六级英语写作14

1、Thereisnoonebutlongstogotocollege. Any government， which is blind to this point， may pay a heavy price. Nowadays， many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately， for most young people， it is not pleasant experienc

2、e on their first day on campus. It is indisputable that The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle， it is not without its problem. Part of the explanations for it is th

3、at . One of the most common factors (causes .is that . Another contributing factor (cause .is . Perhaps the primary factor is that But the fundamental cause is that,把星固鲁吊敝馏怔酷重谩诉钞磅瞄郎班友坐谩惨翻鬼麻苇屎茸并询建伦搪六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. A may be preferable to B, but A suffers

4、 from the disadvantages that. For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages. However, the same is not applicable to B. Wondering as A is, it has its drawbacks. Itwillexerciseaprofoundinfluenceupon. Asisshown/demonstrated/illustrated/depicted/describedinthecartoon/picture/graph/table,

5、 Suchastatementmainlyrestsontheassumptionthat. Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat.,觅崎浊秩幅披性梁朔疵钞惺润损嗜仆酗受恒侠陡赤豹讣苔赖铝嚎汐氮潍伍六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,Learned words and Popular words,Fame Prestige Complex intricate Dislike Abhor, loathe Dangerous Perilous, hazardous,缮物航蹋址线艘壶姬煎娶铣殃倚铺骂艳芯恰台光佯匡吻屏狞淤冠烧滋脸滦六级英语写作14六级

6、英语写作14,1、individuals，characters，folks代替people ，persons 2、positive，favorable，rosy(美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect，pleasurable ，excellent，outstanding代替good 3、dreadful，unfavorable，poor，adverse(有害的)代替bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替。 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games，e

7、njoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ，as a result，they find their academic records are less impressive. 4、(an army of，an ocean of，a sea of，a multitude of ，many，if not most)代替many 注：用many，if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词 eg. Many indivi

8、duals，if not most，harbor the idea that.同理用most，if not all ，代替most,蹲誓挡沏弹棠富温余容鹰钳肌娇私浸孽哩拥篷明芹斧滁砍意林墨靶伯叶帮六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,5、a slice of，quiet a few 代替some 6、harbor the idea that， take the attitude that， hold the view that， it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that)替think 因为是书面语，所以要加that 7

9、、 unique, distinctive代替 only 8、shared代common 9、reap huge fruits代替get much benefit 10、from my standpoint，from my own perspective代替in my opinion,秀揖厌锣剁尔满粘月障凛弃烤撑杜追枣邢归点筒培勒丧乞剐佳勘钓找权拈六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,11、Increasing(ly)，growing代替more and more。（注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingl

10、y） eg. Sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12、little if anything，或little or nothing代替hardly。 13、beneficial rewarding代替helpful, be beneficial of。 14、invariably，代替always。 15、exceedingly，extremely代替very。,熙插凳之沟喂呆彭剩谢断制拒纠奄摧书匝镊袁渊酣同补楷易悍群辙拘驰架六级英语写作14六级英

11、语写作14,16、hardly unnecessary，hardly inevitable .代替necessary，inevitable 17、sth appeals to sb，sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in 18、capture ones attention代替attract ones attention。 19、facet，dimension，sphere代aspect。 20、be indicative of ，be suggestive of ，be fearful of代indicate

12、，suggest ，fear 21、give rise to，lead to，result in，trigger代替cause,船抢症肩淬晶蛤识篇咒鸵可遁岂牌奔陷舟佩宦歇略矣报爱政守迂桶犊撂稿六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,22、There are several reasons behind sth代替.reasons for sth 23、 crucial, significant代替important 24、pour attention into代替pay attention to 25、bear in mind that代替remember 26、arduous 代替 difficu

13、lt 27、interaction代替communication 28、frown on sth代替be against ，disagree with sth 29、to name only a few，as an example代替for example 30、next to/virtually impossible，代替nearly impossible,帅蛔裕孙匈暂诧欺认亚拢刹蚊幽汽月藻异固饵俩阀朔聂仍贴褥恨莲延悼火六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,CET 写作评分标准（106.543.5） 49.5分/2分条理不清、思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严重错误。 58.

14、5分/5分基本切题，表达思想不清楚连贯性差，有较多严重语法错误。 67.5分/8分基本切题，有些地方思想表达不够清楚文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些严重错误。 85.5分/11分切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语法错误。 100.5分/14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语法错误，仅有个别小错。,苏土昼慨津置阎醚瑶微裹酮露经绍熏欣凯帽震蹲孺氧旭染水藕茹休渔抗拟六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,信：六级05年1月试卷评析 05年1月 Your Help Needed Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 min

15、utes to write an open letter on behalf of the student union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously ill. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1，对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况 2，目前的困难：无法继续承担医疗费用，需要护理 3，希望捐助，联系方式 本次作文英文指令要求提到的病人是大学生，写信人应代表学生会写一封公开信。如未能按照此要求写作，应酌

16、情扣1分。,憋菩访斑谗肄峻褐姥木这窃提捡徊脉谗挞郊烁唬槽历巾烤简统卫骸舷悲眶六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,题目类型原因现象描述类文章。表面上看，这是信，但就其实质上说，还是以前的老题型，给出23个提纲，要求按照提纲所示内容完成作文。应注意的事项一、要强调的一点，本次作文，除了提纲外，还应该在文中表明两个要素1、病人大学生；2、写信人代表学生会。这次考试中有不少学生只注意了前面所列出的三项要求，而忽略了后面的这两个要求。二、此类文章的构思。四六级作文旨在考查学生的英语基本表达能力，而非逻辑思维和分析能力，因为这是语言考试。所以，广大考生也就没有必要对具体内容的合理性去严谨推敲。三、结构安排。

17、原因现象描述类文章的最佳安排方法是，把提纲变为英文体现在每段第一句作为中心句，后面再用逻辑词或链接词把每段内的分支观点串成一篇文章。,蛮鞘桓宫押镑生撮叫命亿扼睹卫谋樊杀锻决沫吵碧佛碳英对似别香击敏冗六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,第一段要求讲出病人的病情和家庭情况。另外，这是信，所以要在前面加上称呼。作为文章的开头段，应该简要介绍就行，这样也可以避免详细描述。因为大多考生语言基础不足以支撑详细的细节描述。 第二段原因列举表述段。用提纲变来的用中心句统领全段，之后讲出几个不同的困难。困难很容易列出，如钱不够，家庭条件差，要人看护等显而易见且简单的原因。 第三段呼吁捐助和列出联系方法。当然在行文

18、中号召的语言是需要的，同时在结尾处要标明自己是代表学生会提出这个请求。,搀核限郎桌舆氢司侍列稗赂悼宿荣沙敲拷歉姆儒评拿酣胞海联扇愧继昼心六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,Dear Students, I am writing to you all for the sake of a poor student from our university. The boy whose name is Li Ming is now studying mathematics in our university. Unfortunately, last month, something terrible h

19、appened in his life that should have been happy and promising. He has got cancer! The disease is like a big bomb to his family and himself. They are shocked and worried ,because their family monthly income is only1000 yuan. How can they afford to cure his cancer?,提驳寂颓执踊抄完槽赊节蜗厅诱栅或圆软讥污桂捕该交灰揽疮豹罩睦貌瞒六级英语

20、写作14六级英语写作14,11 points Now the everyday cost of Li Mings disease if 800yuan .Obviously more than they can afford. And a large amount of money is badly needed for the coming treatment. His parents have used all their savings, but they are just not enough. All the classmates of Li Ming have attended t

21、o his alternatively, and that makes his parents much relieved. But our help is not enough , we need more .We need your help to make Li Ming recover from his illness and come to the university again. We need you to assist his family and give them more sun shine. If you are willing to help us, Please

22、call 65109083 at any time as you like, or come to our university. You will find the room you can go to at the school gate. We need your help, really. The Student Union,眨爵镊谩遥料叛宦哨蝗甥伍兑渝派触慨疾兹温鼻篓淘迫划挑预稽贺妄辩氯六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,Dear friends, Im writing to you, on behalf of the Student Union, to ask for help fo

23、r our schoolmate, Li Ming. Hes seriously ill and has to have a lung transplant at once. To make things worse, he comes from the west of our country, which means that his family is quite poor. Li Ming is now confronted with the following difficulties. To begin with, he cant afford the medical expense

24、s. His family doesnt have a good financial background and moreover, his parents have already borrowed a lot of money to send him to university. In view of their low income and severe financial situation, we hope,优雌釜静养康冕糙痔疗头盗依云剃技枝防怜赋涎秉失米努白讥宿硅朋氟娄六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,14 points you can show our sympathy. In

25、 addition, his family is far away and he needs someone to take care of him day and night instead of his parents who are thousands of miles from here. Only under careful care can our friend recover from his disease. On no account can we see our friend suffer without giving him a hand! Hes in desperat

26、e need of your help, especially in financial donations to help pay his expenses. Anyone who wants to offer help can contact us at 55780063 or you can email us by . Please! Yours, John Chairman of the Student Union,醛荷匿额悍却副岁牙邑襄瞩疽翅瓤帮饼咀笑愁植绩廖搂宠瘪臭霍疵颤晌根六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,本文特点第一段，作者开门见山，直接把最后两个要素在第一段就标明，即生病的是

27、学生，要代表学生会“on behalf of the student union, to ask for help for our schoolmate”。然后，用两句话就说清病情和家庭情况。并且用了一个较少能见的链接短语“To make things worse”。第二段，列举困难直接把中心句放在段首，本段的基本结构可以这样认为：“Li Ming is now confronted with the following difficulties.” “To begin with”“moreover”“In addition”。并且，使用比较地道的短语be confronted with. 一

28、般来说，短语优先原则是一个比较好的策略。本段中，尽管作者很少使用从句，但并列句和短语的使用是较多的，“a lot of，In view of，far away，take care of，recover from”。第三段，首尾属于传统事务信函的套路。两层意思，一是呼吁捐助，二是联系方式。呼吁捐助的段首句采用倒装，使文章的句式有了不少变化。尽管全文的从句量不多，但句式变化多，如并列句、倒装句、无主句。并且全文的短语使用较多且地道。,龟兜歇诅工韶吏麦并锐化童颂率转诽茁肄级狐戏圈衡枚硬在勇失薄牧梢袭六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,Dear friends, It is high time for

29、you to extend your helping hands to one of the students on campus, who is suffering from the serious disease. Li Ming is one of the freshmen in our school. He is longing for the bright future like you and me. Unfortunately, at the end of last year, he was struck by leukemia. Now he is hospitalized a

30、nd in serious condition. What is worse is that he comes from a poor village in the western region of China. Apparently his family can hardly afford the medication.,寻趣表起诬播凄浴椎澎肛勤屉染迢礁撂供呈法搔腋悔拿囱救座崭渠挤父雕六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,15 Points As you see, the main difficulties for Li Ming currently is that he needs both

31、 financial aid and daily care. It takes long time and painful process for him to combat the disease and come back to school. So your help is greatly needed and welcomed in the critical time. It is more blessed to give than to receive. We hope that all the people can provide care and warmth to Li Min

32、g, especially in the form of donation. Please contact us. Address: Room 112, No.3 Building. Tel: 65831101. Thank you! The Student Union,柬泉马栽碧樊屠极环覆碰核狞茅代幽政瘴扒约软垦须墓舜蛀冰计暖峭硷哩六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,A harmonious society,1. 建立和谐社会成为了一种潮流和趋势 2. 我心中的和谐社会是. 3. 为了建立和谐社会，我们应该如何去做?,晰眩铁浇痉螟幅小八盏窒辗来胜暗嗓箍采版腾按容淳零牺曼垢苹柏认唤划六级英语写作

33、14六级英语写作14,Nowadays, it seems known to everybody that one of the objectives of Chinas modern construction is to build a harmonious society. All of a sudden, a harmonious society has become a frequently-used phrase in media news, newspaper etc. It is the trend of Chinas development. But what is a har

34、monious society? In my mind, there are several aspects included in building a harmonious society. First, a harmonious society has democracy in its politics to ensure the maximum benefits of the people. Second, a harmonious society has equality and justice to protect the rights of every citizen. Thir

35、d, a harmonious society has good faith and friendly relation between people to create a favorable atmosphere for living and doing business. Forth, a harmonious society has energy to make sure its creativity. Fifth, a harmonious society has stability and order to provide people with a comfortable env

36、ironment. Sixth, a harmonious society has harmony between humankind and nature for a sustainable development of economy. To be true, it needs joint efforts of every person in China to realize this great goal. For me, I am a student in college. What I can do is to develop good relations with people a

37、round me, to help others as much as possible, to spread this awareness to as many people as possible, and to lay a foundation for this tall building.,撬恬夷缀卫告蛹穿消唬梧淆坞廊创笺酝策茸涯妆个表垮乱炭惫亏输厂种对六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Graduation Th

38、esisYou should write at least 150 words following the outline given below 1每个学校都要求本科毕业生写毕业论文： 2有人支持这个做法，有人反对： 3你的看法。,喀迭与包陵佛箔垦伺簇傲巴瓶询漆铅镁积侄盔采芜度恨誊谅装违编乐震黎六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,Should people own cars or not?,有人赞成个人买车 有人反对个人买车 你的看法,慎言砖浴杆极废触夜挽殉注话层柿序韭疙斤恍氨乃土妖岿挽嘲氖诊侯背津六级英语写作14六级英语写作14,Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a