高中英语作文 概要写作入门 (精品).ppt

1、Summary Writing,阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容概要。 We shouldnt judge a person by their appearance but we do. In fact, the experts say that when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds. But what do we look at? One of the most important things is

2、clothes, but it isnt the brand of clothes that people wear that is important. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion. Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform. Why? A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that

3、 they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too. If all the students wear uniforms, they cant judge each other because of their clothes. It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable

4、. However, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear. If we visit a doctor, we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctors white coat. When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear

5、 suits or dresses. Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol, to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance, and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination. I

6、n fact, a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes. But can our clothes really tell people what we are like? Maybe not, but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment. When people

7、see us in the right clothes, they think we are serious about what we are doing. Furthermore, if we are clean, smart and polite, people will have confidence in us.,Para.1,Para.3,Para.2,Para.4,What is a Summary?,A shortened passage (60words) Retain the key points of the original one A restatement in y

8、our own words A readable continuous whole,Original Passage,Summary,Reading for Structure,How many parts can we divide the passage? Para 1：Part1 argument para2: evidence/example para3: evidence/example,Part 2 supporting,para4: Part3 conclusion,How to Get Key Points?,3.,1. : topic sentence,2. : topic

9、sentence +,examples,supporting ideas,Find,Combine,Summarize,Read for Key Points,Para.1 We shouldnt judge a person by their appearance but we do. In fact, the experts say that when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds. But what do we lo

10、ok at? One of the most important things is clothes, but it isnt the brand of clothes that people wear that is important. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.,_,_,_,_,Point 1,Read for Key Points,Para.2 Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their stude

11、nts to wear a uniform. Why? A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too. If all the students wear uniforms, they cant judge each oth

12、er because of their clothes. It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Point 2,Read for Key Points,Para. 3 However, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear. If

13、we visit a doctor, we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctors white coat. When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses. Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol, to make themselves easily identifiable to non-po

14、lice officers or their colleagues who require assistance, and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination. In fact, a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes.,_,_,_,_,_,_

15、,_,_,Point 3,_,_,Read for Key Points,Para.4 But can our clothes really tell people what we are like? Maybe not, but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment. When people see us in the right clothes, they think we are serious about what we are doing. Furthermore, if we are clean,

16、 smart and polite, people will have confidence in us.,_,_,_,_,_,_,Point 4,List the Key Points,Paraphrase (say or write in a different way),Alex likes playing football and he likes basketball,too. Alex likes playing not only football but also basketball. Not only does Alex like playing foortball but

17、also basketball. Not only is Alex fond of football but also . In addition to football, Alex loves playing . .,How to Paraphrase?,2. use synonyms(同义),3. summarize examples (概括),5. combine sentences(并句),4. sometimes change the voice (语态),1. change the sentence structure(句型),List the Key Points,Paraphr

18、ase Key Points,1. Wearing the right clothes is important because people look at our clothes.,2. Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave good first impressions.,3. Wearing proper clothes is important for first impressions.,Paraphrase Key Points,1. Schools ask stude

19、nts to wear a uniform because it helps them in many ways, such as being serious about their study.,2. Students are required to wear a uniform because it benefits in various ways, such as being serious about their study.,Paraphrase Key Points,1. However, not only schools but also places such as hospi

20、tals, banks, police stations and some companies want people to dress in a certain way.,2. Besides students, other people who work for hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies are also supposed to wear uniforms because of convenience.,Paraphrase Key Points,1. Our clothes can show our atti

21、tude and make people have confidence in us.,2. Our clothes represent our attitude and help us win trust from others.,How to Connect?,but, yet, however, though,. as well as, in addition to,not only.but also,together with,besides,moreover,futhermore,. thus, therefore， as a result,consequently,. meanwh

22、ile,on the other hand,on the contrary,contrast with,. firstly/secondly/finally/. because (of) ,due to,in view of,on account of,. for example/instance,such as,and so on in short, in conclusion,in a word,all in all. ,Connect Key Points,For example,In conclusion,Write and Edit,Wearing proper clothes is important for peoples first impressions.(要点1) For example,