、体裁、题材的多样性 历年高考书面表达的体裁主要是记叙文（如日记、介绍等）和应用文（如书信、通知等）。这两类体裁也是我们日常生活中最常见的文体。从题材上看，都与现实生活息息相关。,近十年高考书面表达趋势：,3、能力要求的层次性 近年来启用新的“评分原则”，在强调审题正确、要点全面的同时，对表达中所运用的语法结构、词汇、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性等都作了新的

2、、更高的要求，更加突出了对考生语言运用能力和创新能力的考查。,Learning goals 学习目标,1.Learn the five types of common mistake in the composition.(了解并认识到在自己的作文中常常出现的五种错误) 2. Learn how to correct the mistakes and make improvement.（学会如何去改正这些错误并且做出改进） 3.Practice writing and try to avoid the similar mistakes and form a good habit of writ

3、ing（通过作文练习，避免在写作时犯同样的错误并且养成良好的写作习惯）,错误类型一:汉式英语错误 错误类型二:句子结构不完整或结构错误 错误类型三：重复 错误类型四：句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性 错误类型五：语法、词法错误,错误类型一:汉式英语错误 Chinglish,Many students are easily influenced by the habit of Chinese thinking. Some expressions are not suitable in English expression custom. How to prevent such mistakes: 1.Pr

4、actice thinking in English 2.Pay attention to the cultural difference 3.Listen to foreign radio and read English magazines,1.他家昨天发生了一场火灾。 His home broke out a fire last night. A fire broke out in his home last night. 2.妈妈同意我今天晚上去看电影。 Mother agreed me to see the film this evening. Mother allowed me t

5、o see the film this evening. 3.4岁的时候，他的父亲就去世了。 At the age of four, his father died. When he was four years old, his father died.,Practice,1.外面很冷，你最好别出去。 Outside is very cold. You had better not go out. Its cold outside. You had better not go out. 3.中国人口很多 The population of China is many. The populat

6、ion of China is large. 4.去年，她同一位医生结了婚。 She married with a doctor last year. She married a doctor last year.,错误类型二:句子结构不完整或结构错误Sentence fragments or wrong structure,Some students dont know the basic structure of a sentence, thus they make sentence fragments or the incomplete sentence. How to prevent

7、such mistakes：remember the five basic sentence structures and use conjunctions You practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability. If you practice more reading, you will improve your reading ability.,1. There were foreigners came to our school. There were foreigners who came to our sch

8、ool. 2. Without a friend will feel lonely. Without a friend one will feel lonely. 3. The book was interesting, I read it rapidly. The book was interesting, and I read it rapidly.,Practice,错误类型三：重复 Repetition,Some students dont have a good command of English, so sometimes they cant understand the exa

9、ct meaning of some words and use them repeatedly. How to prevents such mistakes: strengthen the study of the words and expressions; examine more times The train is entering into the tunnel. The train is entering the tunnel.,Practice,1. The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. The box is to

10、o heavy for the weak boy to carry. 2. We hope to improve our work better. We hope to improve our work. 3. The teacher repeated the sentence again. The teacher repeated the sentence. 4. In my opinion, I think we should ask them for advice. In my opinion, we should ask them for advice.,错误类型四：句子缺乏逻辑性或连

11、贯性 lack of logicality and coherence,Some students cant express a complete meaning and usually combine some unrelated sentences together. How to prevent such mistakes: pay attention to the connection of the meaning; give proper examples Being an honest man, Tom worked very hard. Being an honest man,

12、Tom never tells a lie.,1. Li hua is a kind-hearted girl. She will be successful in anything she tries. As she has a strong will and confidence in herself, Li hua may be successful in anything she tries. 2. Rose is in love with John, John is in love with Mary. Rose is in love with John, but John is i

13、n love with Mary.,Practice,Some students cant make the correct grammatical sentences and use the inappropriate words or phrases. How to prevents such mistakes: pay attention to the study of grammar, words and expressions So as to learn English well, I should improve the method of study. In order to

14、learn English well, I should improve the method of study.,错误类型五：语法,词法错误 Grammatical and lexical mistake,1. In the bedroom there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 2. 60% of the students against the idea of entrance fees. 60% of the stude

15、nts are against the idea of entrance fees. 3. Coming out of the classroom, my heart was beating very fast. Coming out of the classroom, I felt my heart beating very fast.,Practice,阅读下面的文字，用英语作文，词数100词左右。 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文： 1、看电影：省

16、时、有趣、易懂 2、读原著：细节更多、语言优美 3、我的看法及理由：文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数） 原著 original work 或book in the original Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that.,高考链接,审题,抓点,造句,成文,改错,誊写,审题1.type of writing文体：argumentation议论文 2.

17、tense时态:present tense一般现在时 3.person人称：first and third person第一,三人称 4.key points内容要点： the view that prefers seeing film the view that prefers original work your own view and reason,阅读下面的文字，用英语作文，词数100词左右。 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文： 1、看电影：省

18、时、有趣、易懂 2、读原著：细节更多、语言优美 3、我的看法及理由：文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数） 原著 original work 或book in the original Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that.,高考链接,Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it

19、 is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed inf

20、ormation from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the second view. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read

21、the original work is better than to see the film based on it.,错误类型一:汉式英语错误 错误类型二:句子结构不完整或结构错误 错误类型三：重复 错误类型四：句子缺乏逻辑性 错误类型五：语法、词法错误,Summary,养成良好的做题习惯,1.养成审题的习惯1）审题时要明确体裁，掌握格式2）抓住要点，一一对应。 2.养成谋篇布局，谨慎用词的习惯 1）谋篇布局是审题的结果，也是写好文章的关键。2）选词造句，点石成金。 3.养成合理安排，联句成文的习惯 4.养成检查修改，卷面整洁的习惯,Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an exact man.- Bacon 读书使人渊博，辩论使人机敏，写作使人精细。,Teaching aims教学目标,1.Let students recognize the five types of the common mistake in the composition.(了解并认识到在自己的作文中常常出现的五种错误) 2. Enable students to know how to correct the mistakes and make im