（课标版）云南省中考英语总复习第三部分重难题型精讲题型六书面表达课件.ppt

1、第三部分 重难题型精讲,题型六 书面表达,解题方法与技巧,一、审 “审”即审题。具体包括以下四方面： 1. 审文体。审清题干要求用什么文体， 是说明文、记叙文还是议论文。 2. 审要求。认真阅读题干所提供的信息、词汇和要求。如：信息包括哪些内容要点、文章的词数、是否能出现个人信息等。 3. 审人称。要弄清楚书面表达要求用何种人称， 是第一人称、第二人称还是第三人称。 4. 定时态。一般来说， 故事性文章用过去时， 其中表达感受时可用现在时；说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时；谈论理想和未来打算的文章用将来时。,二、列 “列”即列提纲。根据题目所提供的信息， 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点， 来确定

2、文章的框架， 但须确保要点无遗漏。 三、扩 “扩”即扩写句子。它是在主干的基础上添枝加叶， 也就是说， 根据表达的需要添加上定语、状语、补语等修饰及说明成分；也可适当使用复合句， 如：宾语从句、定语从句及状语从句等,使句子的意思更具体形象、 充实丰满。,四、连 “连”即连句成文。为了使句子或段落语义连贯， 表达合理准确， 可以适当加入一些连接词。常用的连接词有: 表示并列或递进：and, also, besides, as well as, both and, whats more, not onlybut also 表示选择：or, eitheror 表示转折：but, however, o

3、therwise, yet, while 表示因果: so, because, therefore, as a result, because of, due to,表示条件：if, unless 表示对比：instead, on one handon the other hand. 表示解释：for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words 表示顺序：to begin with, first(ly), first of all, second(ly), third(ly), next, then, later

4、, finally, in the end 表示强调: actually, after all, in fact 表示结论: all in all, in a word, in my opinion, generally speaking,五、美 “美”即美化文章。为了使文章优美， 我们可以这样： 1. 正确使用修饰词、连接词、高级词汇或12个复合句， 如：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等。对于连接词， 相较于常见的first, second, third等， 使用to begin with, whats more, at last, finally等高级词汇和短语， 往往会提高作文的档次， 赢

5、得阅卷老师的青睐。 2. 不同程度的考生应有不同的写作要求。基础较薄弱的考生， 多用一些课本上的基本句型；而对于基础比较好的考生， 则可使用比较复杂的句型或常见谚语、俗语等， 这样可以达到锦上添花的效果。 3. 检查语法、单词拼写及大小写是否正确， 表达是否地道， 篇章是否连贯， 标点符号是否使用正确。,六、抄 书写要工整、美观、规范， 并且卷面须整洁， 尽量不做任何涂改。书写英文单词时，英文字母不要压到答题线。,类别一 写人叙事类 类别二 梦想计划类 类别三 做法建议类 类别四 说明介绍类,类别剖析,类别一 写人叙事类,话题剖析,写人叙事是近5年省卷中考省卷书面表达的高频命题点，共考查了4次

6、，考查角度包括叙述自己特别的一天、初中的学习生活、与某人一起成长、回忆初中生活。文章大多以一般过去时和第一人称为主。一般会给出一段中文背景提示和2点写作要求。,【开头句】 1. At the age of six, he/she began to. 2. He/She has. 3. I will never forget. 4. I still remember the day. 5. The most interesting thing is that. 6. What I admire most about her is. 7. Im glad to introduce.to you.

7、8. The person who has influenced me most is. 9. My/His/Her name is .,【中间句】 10. He/She is +基数词+years old. He/She was born in/on+时间/地点. 11. He/She comes/is from+地点名词. 12. He/She is 1.70 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos. 13. He/She has long/black.(修饰词)+hair(外 貌特征). 14. He/She is outgoing/friendly(性格特征).

8、 15. He/She likes/loves/prefers/is interested in/is good at playing basketball.(兴趣爱好). 16. When I was free, I usually.,【结尾句】 17. Ive learned a lot from it. 18. You cant imagine how happy I am! 19. I am so proud that I made it. 20. I kept practicing and never gave up. 21. I am deeply moved by the thi

9、ngs that. 22. What an unforgettable thing it is in my life! 23. Thank you very much for everything youve done for me. 24. I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you. 25. I think we should do our best to help people who need help.,A True Self 提示：英语课上，同学们以“真实的自我”为 主题展开了激烈的讨论。每个人都有两 面性，能在不同的场合

10、表现出不同的状 态。请以“A True Self”为题，用英语 写一篇短文，介绍你自己。 要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词 数不少于60个； 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则 以零分计。,话题剖析,（2017河北改编）,【审题指导】 1. 文体：本文要求介绍自己，文体为说明文； 2. 时态：文章要求介绍自己的相关信息，主要用一般现在时，若涉其他，注意时态的交错转换； 3. 人称：本文要求写一篇自我介绍，应用第一人称； 4. 写作要点：开门见山介绍自己；介绍如何提高自己；介绍自己的优点; 5. 词数：不少于60个，不得出现真实姓名、校名。,【写作导图】,A True Self,ki

11、nd and helpful,Help my parents do more housework,Think about ways to solve difficulties,Sing and dance well,Like to make friends and share,A True Self Im a kind and helpful person. When I think back what Ive done before, I should help my parents do more housework. It is good for my future life by do

12、ing housework. When I meet something difficult, I like to think about the ways to solve them. I always help others. I can sing and dance well and I often give performances at our school parties. I like to make friends and share something good with others. Reading and taking exercise are my favorite.

13、 Do you want to make friends with me?,【普通习作】,【句子升格】 It is good for my future life by doing housework.(用动名词短语作主语改写句子） _ 2. When I meet something difficult, I like to think about the ways to solve them. （用face with改写句子） _ 3. I can sing and dance well and I often give performances at our school parties

14、.(用sothat改写句子） _,【范文升格】 A True Self Im a kind and helpful person. When I think back what Ive done before, I should help my parents do more housework. Doing housework is good for my future life. Faced with something difficult, I like to think about the ways to solve them. I always help others. I can

15、sing and dance well so that I often give performances at our school parties. I like to make friends and share something good with others. Reading and taking exercise are my favorite. Do you want to make friends with me?,写作练兵,_ is always with me 提示：在我们日渐变化的生活中，总有某个人或某个东西一直 陪在我们身边，埋藏在我们心里，在我们需要的时候及 时出

16、现，陪伴着我们一起成长。请以“_ is always with me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈这个人或者东 西陪伴你的经历，分享一下你的想法和感受。 要求：1. 请把题目补充完整； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 _,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下 信息： 1.半命题作文应首先将题目补充完整； 2.谈谈某人或某物陪伴你的经历，文体为 记叙文; 3.人称以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态主要 为一般过去时，抒发个人感受时用一般现在 时。 4.词数不少于60个，不得出现真实人名、校名 和地名。,【写作指导】,【高分范文

17、】 My mom is always with Me My mom loves me very much. She is the best mother in my heart because shes always with me whenever I need help. I once took part in an English speech contest and prepared a lot for it. Unfortunately, when I gave my speech on the stage, I was too nervous to speak fluently.

18、I felt really upset after the contest. My mom told me not to lose heart and encouraged me to practice harder. Now my English has improved a lot. And I can speak English with great confidence. My mom always supports me and Ill love her forever.,类别二 梦想计划类,话题剖析,近5年省卷书面表达针对梦想计划类作文共考查1次，如：2014省卷 “My Plan

19、 for the Coming School Year”写下学年计划。 【开头句】 1. I believe my life in future will be. 2. He/She wants to be.when he/she grows up. 3. If you want to make your dream come true, you should.,【中间句】 4. We should/ are supposed to. 5. Everyone can. 6. be going to do 7. decide to do 8. determine to do 9. make up

20、 ones mind to do 10. How time flies! 11. If we can do it as the rules, our dream will come true sooner or later. 【结尾句】 12. When I grow up, I want to. 13. Im looking forward to. 14. Where theres a will, theres a way.有志者，事竟成。,典例剖析,A Plan for How to Achieve My Dream 提示：难忘的三年初中生活即将结束，开学后同学们 将进入人生的另一个阶段,

21、踏入梦想开始的地方 高中，相信大家都已经提前制定好了学习 计划，为实现目标和理想而奋斗，请以“A Plan for How to Achieve My Dream”为题，写一篇 英文短文。 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少 于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分 计。 _,【审题指导】 文体：根据提示内容可知本文要求介绍实 现梦想的计划，因此文章为说明文； 2.时态：以一般将来时态为主； 3.人称：全文都是写我的梦想相关内容，人称 应该为第一人称； 4.写作要点：本文适合三段式写法：介绍自己的目标和理想是什么；介绍如何实现这个目标或者理想；总结； 5.词数：

22、不少于60个，不得出现真实姓名、校名。,【写作导图】,A Plan for How to Achieve My Dream,Enter a famous university,Work hard at all subjects,Help classmates,Take part in different kinds of activities,Take more exercise,Where theres a will, theres a way,Ways,【普通习作】 A Plan for How to Achieve My Dream Soon I will say goodbye to

23、my middle school life and become a high school student. My dream is to enter a famous university. So I have made a plan for my future. First, I will work hard at all my subjects. Second, I will try my best to help my classmates. I think I can get on well with all of them. Third, I will take part in

24、different kinds of activities and take more exercise to keep healthy. I am sure I will make greater progress in high school. Where theres a will, theres a way. As long as I stick to my dream, I will achieve it one day.,【句子升格】 Second, I will try my best to help my classmates.（用as much as possible改写句子

25、） _ 2. As long as I stick to my dream, I will achieve it one day. （用be sure和come true改写句子）_,【范文升格】 A Plan for How to Achieve My Dream Soon I will say goodbye to my middle school life and become a high school student. My dream is to enter a famous university. So I have made a plan for my future. Firs

26、t, I will work hard at all my subjects. Second, I will help my classmates as much as possible. I think I can get on well with all of them. Third, I will take part in different kinds of activities and take more exercise to keep healthy. I am sure I will make greater progress in high school. Where the

27、res a will, theres a way. As long as I stick to my dream, it is sure to come true one day.,My Weekend Plan 提示：周末是我们在繁忙的学习后放松的时间，一次野营，或是一次聚会这些都会让我们感惬意，忘掉周内的疲惫。请你以“My Weekend Plan”为题写一篇英语短文，与同学们分享自己的周末计划。 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少 于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分 计。 _ _,写作练兵,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息： 1.介绍周末

28、计划，文体为说明文； 2.本文介绍我的周末计划，人称主要用第一 人称；时态以一般将来时为主； 3.词数不少于60个，不得出现真实人名、校 名和地名。,【写作指导】,【高分范文】 My Weekend Plan The weekend is coming. Heres my plan for the weekend. On Saturday morning, Im going to watch TV to relax myself after a long weeks study. I like watching comedies and cartoons. On Saturday aftern

29、oon, Im going to a bookstore to buy some books. Reading is one of my hobbies. On Sunday, Im going to visit my grandparents because I miss them very much. Ill help them do some housework. After I come back, Ill do my homework to get ready for the next week. I am sure that I will have a wonderful week

30、end with this plan.,该类别在近5年省卷书面表达中没有涉及，但其他卷中有考查，所以掌握此类别很有必要，主要就某一观点提出建议。 【开头句】 1. There are some suggestions that. 2. If you follow these ways, I believe you can. 3. There is some useful advice about.,类别三 做法建议类,话题剖析,【中间句】 4. In my opinion, we should. 5. Youd better. 6. You arent supposed to. 7. Lets

31、 do. 8. It is important for us to. 9. Its a better choice to. 10. I suggest that you have a rest. 11. Remember to have lunch on time. 【结尾句】 12. I believe we can. 13. I wish you can obey the traffic rules. 14. Please take action！,典例剖析,How to Encourage Students to Read More 提示：现在很多中学生只注重文化课的学习，而忽略通过课外

32、阅读去提高自己的文学素养。请以 “How to Encourage Students to Read More”为题写一篇短文，谈谈应当如何鼓励中学生多读 书。 要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少 于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分 计。 _ _,【审题指导】 1.文体：本文是要求介绍如何鼓励中学生多 读书，文体属于说明文； 2.时态：写作时主要使用一般现在时； 3.人称：介绍学生们的读书现状用第三人 称，介绍建议时用第一人称； 4.写作要点：介绍学生们读书现状；给 出读书的建议；总结作者观点。 5.词数：不少于60个，不得出现真实人名、 校名。,【写作导

33、图】,How to Encourage Students to Read More,Reason,Reading books after class is necessary,Advice,Make good use of time,Read e-books or second-hand books,Get into a habit of one-hour reading,【普通习作】 How to Encourage Students to Read More Today, many students only focus on their grades. They usually spen

34、d little time on out-of-class reading. In my opinion, its necessary for students to read books after class. And in order to encourage students to do more reading, here is some advice. First, I think students should make good use of their time at school so that they can have time for reading after sc

35、hool. Second, reading e-books or second-hand books can save their costs. Last but not the least, they should get into a habit of doing one-hour reading every day. All in all, I believe these tips will help a lot if students follow them.,【句子升格】 Its necessary for students to read books after class.（用动

36、名词作主语改写句子） _ 2. I believe these tips will help a lot if students follow them.(用make a difference改写句子) _,【范文升格】 How to Encourage Students to Read More Today, many students only focus on their grades. They usually spend little time on out-of-class reading. In my opinion, reading books after class is n

37、ecessary for students. And in order to encourage students to do more reading, here is some advice. First, I think students should make good use of their time at school so that they can have time for reading after school. Second, reading e-books or second-hand books can save their costs. Last but not

38、 the least, they should get into a habit of doing one-hour reading every day. I believe these tips will make a difference if students follow them.,写作练兵,Save Water 提示：水对人类至关重要，但现在水污染变得越来越严重，工厂随意把污水排入河流、湖泊中，滥砍滥伐导致森林面积减少，水土流失严重，进一步加重了水资源的短缺。作为中学生的我们，应该怎么办？请以“Save Water”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。 要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面

39、整洁，词数不少 于60个； 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分 计。 _ _,【审题指导】细读所给文字作提示，提取以下信息： 本文是建议类文章，文体为说明文，可列举 出现的问题并提出建议，注意should, can等 情态动词的应用； 2.人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主； 3.词数不少于60个，要求字迹工整、语法正确、意思连贯、合乎逻辑，可以适当发挥。不得出现真实人名、校名。,【写作指导】,Save Water Water is very important to us. But many factories pour polluted water into rivers a

40、nd lakes. Its bad for the environment. People cut down so many trees that soil and water become less and less. What should we do? Firstly, we should take a shower quickly and turn off the tap in time so that we can save much water. Secondly, we should learn to recycle water as much as possible, for

41、example, after washing our faces, we can use the water to sweep the floor. Finally, we can hold some events or give speeches to let people know the importance of saving water. Its everyones duty to save water.,类别四 说明介绍类,近5年省卷书面表达对于说明介绍类写作角度没有涉及，但该类别属于命题青睐之选，所以应加以重视。 【开头句】 1. As far as I know, it . 2

42、. Nowadays, more and more people pay more attention to. 3. Id like to tell you something about. 4. Everything has two sides. It has both advantages and disadvantages.,话题剖析,【中间句】 5. Nowadays, it is generally/commonly believed that., but I wonder that. 6. My favorite season is. 7. Let me introduce. 8.

43、 One of the most important things is. 9. Man is now facing a big problem. which is becoming more and more serious. 【结尾句】 10. People used to.however, things are quite different today. 11. In short, we must work hard to make the world a better place.,My Friends Like the Different Music 提示：音乐是沟通的桥梁，是心灵

44、的纽带和梦想的承载，因此很多人都喜欢听音乐，但是不同的人喜爱的音乐风格和种类也不尽相同。介绍你的几个朋友喜欢的音乐种类及理由。请以“My Friends Like the Different Music”为题写一篇文 章。 要求：1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少 于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分 计。 _,典例剖析,【审题指导】 1.文体：要求介绍朋友喜欢的音乐，文体为说明文； 2.时态：介绍朋友喜欢的音乐时，叙述现在的事情时用一般现在时，叙述过去的事情时用 一般过去时； 3.人称：文中介绍几位朋友喜欢的音乐，以第三人称为主； 4.写作要求：点明主题：不同的

45、人喜欢不同的音乐；介绍几位朋友喜欢不同的音乐；总结； 5.词数：不少于60个，不得出现真实姓名、校 名。,【写作导图】,My Friends Like Different Music,Li Hua,Zhang Ming,Tang Shan,Zhao Tian,pop music that she can dance to,Jazz music, it is cool,Rock music, it is exciting,Soft music, it can make her relaxed,Music really makes our life beautiful,【普通习作】 My Frie

46、nds Like Different Music Music is important in our life. And different people enjoy different music. Now I will introduce some of my friends and their favorite music. Li Hua likes music that she can dance to, so she likes pop music very much. And Wang Lihong is her favorite singer. Zhang Ming likes

47、jazz music, because he thinks it is a kind of music that is very cool. Tang Shan is an outgoing girl. She likes rock music because it is very exciting. Her favorite singer is Wang Feng, because she likes singers who write their own songs. His wonderful lyrics often make her think a lot. Zhao Tian is

48、 a quiet girl. She likes listening to soft music that can make her relaxed. In a word, music really makes our life beautiful.,【句子升格】 Music is important in our life.（用playpart改写句子） _ 2. His wonderful lyrics often make her think a lot.（用定语从句改写句子） _ 3. In a word, music really makes our life beautiful.（用enrich改写句子） _,【范文升格】 My Friends Like Different Music Music plays an important part in our life. And different people enjoy differ