初三英语写作课

1、By from Middle School,writing,DISCUSSION: What words or phrases can you think of when you see the word “ Internet”?,buy,learn,movies,fast,useful,enjoy,English,information,get,clothes,Make sentences with the words or phrases,1.On the Internet，we can enjoy movies.,2. The Internet is fast and useful.,3

2、. We can get information that we need.,5. We can learn English on it.,4. We can do shopping and buy a lot of things on the internet.,Sentences we possibly write:,(2012年湖州中考) 随着时代的发展，因特网已经成为我们生活中必不可少的一部分，请结合实际写一篇题为“on the internet”的短文。内容可包括学习、娱乐和生活等。 要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。2.词数80100，短文题目和开头已给出，不计入词数

3、。 参考词汇： learn，enjoy，do shopping On the Internet The internet is becoming more and more important in our daily life._ _,Jacks writing: The Internet is fast and useful. On the Internet，we can enjoy movies. We can get information that we need. We can do shopping and buy a lot of things. We can learn En

4、glish on it.,Cathys writing: The Internet plays an important part in our life. It is not only fast but also convenient. We can do a lot on the internet. First of all,we can enjoy movies on the internet. Secondly, We can find and download the information that we need. Whats more, we can do shopping a

5、nd buy the stuff we like. We can even learn a lot on it. In a word, we cant live without the Internet.,Tip 1:Write the topic sentence and the conclusion.,How to write a better paragraph?,Compare two writings:,1.Underline the topic sentence of Cathys writing.,2.Underline the conclusion of Cathys writ

6、ing.,The Internet plays an important part in our life.,In a word, we cant live without the Internet.,Examples for topic sentences: plays an important party in our life. Its important/ necessary /for us to Its our duty to,Examples for conclusions: In a word , we should/can/must Lets together. Lets tr

7、y our best to,Tip 2: Add link words or phrases.,How to write a better paragraph?,The Internet plays an important part in our life. It is not only fast but also convenient. We can do a lot on the internet. First of all,we can enjoy movies on the internet. Secondly, We can find and download the inform

8、ation that we need. Whats more, we can do shopping and buy the stuff we like. We can even learn a lot on it. In a word, we cant live without the Internet.,Circle the link words and phrases in Cathys writing.,Lets try,We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. He didnt go to movies

9、, he went to the concert _. _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,such as,First,Next,FinallyAt last,Tip 3:Choose better words and sentence patterns,How to write a better paragraph?,Rewrite the underline w

10、ord or phrase to make it better,We can get the information that we need. we can do shopping and buy a lot of things.,find and download,The stuff we like,He is throwing litter.,He is dropping litter out of the trash bin.,He is dropping litter outside the trash bin and the ground looks dirty.,He is dr

11、opping litter.,Tip 4:Give examples,How to write a better paragraph?,I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.,We should do what we can to make our school more beautiful.,For example, we can clean the school yard, plant more tree

12、s and stop walking on grass.,(2013 湖州中考),和谐，雨润心田；文明，风暖校园。 请结合下面所提供的漫画和提示词， 以“Doing Our Part”(从我做起)为题写一篇短文，内容必须 包括：1简单描述图中人物行为，并简述你的看法； 2发表你的校园文明倡议。 提示词：talk loudly；drop litter；save food；get along well with,Its your turn to write!,The topic sentence: As middle school students, it is our duty to make

13、our school more beautiful.,supporting details: We shouldnt talk loudly in public. Dropping litter is not allowed in or out of school. Never waste food while eating in the dining room. Also we are supposed to get on well with the classmates. Being polite to teachers is also very important.,The conclu

14、sion: In a word, if everyone can do our part, we can make our school more and more beautiful.,Dont miss the points!,和谐，雨润心田；文明，风暖校园。 请结合下面所提供的漫画和提示词， 以“Doing Our Part”(从我做起)为题写一篇短文，内容必须 包括：1简单描述图中人物行为，并简述你的看法； 2发表你的校园文明倡议。 提示词：talk loudly；drop litter；save food；get along well with,I think what he does is wrong.,Magic for learning English:,Practice makes perfect. Hard work leads to success.,紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束，请以My unforgettable(难忘的) Middle School Life 为题写一篇短文。短文首句已给出。 参考