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1、How to Write a Letter of Asking for Help,讲评作文,1 英语听力 2 英语口语 3 英语书面表达 4 英语阅读理解 5 语法 6 单词 7 词汇量,1 English listening 2 spoken English 3 written English 4 reading comprehension 5 grammar 6 word 7 vocabulary,Useful expressions：,8 面临 9 不擅长 10 掌握 11 寻求帮助 12 寻求建议 13 给某人关于建议 14 表示感谢,8 be faced with be poor i

2、n master ask for help 12 ask for advice / suggestions 13 give/offer sb advice on 14 be grateful,假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Tom写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下： 1.本人简介。 2.求助内容。 3.希望得到Tom的帮助。 注意：1.词数80左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,写作步骤： 一、审题。 二、写作。 三、检查修改。,一、审 题：,1. 审文体 2. 审人称 3. 审时态 4. 审要点 5. 谋篇,Bef

3、ore-writing,假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Tom写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下： 1.本人简介。 2.求助内容。 3.希望得到Tom的帮助。 注意：1.词数80左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,审文体： 2. 审人称： 3.审时态：,求助信(a letter for help)。,以I为主体人称,一般现在时为主，其它时态为辅。,4.审要点： 5. 谋篇：三段法模式 第一段：Purpose: 第二段：Body: 第三段：Conclusion:,求助,求助原因, 介绍情况。,表达期待或谢意。,自我介绍

4、 说明写信目的：寻求外籍老师Tom的帮助 说明缘由：在英语学习方面遇到一些难题 求助内容：英语学习方面的困难，请求帮助 展望未来，表达谢意，期盼回复,二、写作： 1. 选词组织要点。 2. 扩词成句。 3. 整理成篇。,While-writing,自我介绍,Im,a student in your school.,Im Li Hua, a Senior3 student in your school. 我是李华，学校一名高三学生。,写信目的,I am writing to.,I am writing to ask for your help. 我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。,说明缘由：在英语学习方

5、面遇到一些难题,某方面困难的表达方式： I have some difficulties/ trouble in doing I find it hard for me to Its quite difficult for me to,I have some difficulties/trouble in learning English. I find it hard for me to learn English. Its quite difficult for me to learn English. 我在英语学习方面遇到一些难题。,求助内容：英语学习方面的困难，请求帮助,阐明请求内容的

6、表达方式： I wonder if you could Would you like to .,某方面困难的表达方式： I have some difficulties/ trouble in doing I find it hard for me to Its quite difficult for me to,recite the text,remember the words,learn the grammar,speak English fluently,increase the vocabulary,do the reading comprehension,What problems

7、 do you have in English study？,eg. I find it hard for me to recite the text. Would you like to introduce some ways to recite it more easily？,展望未来，表达谢意，期盼回复,展望自己获得建议后可能会取得的进步 I am sure I can I believe that I can 我相信。,I believe that I can improve my English with your help. 我相信在你的帮助下我能提升我的英语水平。 I am su

8、re I can make great progress with your help. 我相信在你的帮助下我能取得巨大进步。,表达谢意,I would _ if _. I would _ it if _. 如果你能帮助我我将不胜感激。,be grateful,you could help me,appreciate,you could help me,期待回复,Looking forward to your reply.,整理成篇(句式多样化) 注意使用过渡性词汇,Dear Tom, Im Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in your school. I am wri

9、ting to_ (写作目的及说明缘由） At present, I am faced with two main problems. First of all, _and put them into use. In addition, I feel so nervous in front of my classmates that I cant say a word in English. Therefore, I hope you can offer me some advice on how to remember the words and how to overcome my fea

10、r of speaking English.(描述困难，请求帮助） _ _(展望未来，表达谢意） Looking forward to your reply.（期待回复） Yours, Li Hua,ask for your help,I am having trouble in learning English now.,for,I find it quite hard to remember words,I believe that I can improve my English with your help.,I would appreciate it if you could hel

11、p me.,三、检查修改： 检查单词拼写、标点符号等。 检查要点是否遗漏。 检查句子结构是否正确。 估计字数是否符合要求。,Practice,（2011山东卷） 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： a询问Tom的生活和学习情况； b谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； c告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。 注意：a词数：80左右； b可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,Step 1：构思,一般现在时,第一、第二人称,Tom上个月来到北京学习，

12、询问Tom的生活和学习情况。,我将去参加英语演讲比赛，在等方面遇到了困难。,打算赛后去看Tom,求助，感谢,Step 2：提笔 Dear Tom, It has been a month since you studied in Beijing. (问候) _? I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer. However, （搜集资料困难）_ . Meanwhile, （语言运用困难）_ in using Engli

13、sh properly. _, I may be too nervous to speak in face of thousands of audience. （求助并感谢）_ _. Hopefully, the great effort I am making will pay off. I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. Yours, Li Hua,Step 3：注意过渡，衔接，检查文章 （如时态，主谓一致等）,How is everything going,I find it hard to collect us

14、eful materials.,I still have some trouble,Besides,I would appreciate it if you could,help me,假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下： 1. 作业多，没有时间运动。 2. 压力大，难以入睡。 3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,Homework：,Dear Kate, I am Li Hua, a S

15、enior 3 student. _ _ _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua,Dear Kate, I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, I have been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I am writing to ask you for help. I am encountering some problems which

16、trouble me a lot . First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectations from the teachers and my parents make me extremely stressed because I dont want to let them down.,What troubles me most is that it is difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me so