公开课王姣姣读后续写如何写记叙文.ppt

1、How to complete a narrative article (记叙文),英语科考试说明,读后续写： 提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。,After class, you will be able to,Read for the main idea/plot Write the end according to the given information Polish your writing,Reading

2、,Whats the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Argumentation 议论文,Reading,Who? When? Where? What? Why? How?,Style - Narration 记叙文,Basic forms of the 6 questions,Who is the main character? When did the story happen? Where did the story happen? What happened in the story? Why wa

3、s the matter caused? How was the matter solved/ended?,Who? When? Where? What? Why? How?,Arthur；a young man,one day; when he was on the way to work,Park Avenue, near the First National Bank,Arthur helped a young man.but .was mistaken for the bank thief.,the suitcase in his hand,Main Idea,One day, at

4、Park Avenue, Arthur helped a young man carry a _when he was on the way to work. Suddenly, he heard the sound of an alarm and found a _ happened in the bank. When a young woman looked at his suitcase, he thought he might be _for the bank thief. ,suitcase,mistaken,robbery,第二节：读后续写（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节

5、进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 注意： 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 How to choose the underlined key words in your writing? How to make full use of the given sentences and the plot? How to make the story coherent and logical?,若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。,The underlined k

6、ey words: Park Avenue The young man suitcase in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thief,Tip1: The key words that stand for the most important information, the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing.,Paragraph 1: As he was ru

7、nning, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.,Tip2: Focus on the given sentence of paragraph2 first and some information in it must be mentioned in paragraph 1.,Tip3. Use the key nouns in the given sentences

8、 to infer more information.,Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. In Paragraph1, Arthur might have said something to the taxi driver. For example, “Sir, please take me to the police station quickly. I have somethin

9、g important to report to the policeman.”,Tip4. Write proper conversations between the related characters in each paragraph.,Key Words: Park Avenue The young man suitcase in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thief Paragraph1: As he was running, Arthur he

10、ard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Two characters：Arthur and the young man Arthur might realize that the young man was the bank thief. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station.,Tip5. Use the characters and their actions to infer more information.,Polish your writing Paragraph

11、 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Arthur realized that the young man was the bank thief. He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it. He said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report

12、to the policeman.” Then the taxi went away. -therefore, however, in addition/besides, whats more/furthermore, on the contrary, on the other hand. feeling：unfortunately, suddenly(all of a sudden), to his joy, worried about.,add some details,Use different structures,Use transitional words (衔接词),cohere

13、nt, correct, logical, reasonable, rich in vocabulary and sentence pattern Underline the key words,Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Arthur realized that the young man was the bank thief. He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it. He

14、 said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” Then the taxi went away.,add some details,Use different structures,Use transitional words,“Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the yo

15、ung man was the bank thief.,So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat .,Out of breath/breathlessly, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “.”,The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.,

16、Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” “Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief. So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back

17、seat. Out of breath, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.,add some details,Use different structures,P

18、roper transition,Para 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur_ What will Arthur do in the police station? In Paragraph2, there may be a conversation between Arthur and the policeman. What kind of ending would you prefer for this story? A funny thing happened to Arthur when he w

19、as on the way to work one day. . Who else may go to the police station? (a surprising end) The young man wanted to get his suitcase back. There may be some money or something else in the suitcase. The young man may (not) be the bank thief.,surprising and interesting,Tip6. Sometimes, the general key

20、word can guide us to imagine reasonably.,The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur directly went in and told the police what he happened to him. Obviously, the police had already learned about the robbery. As Arthur expected, they found a large sum of money inside after opening the

21、suitcase. Then they asked Arthur to describe the young man. Later, with the help of Arthur, the police successfully caught the robber. Both the bank and the police thanked Arthur a lot.,para2:,Para2,The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went in. J

22、ust as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on the Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police, he heard a voice outside, “Help! Help!” To the surprise of Arthur, it was the young man. He had followed Arthur in another taxi. It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes. Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway,Tip2: Focus on the given sentence of paragraph2 first. And some information in it must be mentioned in par