写作新题型公开课

1、,书面表达新题型,Learning aims:,To learn how to sum up the main idea of a short passage; To learn how to draft and polish your own writings; To correct some mistakes from your own writings.,Frame,Divide the passage into several parts Part.1 Part.2 Part.3 Part.4,para1,Para2-3,Para4-5,para6,Frame,Find out the

2、 main idea of each part with the help of the key words. Part.1(1 )_ Part. 2(2-3)_ Part.3 (4-5)_ Part.4 (6)_,Green tea is regaining popularity,Because of its health benefits, green tea is warmly welcomed All around the world,And its sales are currently soaring,However, green tea was once considered a

3、s dangerous and caused some panic,There are some problems with tea,But all these never stop peoples love for green tea,概要写作阅卷考虑点,对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 应用语法街都和词汇的准确性 上下文的连贯性 对各要点表达的独立性情况,说明性(illustrative)短文, 你就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象。,You may begin like these:,1. It is stated in the article that 2. According to the

4、passage, we can know that 3. In the passage, the author states that 4. The passage points out that,One Example,概要写作写作注意事项（2016 考试说明）,1 找关键词和主题句，准确理解、分析原文要点、归纳段落大意 2各要点间的表达要相对独立 3各要点间要有适当的衔接 4句型力求见到，每句话要表意明白、无空泛、笼统、含混词。 5尽量使用短句、慎用长难句 6多使用概括性词语、少用具体描述性词语,（1） Summarize incomplete idea （2） Misuse/misund

5、erstand original passage （3）Too many mistakes made in sentence structures （4）Express opinions too early （5）Apply the ideas from original passage （6）Too simple sentences,避免可能表达中可能会存在的问题：,tips,A gift to Tom,A Letter to Tom,假设你是Betty，对于你的礼物-真丝围巾，Tom一家很感谢，也很感兴趣，但他很想了解关于丝绸的情况。请写一封邮件给Tom，介绍一下丝绸知识 （词数80左右)

6、,要点： 1 .历史 2. 特点、洗护 3 .询问对方其他需求,feature,serve as /function,takeinto consideration/account,make use of /take advantage of,be of vital/great importance,Advanced expressions,各种从句,非谓语,倒装句型,with复合结构,强调句型,省略句型,祈使句型,虚拟语气,How to vary sentence structures,巧用副词不让句子裸奔,Obviously, most of people lack the consciousness of public safety. Surprisingly, the fatal stampede led to 36 deaths and dozens of injuries. Definitely, we should put our security in the first place. Personally, a series of