高考英语写作之邀请信定.ppt

1、基于高考范文指导下 的写作训练专题 邀请信,An invitation letter,What does it impress you?,Why is writing so tough?,Input,Output,2004-2015十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析,Brainstorming Definition: An invitation letter is a type of letter that is to invite the receiver to take part in certain activity. It can be formal and informal.,必备句型:Be

2、ginning 1. Its a great honor for me to invite you to 2. I take the pleasure to invite you to 3. Im writing to invite you to 4. Id like to invite you to 5. May I ask you to consider coming to.? 6. I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in,必备句型: Ending 1.Im looking forward to hearin

3、g from you. 2.We hope that you would come and look forward to seeing you. 3. If you are able to come with us ,please let us know and we will wait for you. 4. Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come? 5.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.,Model(模板)： Dear _，

4、I would like to invite you to join us to _for_ (内容) on/at _ (时间)at/in _ (地点). We would be honored/delighted to have you there with us. The _(活动) will start at _ (具体时间). Its about_(主题).We will_.(活动具体内容) At around _ (时间), we will_ (具体安排) We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitat

5、ion. Looking forward to receiving your reply Yours sincerely， Li Ming,Characteristics Beginning(Paragraph1)：Writing purpose. Body(Paragraph2)：Details of the activity, including the theme, time, place, and some requirements etc. Ending(Paragraph3)：Politely express the gratitude and expectation.,Head

6、(Aim),Body (Details),End(Expectation),What makes a good invitation letter?,Discussion,揭开高考真题神秘面纱：2015年全国卷1 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 1.栏目介绍； 2.稿件内容； 3.稿件长度：约400词汇 4.交稿日期：6月28日前注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好。,提炼要点：,1.写信约稿（目的）； 2.“外国文化”栏目介绍； 3.稿件内容：美国节日风俗和

7、中学生 生活的短文；4.稿件长度：约400词汇 ；5.交稿日期：6月28日前； （2-5：具体内容）6.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Appreciating （品味佳作),要点提炼： 1.写信约稿: 2.“外国文化”栏目介绍: 3.稿件内容：美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文： 4.稿件长度：约400词汇 5.交稿日期：6月28日前 6.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ,25,Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” sect

8、ion in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend

9、their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,25,Content,Everything nee

10、ded included which is related to your view. (内容要完整),Everything needed included which is related to your view. (内容要完整),Good beginning and ending (好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) * Proper linking words between sentences,Everything needed should be included. (内容完整）,Dear Pete

11、r, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the cultur

12、e in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine.Could we have your

13、article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,Step1(head)： Writing purpose,Step2 (body)：Well-organized, smoothly and clearly developed.,Step 3(end)：Expectation,Structure,*GoodEverything needed included which is related tEeeEEEEEo your view. (内容要完整) tween sentences,Goo

14、d beginning and ending. （好的开头和结尾）,Well organized and smoothly developed. （结构合理、行文流畅）,Proper linking words between sentences. （恰当的连接词）,Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us student

15、s.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American h

16、igh school students.You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,25,* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns. (词语的准确运用和句式的

17、富于变化) * No Chinglish. (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes . (避免语法错误),Language,2010年全国卷1 英语书面表达（满分25分） 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信. 英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然 时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 联系人：李华（电话484876655） 欢迎大家光临 注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。 Dear Ms.S

18、mith, _ Best wishes, Li Hua,Dear Ms.Smith, I am LiHua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincere hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and a judge. The contest, the theme of it is “Man and Nature”, will be holding in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 i

19、n the afternoon of June 15. Whats more, there will have ten students take part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give we some precious remarks. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invite. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to receive your reply.

20、Best wishes, Li Hua,15,2010年全国卷1 英语书面表达（满分25分） 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信. 英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然 时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 联系人：李华（电话484876655） 欢迎大家光临 注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。 Dear Ms.Smith, _ Best wishes, Li Hua,Dear Ms.Smith, I am LiHua,

21、the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincere hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge. The contest, the theme of it is “Man and Nature”, will be holding in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 in the afternoon of June 15. Whats more, there will h

22、ave ten students take part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give we some precious remarks. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invite. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to receive your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua,【分析】基本表达清楚；时态运用恰当；采用了连接手法；内容连贯；准

23、确性不够。,15,A good essay should be,1. complete （要点齐全） 2. coherent（行文连贯） 3. accurate（用词准确） 4. fluent/clear（表达流畅） 5. various (句式多样) 6. neat（书写工整）,Concluding,Strike while the iron is hot.,2015年全国卷2书面表达 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括： 1.出发及返回时间； 2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.结尾已为你写好。,Strike while the iron is hot.,2015年全国卷2书面表达 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括： 1.出发及返回时间； 2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.结尾已为你写好。,Step 1 analyze the requ