中考英语作文突破指导—作文模板.ppt

1、中考书面表达突破,新乡市一中,1 听力-?20 2 单项-8 3 完形-7 4 阅读-25 5 词语10 6 补全-5 7 作文-20 所剩5-10分钟，检查：分值高到低、难到易。,中考英语大致时间分配建议,一、题型特点： 书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。 中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多的表达空间。 作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提示性词语越来越少，而给同学们的空间越来越大： 06年 Non-smoking Day; 07年 “校园节约从我做起”; 到09年的“A Person I will never forget

2、”， 10年_ is fun,二、考查形式（体裁）： 中考英语考查形式多样：看图（表）写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。 体裁包括：记叙文、说明文和应用文；,三、中考评分标准： 作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。,影响作文分数的因素： 1 题目要求、内容要点； 2 句子准确、通顺； 3 层次结构清晰； 4 拼写、语法等错误； 5 卷面整洁度；,2010年河南中考评分标准：,四、做题步骤： 1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节； 2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点； 4 复查：2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查

3、，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等； 5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。 *总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称； 三思：词汇短语句式； 三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。,五、作文一般框架： 文章分3段： （1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题； （2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话； （3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。,六、如何列提纲： 例1：利弊型作文Microblog的利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the development of internet more and more popular Para2: （利）First

4、, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share with; Last, express views free, money-free Para3: （弊）However, one coin has two faces. On the one hand, a waste of timeaffect study; On the other hand, not safestolen, hurt feelings Para4: （个人）As a student, make good use of it.,七、如何列提纲： 例2：计划安排型作文谈假期安排

5、Para1: （综述）graduate from, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday Para2: （正文）Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the first senior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body. Para3: I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday. (Im looking f

6、orward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.),八、常见的作文类型模板：,1 书信,Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter - - - Best wishes! Yours, Lucy,a书信开头常用语,I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? /How is everything going (on)?

7、 Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to .,b 书信结尾常用语,Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking forward to hearing from you.,八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：,2 图表、数字比例型,（提出讨论或调

8、查的事实）Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. （表达出不同看法或观点）Most students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that （表达个人看法） As a student, I agree to,3 说明利弊型,Nowadays is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages

9、 . First, 优点1 Besides, 优点2 However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺点1 On the other hand, 缺点2 In my opinion,个人观点 ,4 不同观点型,We made a survey about whether we should 提出矛盾问题. Different people hold different ideas. Some believe 正方观点. First, 原因1 Besides, 原因2 W

10、hile others dont agree. They think反方观点. On the one hand, 原因1 On the other hand, 原因2 As for me,个人观点 ,5 解决问题型,Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly, 方法1 Secondly, 方法2 Finally, 方法3 I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will becom

11、e better and better.,九、常用过渡性词语 叙事文常用的句子间连接词： At first; at last; in the end then/next/after that when/while/as soon as/not until at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To ones surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately in a word/in all,议论文常用连接词 表示并列：eitheror; neithernor; b

12、othand; not onlybut also; 表示递进的：besides; whats more; whats worse; (moreover); 表示原因的：because; for; because of; thanks to; (for the reason that); 表示结果的：so; as a result; sothat; therefore; 表示目的的：so that; in order that; (in order) to; for; 表示对比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has

13、two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;,议论文常用连接词 表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：for example; for instance; such as; like; that is to say 表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/much influence

14、on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;,议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as

15、a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way;,议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally

16、; 其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way;,十、作文万能句式 I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dream will come true one day. It takes sb. +时间+to do Sb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth. Its

17、 important/necessary/useful/useless/common(for sb.) to v Its nice/kind of sb. to v. Its time for sb. to do sth. Its a waste of time to Its years/days since sb. +ved Its great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing Its a pity that Its an honor to,十、作文万能句式 Im/Were not allowed to Im afraid of making mistak

18、es There be doing Great changes have taken place in sth is/are well worth v-ing. It seems/seemed that It seems (im)possible to v It is said that As the saying goes, and . are different in many ways. too + adj./adv. to do There are many differences between and ,十、作文万能句式 I have made up my mind to I am

19、 sure that I am not sure whether/if I would rather . than It doesnt matter if Thank you for v-ing. If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better.,十一、作文万能短语 have/look for a chance to do do outdoor activities be/get used to (doing) sth. learnfrom

20、 be proud of/ take pride in play an important/active part/role in agree with sb. to do sth. with the help of sb.=with ones help (反义：without ones help) be/get ready to do sth.= be/ get ready for sth. pay attention to take good care of make friends with get on/along well with ,十一、作文万能短语 wish you succe

21、ssful/success as time goes by graduate from looking back to the past three years,（用现在完成时态）pass the (final) exam stick to doing keep you mind on your goals make up ones mind to do sth. (on sth.) make a decision to do work hard at English once in a while/ at times/ now and then from then on,十一、作文万能短语

22、in the future（将来）/ in future（从今以后） increase our knowledge/ enlarge our vocabulary in fact/as a matter of fact in the beginning/ at first feel like giving up have trouble/difficulty in (doing) sth. have (no) time to do have experience in (doing) sth. follow ones advice/suggestions master some basic skills be required to do ask sb. for help cant wait to do,十一、作文万能短语 be supposed to do encourage sb. to do deal/do with work out/