人教版英语Unit+2+Ill+help+clean+up+the+city+park写作课.ppt

1、Topic Revision,Unit 2 Ill help clean up the city park 单元话题复习写作课,volunteers,One finger cannot lift a small stone .,Many hands make light work.,团结就是力量,人多力量大,Id like to cheer up sick kids in the hospital,sing and dance,tell stories,cook some delicious food,I would like to,because I like,Id like to visi

2、t old people at the old peoples home,clean their rooms,read newspaper,chat with old people,I could volunteer my time to,for caring old people is our Chinese tradition.,Id like to help clean up the city parks,pick up the rubbish,sweep the roads,put more dustbin,I could help,then the world will be bet

3、ter and better.,Id like to help stop hunger at the food bank,giving out food,donating some money,providing some jobs,I get to spend time,I wish everyone can lead a happy life.,Id like to help students in the school,helping students with their schoolwork,I love , I want to put this love to good use b

4、y,painting,volunteering in an after-school study program,1,2,3,4,5,6,Competition,Id like to ,Because I could volunteer my time to , for I could help , then. I love , I want to put this love to good use by I get to spend my time ,1. Come up with a plan, cant put off. 2. Write down all the ideas, then

5、 decide which idea is best. 3. Put up signs. 4. Hand out the advertisements. 5. Call up many people to come,Many hands make light work,Can you write?,Task:如果你有机会成为一名志愿者去贡献爱心，你愿意帮助别人吗？你会选择做什么工作？为什么？怎么做？写一篇短文, 80个词左右。,(审),中考 第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思达

6、。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,List the key points（列文章要点）,Opening: （开头）tell the main idea,I would like to cheer up sick kids in the hospital.,Body: （主体） how to do it,I would like to sing for kids.,I would like to h

7、elp them with their homework.,I will set up a volunteer project.,Ending: （结尾）sum up,I will be a great volunteer.,I believe if I am a volunteer, I will be a great one.,Good model:,I would like to cheer up sick kids in the hospital.,I would like to sing for them.,I could help them with their homework.

8、,I will set up a volunteer project.,I will be a great volunteer.,I like helping people. If I have a chance to be a volunteer, I would like to go to hospital and cheer up the sick kids.,The old saying “Many hands make light work” reminds us that we can try to help others in need.,I like singing, I wa

9、nt to put this love to good use by singing.,First of all,Whats more,I would like to help them with their homework. Because I am good at teaching.,Finally,I could volunteer my time to set up a volunteer project to help them. I will hand out some ads to call more people to join me.,Personally,If every

10、one can share a little love, the world will be better and better!,列,加,连,美,First,second,third,finally Firstlysecondlythenat last however, but, then, because, now that, therefore, as a result,sing and dance tell some interesting stories cook some delicious food,clean their rooms read newspaper chat wi

11、th old people,pick up the rubbish sweep the roads put more dustbin,give out food donate some money provide some jobs,help with their schoolwork Paint volunteer in an after school study program,Write by yourself,Id like to ,Because I could volunteer my time to , for I could help , then. I love , I wa

12、nt to put this love to good use by I get to spend my time ,Show time,Judge by yourself,第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,Summary,We learn: 1. How to offer help. 2. How