高考作文指导.ppt

1、高考作文指导,重要性特点方法指导即时训练讲评总结,重要性,重要性,压轴题：考查学生综合运用英语知识及技能。,分值：,19931995：25分 19961999：30分 20002004：25分,1993-2004年作文,25 100 看图:六图讲述动物故事（阿福救人）,25 100 广播通知：通知参加欢迎美国朋友的晚会,25100 看图：给Peter信，指明野餐（picnic）道路,30 100 表格：介绍自己基本情况，书写申请,30 100 看图：六图违反交通法规，被罚值勤,30 100 看图：六图写参观农场的日记,30 100 看图：分析学校三年平面图，写信谈变化,25 100 看图：目击

2、交通事故，警察局里写报告,25 100 表格；给Dick回信，谈减负带来的变化,25 100 表格；给报社写信，谈公园是否该收门票,25 100 看图；写信给笔友介绍住房情况,25 80120 看图：与邻居交涉其看球赛影响你学习的情况,应用文：书信、通知、便条等 记叙文：看图作文、日记等 说明文：人物介绍、活动等 议论文：（NMET2002、NMET2001 上海、NMET2003上海）,特点,几乎全部都是图表作文。,评分原则以及给分范围,第五档（很好）：完全完成试题规定的任务。 （21- 25分）,第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务， 漏掉1、 2个次重点。 （16-20分）,第三档（适当

3、）：基本完成试题规定的任务。 （11-15分）,第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务。 （6-10分）,第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务。 只能写出 与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。 （1-5分）,未能传达读者任何信息 ： 0分 。,高考作文如何写？,五个步骤,1、审题,体裁、人称、时态、要点,2、写要点：用一两个词或短语写出每句的要点。,3、连词成句：用关联词等将要点扩展成句。,4、联句成文,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾,5、检查修改，规范抄写,巧用连接词、过渡句,Practice,根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。短文要写得连贯、完

4、整。字数100字左右。,审 题,词 句 文,书面表达要点,（1）Tom 在街上骑自行车 （2）一辆车快速向他开来 （3）他来不及转弯，车把他从自行车上撞倒 （4）司机逃走 （5）路人目击后向警察报告 （6）肇事者被抓后受惩罚,参 考 答 案,The other day, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast. He was so frightened that he quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. Th

5、e car hit his bike and he fell off it. When the driver realized that he had caused an accident, he was so afraid that he drove the car away quickly. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately a passer-by happened to see what had happened and remembered the number of the

6、car. He reported this to the police. Now the driver has been caught and will be punished for his wrong doing.,课堂练习,审 题,参考答案,小 结,小 结,注意选词 多用短句 慎用长句,巧用转折词，总括词,注意使用“变通表达法”,要有闪光点，并注意运 用书写技巧,Write a composition about 100 words on No.27 English Weekly.,Homework,书面表达审题,1、题材：一份书面材料，报告你所目击的一起交通事故 的经过，为记叙文体,2

7、、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘发生过的一起交通 事故。,3、人称：为“I”，第一人称。,书面表达要点,（1）2000年2月8日发生了一起交通事故,（2）我走在公园路,（3）一位老人从街的另一边公园里出来,（4）一辆黄车开过来在公园路转弯,（5）黄车撞倒了老人并向西开跑,（6）我记住了车牌号是AC864，并送老人去 医院,2000书面表达答案,It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along the Park Road towards the east when an old man came out of

8、the Park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drove up the Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry.The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver

9、was a young woman but the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Lihua,审 题,1、体裁：,2、主要时态：,3、人称：,4、要点：,记叙文，叙述Tom骑自行车的经历。,一般过去时，叙述描绘 一起交通事故。,第三人称：Tom。,记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人 物、事件的前后经过。,词 句 文,词：, to ride a bike, to hit his bik

10、e and fall off,句：,Tom was riding a bike along the street.,The car hit his bike and he fell off it.,文：,The other day, Tom was riding a bike along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast and hit his bike and he fell off it.,Some of the discourse markers,并列 选择 原因 结果 时间 比较 转折 递进 举例 总结,a

11、nd; as well as ; also; besides,or; eitheror; or else; otherwise,because ; owing to; due to ;on account of ; thanks to,so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result,when ;soon after ; before; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally; afterwards.,on the contrary ; on the other hand ; like,but ; yet; however ;

12、although; in spite of ; instead ;,moreover ; even ; in addition; whats more,for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ;,in short ; in general ; generally speaking , in all, in a word ; after all,假设你班举行一次英语班会，主题为“中学生应该如何 使用家长给的零花钱”。请你根据提示写一篇发言稿。 注意： 词数左右 参考词汇：零花钱pocket money,字 词 文,词：, to ride a bike, to hit his bike and fall off,句：,Tom was riding a bike al