unit7 writing.ppt

1、Unit 7 writing school rules,书面表达,作文赋分,第五档 能写出全部或绝大部分内容要点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。,第四档 能写出大部分内容要点；语言基本无误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。,第三档 能写出部分内容要点；语言有较多错误，尚能达意。,第二档 只能写出少部分内容要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子可读。,第一档 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词。,书面表达六步,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,when where who why what how,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形

2、成基本语义单位,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,拼写有误吗？主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣15分,课堂练习,School rules,1.Dont eat in the classroom ！2.Dont listen to the music in the classroom ！3.Dont be late for school!4.Dont speak loudly in classroom!5.Clean the classroom every day!6.Have t

3、o wear school uniform!7.Respect your teachers!8.Get on well with the classmates!9.Protect the environment!10.Be polite.,We shouldnt run in the classroom.We mustnt sleep in the class.We should speak English on the English class.We should switch off the lights before we leave the classroom.We shouldnt

4、 shout in the classroom,英语中表示过渡的词语 （1）表并列关系的过渡词: and, also， as well, as well as, firstly,secondly,.last. in the end first,then,next,afterward,finally,（2）表递进关系的过渡词: besides, in addition（加之，除之外）, moreover(此外，而且), whats more，（3）表转折对比的过渡词： but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, although,（4）表原

5、因的过渡词: because, because of, since, as, for, （5）表结果的过渡词: so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then,（6）表陈述事实的过渡词: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact（7）表进行举例说明的过渡词: for instance, for example, like, such as （8）表总结的过渡词: in a word(总之，简言之), in general, in short(总之), above all,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,Like eve

6、ry country has laws. Our school also has school rules. Students must get to school on time. They should wear school uniforms on weekdays. They shouldnt bring some things to school, such as, dangerous knives, cell phones and so on. They should respect each other and they shouldnt fight. If they go to school by bik