中考英语作文写作指导课件.ppt

1、中 考 专 题 复 习 课,Writing,检查口语,爱好与学业 1.迈克疯狂地迷恋足球，喜爱看足球比赛， 当然也喜爱踢足球； 2. 放学后，他经常花1个小时左右的时间和 同学们一起 踢足球； 3. 他的父母不喜欢这一点，要求他在5点半 之前回家；他认为在爱好上花些时间是重 要的，希望能得到父母的支持。,分析结构,Hobbies and studies Mike is crazy about football! He loves watching football matches. Of course, he loves playing football too. He often spend

2、s about one hour playing football with his classmates after school. His parents dont like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30. He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies. He wishes he could have his parents support.,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,Discussion,How

3、 to Write English Compositions,集句成段,组段成篇,审清题意,连词成句,抓住要点,抄写规范,Writing skillssix steps,自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些 同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校 园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你 用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。 内容要点包括： 注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups social activities, do sports, net bar,

4、第一步:审清题意,认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息,具体做法：用笔勾画,自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：,注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数,主题,体裁,人称,结构,时态,字数,已知信息,未知信息,以一般现在时为主,第二步： 列出写作提纲（Outline）。,具体做法： 根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,Introduction Main body Conc

5、lusion,problems,opinions,suggestions,Write an outline,花太多时间在兴趣爱好上 迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏 -,-,合理安排时间 参加兴趣小组 -,List some keywords about problems. Phrases: _ _ 2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: _ _ 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _,第三步：抓住要点，列关键词,not good for study and health,Spend

6、-on, hobbies, be crazy about,- - -,Make sentences with the keywords about problems. Sentences: _ _ 2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. Sentences: _ _ 3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentences: _ _,第四步：连词成句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and

7、cant finish their homework on time.,I dont think its good for our study and health.,第五步：集句成段，组段成篇,There are many things we can do. we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in

8、some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.,However, how can we make better use of our spare time?,For example,Besides these,And also,we,We,注意添加主题句，连接词！,抓住要点，列关键词,Problems be crazy about (7B4) play computer games (7A1) watch too much

9、 TV (8A1) spend too much time on their hobbies (9A3) refuse to do homework (9A3) spend - on (7A2) Opinions not good for our health and study (7A2) focus on (9A3) Pay more attention to (9A1) Suggestions plan time carefully (9A3) achieve a balance between study and bobbies (9A3) take part in different

10、 after school activities (7A2) join interest groups (8A2) do some sports (7A4) do some housework(7B5),Lets enjoy our own compositions!,二、评分档次： 一档文(17-20分) 写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化， 有复杂结构。 二档文(13-16分) 基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量 语法错误。 三档文(9-12分)写出大部内容要点，语言基本通顺有一些语法和拼写错误。 四档文(5-8分) 写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不通，影响理解

11、。 五档文(0-4分)言不达意，不知所云。,中考英语书面表达评分标准,一、评分原则： 1.短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大 错扣1分。 2.通篇人称错误，统扣2分。 3.拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的 错误为小错。2个小错相当 于1个大错。 4.相同错误，只扣一次。字数不足90词扣3分。 5.文中若出现自己及老师、学校等真实姓名扣3分。 6. 书写潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。,范文展示,Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How

12、 to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”. Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats

13、 worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We dont think its good for their study and health. However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve

14、 a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our

15、life rich and colorful!,The structure of the article Introduction Main body Conclusion,Summary,写作： 第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息 第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成句、集句成段、组段成篇）,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,查错改错,Homework,复习本课要点 背诵精彩范文,祝同学们在中考中取得好成绩！,Thank You!,Your advice is welcome!,变换句式,并列句,复合句 结果状语从句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their homework on time.,Some stu