高考英语作文指导之应用文求助信

1、Practical Writing (Request) 应用文-求助信 -刘晓,折衷式 (Semi-Block Style),Dear Sir or Madam, (Para1) (Para2) (Para3) Yours (sincerely), Lihua,2017-9-15,刘 晓,信件写作流程 1、仔细审题，明确写作要求 一审文体： 二审时态、人称： 三审要点： 2、列出提纲，构建框架结构 - 框架 - 要点分布 - 逻辑关系 - 语言（词汇、语法） （动词、连接成分、可用句型）,格式正确，语言得体；,时态前后照应人称上下一致；,要点齐全，逻辑清晰,3、依据提纲，扩展成文 紧扣提示，适

2、度发挥， 扩展成句，连句成文。 尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构。 4、核查文章，适度修改。 格式正确 要点齐全 语言准确 衔接自然,2017-9-15,刘 晓,求助信 内容要点： -写信目的 -说明困难 -请求帮助 -感谢并期待答复,2017-9-15,刘 晓,求助信 起首句（the opening sentence） Im writing to ask you a fovor. Would you do me a favor? 结束语 (the closing sentence) I sincerely hope you can I am looking forward to your ea

3、rly reply. Hope for an early reply I would be grateful if you could I would appreciate it if you could,2017-9-15,刘 晓,求助信 表示求助的常用句式 Would you be so kind as to? Is it possible that? I sincerely hope that you can,假如你是李华，暑假参加了某 微信公众号（Wechat official account）举行的英语原版书阅读活动，并写了一篇书评（a book review）。现你用英语给外教 S

4、am写一封信，希望他能帮你当面批改书评，内容包括： 简要介绍活动 提出请求 提议见面时间 注意： 词数80次左右 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯,文体 人称 (3) 时态 (4) 要点,求助信,第一人称,一般现在时 一般将来时,写信目的 求助内容 结束语,1、仔细审题，明确写作要求,original English books English originals,2017-9-15,刘 晓,Dear , (Para1) (Para2) Yours (sincerely), Li Hua,2、列出提纲，构建框架结构,请求帮助 提出请求 &约定时间 感谢并期待答复,说明困难,写信目的,根据交流对象 选

5、用称呼和结尾礼语 Dear Sam, Yours respectfully, Yours truly, Yours sincerely,2017-9-15,介绍活动,要点罗列 ask you a favor sign up for a reading activity and write a book review help me correct it /make some corrections meet after class on Friday/ spare me some time thanks and expectations,3、依据提纲，扩展成文 ask you a favor

6、I am writing to ask you a favor. I am Li Hua, a student from our school. I am writing to ask you a favor.,highly related,loosely related,3、依据提纲，扩展成文 sign up for a reading activity and write a book review As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for an English origial reading activity during the

7、 summer vocation. I wrote a book review on my favorite book Jane Eyre. As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for a reading activity during the summer vocation, where I read some English originals and wrote a book review.,Supporting + Key,non-restrictiveclause,3、依据提纲，扩展成文 help me correct it /

8、 make some corrections I am not sure whether I have got my idea across, so I sincerely hope you can help me to correct it and give me some advice on writing. Being poor in writing, I am worried there might be some mistakes.Would you be so kind as to help me make some corrections?,Supporting + Key,Us

9、ing a question to be polite,3、依据提纲，扩展成文 meet after class on Friday/ spare me some timession If possible, can I meet you after class On Friday? If you are avialable after class on Friday, please tell me and I will meet you in your office. Can you spare me some time and tell me when so that I can go t

10、o meet you?,Concession,Concession,Result,3、依据提纲，扩展成文 thanks and expectation Id be grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your kind reply.,Dear Sam, (I am Li Hua, a student from our school.) I am writing to ask a favor of you. As a keen lover of English books, I signed up for a read

11、ing activity during the summer vocation, where I read some English originals and wrote a book review on my favorite book Jane Eyre. But I am not sure whether I have got my idea across, so I sincerely hope you can help me to make some corrections and give me some advice on writing. Can you spare me some time and tell me when so that I can go to meet you? Id be grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,格式、要点、语言,4、核查文章，适度修改,2017-9-15,刘 晓,cohesive and logical,Dear Sam, (I am Li Hua, a student from our school.) I am w