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1、写作高手,一、篇章结构 引出建议 列举建议与理由( 希望),如何提建议,二、套语背诵 1.引出建议可以用： Here are my suggestions on how to . Suggestions on . can be listed as follows. The ways for you to . can be suggested as follows.,2.列举建议可以用： first of all/first/to begin with；second (ly)/then/besides/in addition/whats more；finally/lastly/last but

2、not least for one thing .and for another (thing),3.在列举的建议后常常会用起补充说明作用的分词短语、定语从句等说明提出此建议的理由或原因。,三、超级仿写 写作基础 翻译下列短语或句子。 1.伤害你母亲的感情 2.多与母亲交流 3.向某人证明某事,prove sth. to sb.,hurt your mothers feelings,talk more with your mom,4.分担家务 5.做是明智的 6.如果就更好了 7.你已是成年人了。(主+系+表),You are already a grown-up.,share the hou

3、sework,Its advisable to do sth.,Its even better if .,8. 你应该理解你的母亲。(主+谓+宾) 9.你应该学会自己做好自己的事。(主+谓+宾) 10.这将有助于你们更好地了解彼此。(主+谓+宾+补),It will help you understand each other better.,You should understand your mother.,You should learn to do your own things well by yourself.,二、基础写作 假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上， 你看到一个名叫Gr

4、own-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助：,写作内容 请根据以上帖子内容， 给Grow-up回贴，并包括以下要点： 1.你对这一问题的看法(已给出)； 2.告诉Grown-up要理解而不要伤害母亲； 3.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议： 多与母亲交流； 行动上证明自己已成年。,写作要求 1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 2.回帖的开头已给出。 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 Hi， Grown-up， .,可这样布局5句话:告诉Grown-up应该理解母亲,不要做伤害母亲的事(1句);引出自己提的建议(1句);具体建议:多与母亲交流是明智的做法(1句):行

5、动上证明自己已成年(2句,请想想什么事可以证明自己已成年)。 至于如何引出建议或将建议一条一条罗列出来，请参看“晨读狂背写作模板”的”名师指津”部分。,写作指导,参考范文 Hi， Grown-up， As a student of your age， I understand your situation and the problem you are facing is common among us teenagers. However， you should understand your mother and it is wise not to do anything that may

6、 hurt your mothers feelings.引出建议 Suggestions on how to deal with the problem can be listed as follows.,列出建议First， its advisable to talk more with your mom， (理由) which will help you understand each other better. Second， you should learn to do your own things well by yourself， (理由) proving to your mom

7、 that you are already a “grown-up”. Its even better if you could share more of the housework， (列举) such as cleaning， washing and cooking.,三、读写任务 Being able to trust and relax with your friend is a big part of friendship. Remember when you were young you went with a friend to her grandmas for the wee

8、kend. But no one can form a friendship until he/she realizes that the basis of being friends is meeting the needs of the other person. One must be a friend to have a friend. Never forget that friends relate. Relating is the basis of friendship.,首先寻找主题句，第1段的首句和倒数第2句是主题句，中心是 “Friendship is a comfortab

9、le situation like home”，主要回答了“什么是友谊？”友谊就像家一样，让你无拘无束，格外轻松(relax)。第2段回答“如何建立友谊？”要想拥有朋友，你自己必须对他人够朋友(meeting the needs of the other person)。第3段落回答“如何保持友谊？”经常联络(relating)。,三个要点分三段来写。要点(1)是提问，可以用一句话直接回答该问题作为该段的主题句，如According to my experience， I think friends bring me . 然后再用once(曾有一次)举例说明。要点(2)对友谊的理解，就是要求你

10、谈谈什么是真正的友谊，什么是真正的朋友； 要点(3)凭自己的经验去谈，也可参照阅读短文的第2段。,参考范文 Friendship is comfortable situation just like a home, where you can get relaxed. But to form and keep it needs relating and being ready to help each other.,According to my experience, I think friends bring me not only trust, understanding but als

11、o warmth. Once on a weekend I fell badly ill at school. One of my friends had me sent to hospital and looked after me without having a rest, which moved me a lot. It is my friend that gives me a hand when Im in trouble.,A true friend is someone with whom we can share our lives, thoughts, feelings, a

12、nd frustrations. True friendship is like water, which is tasteless but is essential to our body. When you are happy, you are likely to forget him, but when you are in trouble, he is the first one you will turn to.,In my opinion, to build up real friendship, we should meet the needs of our friends an

13、d give them a hand if necessary. We should also make time for friends, even if we are busy. Besides, forget what we give, and remember what we receive. Whats more important, trust is essential to true friendship.,?,如何写发言稿 发言稿是参加会议者为了在会上表达自己的意见、看法、学习心得、汇报工作情况而事先准备的文稿。包括开幕词、闭幕词、欢迎词、欢送词、告别词等。一般包括： 称呼语

14、正文 结束语。,一、套语背诵 1.称呼语有： Dear friends/Dear fellow students/Good morning, ladies and gentlemen/Good afternoon everyone等。其后用逗号“, ”。, 有时用一句客套语。如： It is a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech.我很荣幸站在这里发表演讲。 Im very happy to stand here and give my speech.我很高兴能站在这里发言。, 一般开门见山直奔主题。如： Welcome to

15、 our school. Now please allow me to introduce you to some of our school rules here.欢迎你们来到我们学校, 请让我向你们介绍一下我校的一些规章制度。 The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.”我今天发言的主题是“关于成为成年人的思考”。, Welcome to this years English speech competition. Im Li Hua. I feel greatly honored to host th

16、e contest, which is sponsored by the Students Union.欢迎来参加今年的英语演讲比赛, 我是李华, 非常荣幸主持由学生会发起的这次比赛。, 列举讲话要点。常用first of all, secondly, finally等。 有时会加上一句总结性的话。如： I hope that the friendship between you and us will exist forever.我希望你和我们之间的友谊永存。 In a word, good listening can really enable you to get closer to e

17、ach other.总之, 好好倾听会让你们能够彼此靠近。, Only in this way can we become good listeners.只有这样, 我们才可以成为良好的倾听者。 3. 结束语有: Thats all. Thank you (for your listening)! 特别说明: 高考中一般只要求考生写正文部分, 开头结尾等涉及格式的东西, 通常不要求考生写。,假如你是李华，将于10月15日到英国伦敦参加“International English Learning Camp”。与会代表须在会上交流自己的英语学习体会。 写作内容 请写一篇英文发言稿, 内容包括：

18、1. 学习方法： 多记有用句型, 多阅读英文报刊。 2. 学习收获： 了解异国文化, 与外国人直接交流。 3. 学习困难： 经常遗忘所学词汇。,超级仿写,写作要求 只能用五句话表达全部内容; 发言稿的开头与结尾已经给出, 不计入总句数。 Good morning everyone， In todays world, mastering a foreign language will be helpful in our life. Here Id like to share with you my method of English learning.方法 First of all, I thi

19、nk it useful to learn some grammar and remember as many useful sentence patterns as I can.,As we all know, the more we read, the better our English will be, so I spend much time reading English newspapers and magazines after class. Besides, TV and radio programmes are of great help for my listening.

20、,收获Learning English not only increases my awareness of foreign cultures but also helps me to communicate with English-speaking people and to make more new friends.,困难However, sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have learned and I also find some English pronunciations rather

21、 confusing. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to learn English better. Thank you for listening!,叙述活动过程(日记游记) 一、篇章结构 总述 过程 感受 二、写作技巧 叙述活动或事件的过程, 包括日记和游记。写作时应注意以下几点：,1.一般应包括记叙文的六要素。如游记, 一般包括旅游的时间(when)、地点(where)、参加的人员(who)、交通工具(how)、所见所闻(what), 以及感受和体会(feeling)。 2.一般用过去时, 但

22、也要灵活使用其它时态。如描写景色或议论时, 可能用一般现在时; 表示个人感想, 打算或决心, 可能用一般将来时。,3.以时间或地点为线索, 描述事件或活动过程。表示时间的词有: one day, the next day, last Friday, (early) in the morning, (late) in the afternoon, at noon, upon arrival, at first, then, (shortly) after that, after a short while, after a short rest, afterwards, ten minutes

23、later, soon, soon after, after, before, when, while, during, immediately, in the end, finally等。,4.常用句式有： Today I paid a visit to .with my classmates. 今天我和同学一起参观了 Time passed quickly before we knew it， we had to . 时间不知不觉过去了, 我们不得不 How glad/happy/excited I feel today! 今天我感到多么高兴啊！,1.(2009北京)假设你是红星中学高三

24、班的学生李华, 为响应绿化祖国的号召, 你班4月12日去郊区植树。活动过程如下图所示： 写作内容 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇日记, 记叙植树活动的全过程。,三、超级仿写,参考词汇： 郊区 suburbs April 12 Tuesday Fine April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience. . Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and be

25、autify our environment.,April 12TuesdayFine 总述Today is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience. 过程In the morning, we cycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes, some were carrying and pla

26、nting young trees, and others were watering them.,After getting the work done, we put up a sign reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving, we took some photos to record our green action. 感受 Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and

27、beautify our environment.,2. (2008北京)假设上周你们班举行了春游活动, 活动过程如下图所示： 写作内容 请根据以上四幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇短文, 叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。 提示词: 游乐园amusement park垃圾箱dustbin,Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mo

28、untain， and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing. 过程 The next day, we set off early in the morning.,While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such

29、as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. 感受We were tired but happybecause as is known to us, it is our duty to keep our living environment clean.,描述灾难性事件 我们讲的灾难性事件, 主要指fire(火灾)

30、， flood(水灾)， drought(干旱)， landslide(山崩)， earthquake(地震)， tsunami(海啸)， typhoon(台风)，hurricane(飓风)，tornado(龙卷风)， volcano(火山)， snowstorm(暴风雪)等。,一、写作内容 报道这类事件, 一般应包括事件发生的时间、地点、灾情、损失, 以及救援情况等。 二、套语背诵 1.发生某地 an earthquake happened in/hit/struck . 2.造成后果 失踪： missing, 受伤： get injured 死亡： be killed/lose ones

31、life/cause sbs death 电力中断： the electricity was cut off 房屋倒塌： houses collapse/fall down, 冲走房屋： wash away buildings 成为废墟： be in ruins; fall into ruin 菜地被毁坏了： vegetable fields were ruined. 造成经济损失： cause economic losses,3.救援捐赠： 受灾地区： stricken district/area 救灾工作： rescue work 恢复正常： return to normal, 地震灾民：

32、 the victims of the earthquake 被困人员： trapped people 拯救： rescue . from 呼吁人们捐赠： call on people to make donations,三、超级仿写 基础写作 今年的日本大地震引起社会各界极大关注, 以下是一些基本情况：,写作内容 请根据以上内容给学校广播站写一篇英语简讯, 内容包括： 1.地震发生的时间, 震中地点； 2.地震的影响和各界对此次地震的反应； 3.你的态度。 写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。,基础写作 A big earthqua

33、ke hit Japan 130 kilometers off the northeast coast of Honshu Island at 1:00 pm on March 11, 2011.The strong tsunami along with it had caused more than 4000 deaths and 8000 people missing by March 16.After the quake, a lot of countries have promised to provide support.,Though the reactors in the nuc

34、lear power station continued to explode， there have been no other countries influenced by nuclear radiation up to now, according to the WHO. I think we all should put down the prejudice between China and Japan and be united to reduce the damage.,一、写作内容 1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概况) 2. ap

35、pearance, character (外表、性格) 3. Education (教育背景) 4. big events in his or her life (in order of time) (经历、生平) 5. evaluation (评价),人物简介,1. 职位头衔： 用同位语, 年龄性别与家境也可用同位语。如： Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving (一位跳水的世界冠军), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.(同位语) Im Li Hui, a girl of seventeen(一个17岁的女孩子).,二、套语背

36、诵, Abraham Lincoln， the son of a poor family (一个贫苦家庭的儿子), was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. 亚伯拉汗林肯, 于1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。,2. 介绍出生: 介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用分词结构, 使文章更简洁。如： Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980 (1980年出生于上海), is a world famous basketball player. Born of a poor clerk s family(出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中),

37、 Charles Dickens had little schooling.,3. 描写外貌: 巧用with短语。如： My English teacher is a beautiful lady, with long hair and big eyes(她长着两只大眼睛, 留着长发).,4. 生平事迹： 尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如： In his life, he got many honours， one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award(其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”的称号).(定语从句),

38、In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal(在他打破世界纪录并获得金牌之后), he became the idol of the youth.(分词短语) Not only does he show interest in science(他不但对科学极有兴趣), but also he has a gift for music.(倒装句式),写成长经历请按时间顺序。如when he was a small boy， at (the age of) five， in 2006， a year later等。,名

39、师指津：,5. 评价: 尽量运用短语。如： Lei Feng set a good example to us(给我们树立了一个良好的榜样), so all the people show great respect to him(很敬重他). 此外, 以下短语很有用, 请熟读背诵： be admitted into a key university 考上重点大学, major in law主修法律 get a masters degree 获得硕士学位 graduate from Harvard University毕业于哈佛大学 win the first prize获得一等奖, win

40、a gold medal赢得一枚金牌 win the Nobel Prize 获得诺贝尔奖 become a world champion 成为世界冠军 set a good example to us 给我们树立了良好的榜样,(10) be highly thought of受到好评 (11) be awarded a medal for因而获得奖章 (12) be awarded the title of获得称号 (13) devote .to . 把专用于/奉献给,三、超级仿写 (2010浙江) 最近,李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。 写作要点请你根据她的事迹，用英语为班级板报写一篇短文

41、,内容包括： 1.事迹:上周六下午,天气炎热,在别人休闲之时,她却不辞劳苦为班级选购歌咏比赛服装； 2.结果:被李越的事迹感动,我们竭尽全力赢得了一等奖； 3.评论:她关心班集体,常利用业余时间帮助别人;为我们树立了良好榜样。,参考词汇: singing contest 歌咏比赛costume 服装,Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the afternoon of last Sat

42、urday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest regardless of the hot weather.,While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she took great pains to search, select and managed to find

43、 the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts， we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.,Apart from being warm-hearted and caring a lot about the class, Li Yue often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example to us, so she deserves the honor and we should

44、learn from her.,讨论或辩论类 一、篇章结构 1.开头: 提出问题或引出讨论或辩论的主题。 Recently we have had a discussion / debate on /about (whether).,2.主体： 陈述不同观点及其理由。 表示赞同： agree with favour the idea be for the idea be in favour of approve of 表示反对： dont agree with be against the idea disagree,理由： because for they say saying that f

45、or the reason that 3.结尾：表明个人观点。 Personally, I think As for me In my opinion,二、套语背诵 1.开头： 提出问题或引出讨论或辩论的主题。 We had a discussion about whether it is the only way out for senior students to go to college. 我们就上大学是否是高中生的唯一出路进行了讨论。, Recently our class have held a discussion on how to carry out the Citizens

46、 Basic Moral Standards and become a successful young man.最近我班就如何实施公民的基本道德规范和做一个有为青年进行了讨论。, Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.最近我班就北京动物园是否应迁出市区进行了讨论。, Im writing to tell you about a recent discussion our class have

47、had on whether or not university students should be financially independent. 我写信是要告诉你, 我班最近就大学生是否应该经济独立进行讨论的情况。 注: 有时还会用Opinions are divided on the question.之类的过渡句, 然后再引出不同观点。,2.表示赞同及理由。 Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traff

48、ic jams. They also say .有的同学赞同迁出。他们认为参观动物园的旅客太多会造成交通拥挤。他们还说(2005全国), The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps to reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety. 大多数学生持这种观点：惩罚(乘坐酒醉驾车的)乘客有助于减少交通事故和提高交通安全。(2010年茂名一模),3.表示反对及理由。 由正及反常用however, on the other

49、hand等过渡。 60of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe . 有60%的人反对公园收费, 他们认为 (2002全国), Nearly 70% of us disagree since it makes us fall into the habit of dependence, so that we wont form the good habit of studying. 我们中将近有70%的人不同意(父母陪读), 因为这会让我们养成依赖习惯, 结果将不会形成良好的学习习惯。,4.结尾：表明个人观

50、点。 In my opinion, we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherland better. 依我看, 我们上大学可以接受更好的教育, 我们也因此能更好地服务祖国。, Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.就我而言, 我宁愿合作学习,

51、因为这会使我有机会学会与人相处和与人分享。,三、超级仿写 基础写作 最近, 你学校组织高三学生开展了一场讨论。讨论的主题是： 周末要不要补课。讨论情况如下：,写作内容 请根据上表写一篇短文, 内容包括： 1.讨论的时间、主题与参加人员； 2.讨论得出的三种观点及原因； 3.你的观点。,写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。,引出主题Recently, Senior 3 students in our school have had a discussion about whether we should have classes on

52、weekends. As can be seen from the table above, 赞同及其理由30% of them approve of it because the College Entrance Examination is coming in June and students should make full use of their time.,反对及其理由Another 30% are against the idea for the reason that students should have a good rest on weekends so that t

53、hey can study more effectively during the weekdays. The rest dont agree with either of the ideas above for they believe study and rest are both important, so one day can be used to study and the other day for a rest.个人看法As for me, I prefer to have a rest on weekends.,兴趣爱好 指对音乐、舞蹈、表演、体育运动、游戏(包括网络游戏)、

54、集票、阅读、烹饪、看电影、看电视、听收音广播、欣赏戏剧、音乐会、观光旅行、访问博物馆、饲养宠物等非常感兴趣。,1. surf the Internet上网 2. chat online 在线聊天 3. enjoy popular music 欢流行音乐 4. be fond of/be keen on喜欢 . 5. go in for爱好 6. have some hobbies有一些爱好,一、套语背诵,7. be interested in对感兴趣 8. show interest in对感兴趣 9. take an interest in对感兴趣 10.be crazy about .对着

55、迷 e to like .越来越喜欢,12.develop a great liking for .渐渐爱上 13.I prefer watching a TV show to going to a concert.我宁愿看电视表演, 而不愿去听音乐会。 14.He goes for playing on-line games. 他喜欢玩在线游戏。,15.Shopping is my favorite hobby in my spare time. 购物是我闲暇时最喜欢的爱好。 16.I hate visiting museums, for I think they are boring.我讨

56、厌参观博物馆, 因为我觉得它们让人感到无趣。,二、超级仿写 写作内容 请根据下表信息, 写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的运动。,写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。,Basketball is my favorite sport. I first became interested in basketball at the age of nine, when my father taught me how to play basketball. Now I am a member of our school basketball team and I often play basketball fo

57、r about an hour after school or on weekends.,The reason why I like it so much is that it can not only brings me lots of happiness and health but also friends. My favorite basketball star is Yao Ming although I also like Jordan.,三、任务写作 培养孩子的兴趣爱好是非常必要的，但现在有很多家长一味地追求子女的多才多艺，迫使孩子学习他们不感兴趣的才艺,请你以大约120个词谈谈

58、对这种现象的看法,内容包括： 1.你是否赞同上述家长的做法； 2.以你或你朋友的经历说明你的观点； 3.呼吁家长们要尊重孩子的意愿。,Todays children are lucky to have many opportunities to develop their talents. But on the other hand, a lot of parents push their children too hard. In that case, I dont envy them. It is true that good hobbies make life more colorful

59、 and enjoyable. However, things are different if children take no interest in the “hobby” that their parents choose for them.,Without interest as motivation, they find it a burden rather than a hobby. My 6-year- old neighbor often cries while practicing the piano. She is busier on weekends than on weekdays because she has to attend many extracurricular activities. Her mother complains that she even sleeps in class.,Therefore, parents should see the bad effects from their over-effort to cultivate childrens t