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3、交际内容,本次口语交际是要求我们把自己搜集到的有关大自然给人类启示的资料，自己了解到的有关发明创造的事例或者自己从动植物身上得到的启示，用自己的话表达出来，和同学交流。,交际指导,1.交流前，我们可以查阅相关书籍或上网搜集资料，也可以向父母、师长请教相关的问题。,2.将搜集到的资料进行整理，拟好发言提纲。你可以介绍搜集到的有关大自然启示的资料，也可以谈谈自己了解到的发明创造的事例，还可以谈谈自己从大自然中得到的启示或自己的发明创造。交流时要把从大自然中的什么地方受到了什么的启示说清楚，要把人类发明创造的事物名称说出来。,3.说的时候注意语言简洁明了，通俗易懂，让听众容易理解、接受。,交际示范,

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6、朱雨宁：我搜集到的是植物给人类启示的资料。由于不少植物对环境的变化都非常敏感，并通过颜色、形状、生长习性的变化表现出来。人们就依靠对植物状态的监测，来对有害物质进行预警。这为现代战争中的环境监测提供了意想不到的帮助。在战争地带前进的士兵，正尝试用电子装置来监测植物，以此判断当地是否遭受过化学毒气的攻击。,张涛：我来说说我搜集到的资料。科学家将对蝴蝶色彩的研究运用到军事防御上。在二战期间，德军包围了列宁格勒，企图用轰炸机摧毁其军事目标和其他防御设施。苏联昆虫学家施万维奇根据蝴蝶的色彩在花丛中不易被发现的道理，提出在军事设施上覆盖蝴蝶花纹般的伪装。因此，尽管德军费尽心机，但列宁格勒的军事基地仍安然

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15、心驱使我捉来一只小蚂蚱放在蜘蛛网上。,简单交代事情的起因。,佳作欣赏,不一会儿，从墙缝里爬出一只大蜘蛛。它很快就发现了蚂蚱。可是它并不急着吃到嘴的美餐，只是吐出一股白色的丝，把蚂蚱缠了起来，便回洞了。我百思不解：蜘蛛为什么不吃掉蚂蚱呢？我又继续观察起来。可等了好久，蜘蛛就是不出来。,对蜘蛛动作的描写很细致。小作者心理活动的刻画很生动。,第二天，我发现小蚂蚱还在网上。走近了仔细一看，原来只是一只空壳。我非常奇怪，蜘蛛为什么不吃壳呢？后来我翻阅了很多资料，终于在十万个为什么里找到了答案。原来，蜘蛛捕到猎物后，会先将猎物用丝缠绕起来，再吐出一种消化液，注入猎物体内，这种消化液可以溶解由蛋白质组成的昆

16、虫的,自己动手查阅资料找到答案，看来小作者是个很有心的孩子。,内部组织。这样昆虫死亡以后，就会变成汁液。蜘蛛就可大口大口地吮吸了。但是昆虫的外壳不是蛋白质组成的，所以蚂蚱的外壳被完整地留在网上。 这次意外的发现不仅让我了解了蜘蛛吃食的奥秘，也使我明白了一个道理：只要你留心，生活处处皆学问。看似平凡的大自然，实际上有着无穷的奥秘等待着我们去探索、去发现。,点明中心，激发探索自然奥秘的兴趣。,总评： 这篇习作的小作者观察的现象很小，但是揭示的道理很深刻，以小见大，很有特色。习作以自己的“好奇心”为线索，通过几天的观察发现问题，通过努力找到了问题的答案，最后揭示中心：只要你留心，生活处处皆学问。写作

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