good高中英语基础写作—学会用复合句和非谓语动词

1、,提高句子档次的小结： 1. 用高级结构和词汇 2. 用分词短语合并句子 用介词短语合并句子 用独立主格结构合并句子 用连接词连接句子 3. 用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句 4. 用不同结构和词汇 5. 合适的过渡性词汇,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词, Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate, a new student from a northern province, s

2、peaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,用一句话表达,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。 小学生同时学汉语和英语。 这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句, Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affec

3、t their Chinese study., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their

4、 Chinese study,because not everyone is good at learning English., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,If children from primary school start to learn English and Ch

5、inese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study,方法2：,because not everyone is good at learning English.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇： 错别字: wrongly-written characters 网络语言：web language,要求：1. 用两句话表达表格内容 2. 两句话要有连贯性,第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。, There are many wrongly-written

6、 characters in students compositions.,The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.,合并句子：, They often use web languages when chatting on line.,1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail t

7、o memorize the new characters,第二句: 1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。, They have much homework to do every day.,2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,合并句子：, They fail to memorize the new ch

8、aracters.,连接两句话： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.,1. I used to like reading and writing poem

9、s at middle school. 2. Suddenly I thought of a good idea. 3.You can find my house easily.,I used to be fond of reading and writing poems at middle school.,All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me.,A good idea suddenly struck me.,You have no trouble/difficulty in finding my house .,You can find my

10、 house without any difficulty .,一. advanced vocabulary较高级的词汇、短语,4.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 5.The old photo made me think of my happy childhood.,Thanks to the good weather , our journey was comfortable.,The old photo reminded me of my happy childhood.,6.His invention

11、 will be good for people greatly.,His invention will ( ) people. His invention will ( )people. His invention will ( ) people. People will ( )his invention. His invention will( ). His invention will ( )people.,be of great benefit to,bring a lot of benefits to,be greatly beneficial to,benefit greatly

12、from,benefit people greatly,do much good to,1. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 2. I was walking along Park Road towards the east. At that time, an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.,二.varied grammatical structure丰富的语法结构,On hearing the bad news of

13、 his death, she went pale with sorrow.,I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.,3. The flat is in a building on Beijing Road. It is not far from our School. 4. He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things.,T

14、he flat is in a building on Beijing Road, which is not far from our School.,To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things.,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,5. We can achieve our goal only in this way. 6.He did not know what had happened until he had read the

15、news in the newspaper.,Only in this way can we achieve our goal .,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.,7.The teacher required all the students to hand in their composition

16、s after class. ( 复合宾语),All the students were required to hand in their compositions after class. The teacher required that all the students should hand in their compositions after class. It was required by the teacher that all the students should hand in their compositions after class. The teachers

17、requirement was that all the students should hand in their compositions after class.,（被动语态）,（宾语从句）,（主语从句）,（表语从句）,1.恰当使用关联词, 如:but, when，so，if，because，so that等。,1) People have found mobile phones very convenient _they can get in touch with each other whenever and wherever they like. 2) This village u

18、sed to be very small and poor _it has changed a lot since 1978 .,because,but,三. proper linking words or sentences使用恰当的连接词,2.巧妙使用意思有联系的词或语句 如:First, Second, Third, Soon, most excitingly, Whats more, whats worse, As a result等。,All the school-age children can study here._, they enjoy free education in

19、it. The birds dodo were killed for food on a large number. _, they died out at last. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _, it may make us fat.,As a result,Whats worse,Whats more,3.适当使用过渡性语句 如:The reasons are as follows. Every coin has two sides. All roads lead to Rome. As the result/survey shows. We

20、 can draw an conclusion.等,Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. _. First，most families are too poor to send their children to school . Second, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. Third, ,The reasons are as follows,Television is not only

21、 a convenient source of entertainment, but also a comparatively cheap one. But_, television also has disadvantages, such as its effects on young people.,every coin has two sides,4.适当使用过渡性语句 如:The reasons are as follows. Every coin has two sides. All roads lead to Rome. As the result/survey shows. We

22、 can draw an conclusion.等,练习一：众所周知，词汇就像建造大楼的砖块，是语言的重要组成部分。 (2010 江苏) a.As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building . b.It is well known that vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building . c.What is known to all is tha

23、t vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building .,1.鼠标是一个有用的装置。人们用它来和电脑进行对话。 (2009 江苏) a. The mouse is a most effective device. It is used by people to communicate with a computer. b. The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer. (过

24、去分词短语作定语),3我站在讲台上，很窘迫，不知该怎么做。 (2009湖南) a. I stood on the platform, feeling embarrassed and not knowing what to do. b. I stood on the platform, felt embarrassed and didnt know what to do. c. I stood on the platform, and I felt so embarrassed that I didnt know what to do.,2我认为，仅仅送给父母贵重的礼物是不对的。(2006江西)

25、 a. I dont think it good only to provide our parents with expensive gifts. b. In my opinion, it is not good only to provide our parents with expensive gifts. c. We only provide our parents with expensive gifts, which is not good.,Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually,

26、 a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular. But I think that its better to help other people. We know that its important to learn to help other pe

27、ople. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because youve helped them and youll be happy,Improve this composition, try!,( 1) Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party.（用where定

28、语从句）(2) They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes.（合并句子）(3)Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular （用which定语从句）. (4) But (替换） I think （替换） that its better to help other people.(5) We know that its important to learn to help others. Helping other people ca

29、n do us a lot of good. (6) People will help you in return and youll be happy （用For one thing, For another 替换）.,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.,Usually, a party is held where best friends as well as relatives can get together and have fun.,They usually buy a small gift with which to express their best wishes.,Sometimes, people send short messages too, which is becoming very popular .,However, as far as