基础写作之-人物介绍.ppt

1、基础写作之,Character introduction,人物介绍,1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概况) 2. appearance, character (外表、性格) 3. education (教育背景) 4. big events in his or her life (in order of time) (经历、生平) 5. evaluation (评价),写 作 提 示,Guess the person described in the following sentences,Born on the 18th of January, 1

2、979 in Taiwan, which is a beautiful island of our country, he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When his first album （专辑）was released（发行） in 2000, he got the attention of the world. His

3、 popularity sky-rocketed(急速上升), and he has received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R 社会活动家 social activist 【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,Born into a rich family on November 2, 1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese sociologist and social activist, passed away due to disease in Be

4、ijing on April 24, 2005. When going to college, he first chose to study medicine but then changed his mind. Between 1930 and 1935, he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education ，where he received his doctors degree. After 1938, he once taught in Tsinghua University

5、 and Peking University. Fei, who studied hard all his whole life, devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of Chinas rural economy.,How do you do the Basic Writing ?,The suggested steps:,1. 审题: 确定文体、人称和时态,2. 整合信息 :把所有内容整合成5句,3. 翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.连句成篇,5. 检查,检查(How to correct?),1、是否恰好五句话？ 2、是否每句都含必要信息？ 3、可否自由发挥？ 4、pants纠错原则： 1) pattern 2) a